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#1231

Posted 29 June 2012 - 08:16 AM

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Thanks, I'll wait for it. smile.gif

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Posted 29 June 2012 - 09:55 AM Edited by lee_atsugai, 29 June 2012 - 10:03 AM.

Hello everyone. Today, I'm going to review a mission pack called The Story of A Soldier by -S-hark 21 . He requested 4 missions from Chapter 2 to be reviewed. The topic leading to the missions:
http://www.gtaforums...howtopic=503616

Here's the review:

Writings: Very Good - There are some grammar errors, but I didn't found any writing mistakes in the missions. Nice using on the text coloring
Presentation: Excellent - Awesome cutscene angles, the actors are given perfect animation, making the mission more lively and have a lot of action in it.

'Ghost Town' War

Length: Good - It can be done in 5 minutes. Allen and his team must help James' army to eliminate the SAT in 'Ghost Town'
Difficulty: Hard - The first part of the shootout should be easy. The hard part is when the enemies are attacking from West and the East. They carry some powerful gun like Shotguns and Rifles and have medium health
Variety: Excellent - The mission contains a huge variety of vehicles, objects, weapons and random actors as the SAT

Trouble in SF

Length: Good - It can be done in 6 minutes. Ryan send Allen and his team to San Fierro because the SAT already take over San Fierro
Difficulty: Very Hard - The enemies have medium health, some of them have high accuracies and have powerful weapons, and the last part of the mission requires you to be fast, otherwise you're a dead man
Variety: Very Good - As the mission contain a lot of different cars, huge variety on actors and various weapons from SAT arsenals, but no object used in this mission

Getting to City Hall

Length: Short - It can be done in 3 minutes. Ryan finally contact Allen's team. He send Allen and his team to reinforce James in the city hall.
Difficulty: Too Hard! - The enemies have medium health, some of them have medium accuracies, some of them carry some powerful weapons, like RPG, Shotguns and Desert Eagle. The escaping part leave you no mistake in riding your bike, otherwise you're a dead man in seconds.
Variety: Good - As the mission contains low variety on actors and vehicles, one object, but various weapons from SAT Arsenals

Saving James

Length: Good - It can be done in 6 minutes. Allen and Sullivan finally arrive at the City Hall, helping james before he got killed by the SAT
Difficulty: Hard - The enemies have low and medium health with high accuracies. Some of them carry powerful weapons, such as Shotguns and Rifle.
Variety: Excellent - There are large variety of actors, vehicles, weapons and objects are used in the mission.

Overall, these missions are very well made. Good choices on the mission and good use on placing those objects. The difficulty can be lowered a bit, especially in mission "Getting to City Hall". It can make some players frustrated when playing the mission. Last word, good job and keep up the good work icon14.gif

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Posted 29 June 2012 - 10:48 AM

Awesome review buddy. Good job, I'll add it on my topic. icon14.gif

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Posted 29 June 2012 - 10:52 AM

QUOTE (-S-hark21 @ Friday, Jun 29 2012, 10:48)
Awesome review buddy. Good job, I'll add it on my topic. icon14.gif

Thanks biggrin.gif

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Posted 29 June 2012 - 11:03 AM

Cool review, I'll add them soon in my topic.
One more thing, it's Viktor Reznov, not Victor.
And thanks for the review, glad we have an active reviewer. biggrin.gif

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Posted 29 June 2012 - 11:04 AM

QUOTE (xGhostx @ Friday, Jun 29 2012, 11:03)
Cool review, I'll add them soon in my topic.
One more thing, it's Viktor Reznov, not Victor.
And thanks for the review, glad we have an active reviewer. biggrin.gif

Little typo. Going to edit it biggrin.gif

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Posted 29 June 2012 - 01:54 PM

Can you show me a review of this mission pack, thanks a lot smile.gif

http://www.gtaforums...howtopic=509631


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Posted 29 June 2012 - 02:20 PM

QUOTE (The - Hunter @ Friday, Jun 29 2012, 13:54)
Can you show me a review of this mission pack, thanks a lot smile.gif

http://www.gtaforums...howtopic=509631

I'll do it, but later wink.gif

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Posted 29 June 2012 - 02:26 PM

Ok thanks, I am not in a hurry tounge.gif

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Posted 30 June 2012 - 03:13 AM

Hello everyone, today I'm going to review a mission pack called The Shade of Destiny by The - Hunter . He requested whole missions in this mission pack to be reviewed. The topic leading to the missions:
http://www.gtaforums...howtopic=509631

Here's the review:

Writings: Good - There are a lot of grammar and writing mistakes in the missions, but it still understandable.
Presentation: Excellent - The cutscene generally have great angles and perfectly timed and focused cutscene make the mission more exciting

A Strange Homicide

Length: Decent - It can be done in 4 minutes. We'll play as a police officer, found a dead body near the river
Difficulty: Easy - The mission only consist of driving around, no action involved
Variety: Good - There are low variety on actors, cars and objects. Weapons only included Shotgun

Ricky Cold

Length: Short - It can be done in 3 minutes. After the scientist check the car, it's suspected that the car belongs to Ricky Cold
Difficulty: Easy - Only driving from the police station, the farm and head back to police station
Variety: Decent - As the mission consist on 4 different characters/skin, 3 different cars but no objects are seen in this mission

James Connor Returns in the City

Length: Decent - It can be done in 4 minutes. In this mission, the main character meet his old friend from the city
Difficulty: Easy - No action, only driving from Dillimore to Blueberry
Variety: Could Be Better - There are only low variety on cars and actors. No objects are seen in this mission

Ricky Cold Dead

Length: Short - It can be done in 3 minutes. This mission shows how Tommy shot by Ricky, and explains more about the current situation
Difficulty: Easy - This time, you must defeat a clown that carrying a chainsaw. You'll be given a shovel
Variety: Good - There are low variety on actors and weapons, but large variety on objects

Shock

Length: Short - It can be done in 3 minutes. This shows a flashback from Tommy's past
Difficulty: Easy - Only cutscene and walking around
Variety: Decent - Clown, Doctors, a medic, police officers and cars are seen in this mission, but no objects

The Truth

Length: Good - It can be done in 6 minutes. In this mission, you will find the truth behind the strange homicide.
Difficulty: Hard - You'll be given a rifle while your ally will carry a Desert Eagle. The enemies use same weapons, SMG. They have low-medium health with high accuracies.
Variety: Good - As the mission contains low variety on objects, actors and cars. There are SMG, Rifle, Silence 9mm, Knife and Desert Eagle used in this mission

The Clown

Length: Very Good - It can be done in 8 minutes. This is the final mission in this mission pack. Tommy wakes up from his dream. The clown tell Tommy to go to Mount Chilliad hideout and retrieve the notebook
Difficulty: Hard - Firstly we climb up Mount Chilliad using a car. The hard part when the enemies come and started to shoot you. They have very high accuracies, but their headshot are turned on
Variety: Good - There are a lot of different characters, 3 weapons (9mm, Desert Eagle and Chainsaw), a few vehicles and objects are seen in this mission

The Clown (Alternative Ending)

Length: Excellent - It can be done in 10 minutes. This is the alternate ending on this mission pack. Clara called you to go to Mount Chilliad entrance. After that, you must raid the enemies hideout in the forest
Difficulty: Very Hard - The enemies have low-medium health and very high accuracies, but with headshot on. The second shootout will include enemies in moving cars, requires you to be fast
Variety: Good - There are a lot of different objects inside the house, low variety on actors and vehicles.

Overall, the missions are good. In the first 4 missions, there are no action involved in the missions. But for the rest of the missions, the gunfight can make the players want to know what happen next. The enemies accuracies can be lowered a bit because it can make the mission too hard to complete. About the writings, you should learn better English, but it still at understandable level. The author should keep up the good work icon14.gif

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Posted 30 June 2012 - 05:45 AM

hello is anybody want to review my storyline efsa chapter 1

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#1242

Posted 30 June 2012 - 05:49 AM

QUOTE (jaban @ Saturday, Jun 30 2012, 08:45)
hello is anybody want to review my storyline efsa chapter 1

Provide a link to it, otherwise nobody even thinks about it.

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Posted 30 June 2012 - 05:51 AM

here's a link

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Posted 01 July 2012 - 06:54 AM

can you review my topic, JF??

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Posted 01 July 2012 - 06:55 AM

Give them the link.

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Posted 01 July 2012 - 06:59 AM

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Posted 01 July 2012 - 07:05 AM

Aw no, I mean the link of the missions that you want to be reviewed, how can they review a topic?

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Posted 01 July 2012 - 07:14 AM

QUOTE (xGhostx @ Sunday, Jul 1 2012, 07:05)
Aw no, I mean the link of the missions that you want to be reviewed, how can they review a topic?

Well, there's a link to the missions in the topic tounge.gif

Anyway, I'll take sayooj and jaban request

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Posted 03 July 2012 - 05:21 PM

im waiting to be part of this reviewing community. my initiation is to review a mission so does anyone have any they want reviewing.

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#1250

Posted 04 July 2012 - 12:58 AM Edited by xGhostx, 04 July 2012 - 04:48 AM.

@Cammi
I'm just gonna be honest right now, no one want their mission to be reviewed... by you. I mean you're still new here but hey, I'm new too. And your designing skill is not quite there yet to review others mission, well me too but I'm not asking anyone if their mission want to be reviewed. Sorry if I hurt you or something but don't try to be a reviewer, yet. Just focus on designing your mission pack. smile.gif

Or if you give a sh*t what I just said, and still want to be a reviewer, then you have to ask AznKei.

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Posted 04 July 2012 - 01:17 AM

Cammi: Ghost was right, but there's something you need to know. Don't ask any person if their mission want to be reviewed, you have to wait until they request it by them self smile.gif

sayooj and jaban: I'm going to review your mission packs today wink.gif

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#1252

Posted 04 July 2012 - 05:11 AM

Hello everyone, today I'm going to review 5 missions from a mission pack called Episodes From San Andreas by jaban . The direct link to the storyline:
http://dyom.gtagames...t=show&id=11676

Here's the review:

Writings: Decent - There are a lot of writings mistakes. Lack using on punctuation and capital letters makes the mission boring after a while, but the writings is still at understandable level
Presentation: Good - Even though the cutscene were few, the cutscene are nicely focused and timed, but some of the cutscene have too long duration

EFSA Intro

Length: Good - It can be done in 5 minutes. You're just arrived at Las Venturas and want to go to your friend's house
Difficuly: Easy - The mission only consist of driving around. No action involved
Variety: Could Be Better - As the mission contains 2 different actors and only one car. No objects were seen in this mission

New Begin

Length: Good - It can be done in 5 minutes. John and Tom will travel around Las Venturas
Difficuly: Easy - Same as previous mission, the mission only consist driving around
Variety: Decent - As the mission contains 4 different actors and only one car. No objects were seen in this mission

Paying Your Taxies

Length: Good - It can be done in 6 minutes. Tom has a debt with the mafias. John must help his friend to eliminate the mafias
Difficuly: Hard - The enemies have medium health with very high accuracies (75-100), but their headshots are turned on, making the mission easier to complete
Variety: Good - There are 2 different vehicles, 5 different actors, 2 different weapons, 3 different pickups and no objects were seen in this mission

High Definition

Length: Decent - It can be done in 4 minutes. John and Danny are going to steal a van from the mafias.
Difficuly: Hard - Same as above mission, the enemies have medium health with very high accuracies (75-100), but their headshots are turned on, making the mission easier to complete
Variety: Good - There are decent variety on actors, 2 different vehicles, 2 different weapons, 9mm and rifle, and no objects were seen in this mission

Payback

Length: Decent - It can be done in 4 minutes. John, Danny, and Matt must steal a van (again) from the mafias in the Royal Casino
Difficuly: Medium - The enemies have medium health and high accuracies, but they are not that much, so it should be easy to take them out
Variety: Decent - There are decent variety on actors, 2 different vehicles, only 1 weapons, an SMG, and no objects were seen in this mission

Overall, the missions were fun to play, especially if you like driving and shooting around, the lack of story and the simple driving and shooting format mission makes the mission boring after a while. And the wanted level, because it's annoying when we're in a shootout with the mafias, the cops come and shoot us too. Anyway, the author did a good job and should keep up with it.

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Posted 04 July 2012 - 11:57 AM

where's my review???

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Posted 04 July 2012 - 12:06 PM

QUOTE (sayooj @ Wednesday, Jul 4 2012, 14:57)
where's my review???

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It hasn't been done yet, obviously? Have patience.

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Posted 04 July 2012 - 01:33 PM

Ok Ghost. Thanks for the advice. I will make my MP first and improve my skills and see.where it goes from there.

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Posted 04 July 2012 - 01:46 PM

QUOTE (cammi @ Wednesday, Jul 4 2012, 13:33)
Ok Ghost. Thanks for the advice. I will make my MP first and improve my skills and see.where it goes from there.

No problem, and good luck. smile.gif

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#1257

Posted 04 July 2012 - 05:45 PM

can someone review the 1st Chapter of my MP http://www.gtaforums...howtopic=514905

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#1258

Posted 05 July 2012 - 11:04 PM

Damn, looks like I missed some things. Lee's a reviewer? Congrats Lee smile.gif since when??

Anyways, Arejai, you still do reviews? If so, could you please do the missions I made for chapter 2 of the Godfather so far? If not, can you take it Lee?

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#1259

Posted 06 July 2012 - 01:57 AM

ThaBoy: I'll take it, but after I'm finished with sayooj request smile.gif One week ago

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#1260

Posted 06 July 2012 - 05:20 AM

hey can someone review my new ADomL missions a manager's responsibility and a war's choice and lee if you have time please continue my storyline efsa the other missions are much more exciting than the ones you reviewed here's a link Episodes From San Andreas




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