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Sgt.Cop
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#1

Posted 10 May 2010 - 12:43 PM Edited by Sgt.Cop, 17 May 2010 - 08:04 AM.

this is me mission

part 1:
Destroy ship:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5150
Destroy Bullding:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5152
Destroy CJ Home:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5153
Destory man:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5154
Destroy enme base:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5156

part 2:
The sh*t!:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5157
run , run ,run:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5158
and dont dead from the bomb
The terorist:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5159
the DDay ep1:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5160
the finish (ep2):
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5166

Part 3:
The Finish Ep2:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5167
The hlicopter Mission Ep 1:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5184
The hlicopter Mission Ep 2:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5185
The SWAT Sniper Mission Ep 1:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5186
The SWAT Sniper Mission Ep 1:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5186

part4:
Assasian of House:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5191
the final:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5192
(this is no final)
The Final Ep2:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5197
New Job:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5201
CIA 'training':
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5202

Part5:
CIA FIRST mission Ep1:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5219
CIA FIRST mission Ep2:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5220
Ambush CIA:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5229
SWAT Back:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5259

AznKei
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#2

Posted 10 May 2010 - 02:43 PM

Hi, I tried your missions. Here's my thoughts.

Writing: Could be done better. It's seem there far less text or the sentences are too short and there's writing and syntax mistakes.
Presentation: Nice presentation there, nice use of objects inside the cargo ship. Nice angle between cutscenes.

Destroy Ship:
Length: Good length, as it could be done in 4 minutes. The player has to blow up a cargo ship.
Difficulty: Easy, the enemies have no headshots but they have little health (250?). They also have weak accuracy.
Variety: Could be done better. Needs a little bit more weapons and different enemy actors.

Destroy bullding:

Length: OK length, as it could be done in 3 minutes. The player kills some ballas and attempts to blow up a building.
Difficulty: Easy, the enemies seems to be static and has weak accuracies.
Variety: A little bit better as they're two different enemy actors. Needs a little bit more weapons variety though.

Your first missions are well done icon14.gif . Nice use of timeout objective during the escape of the cargo ship and the building. Writing needs to be better. Can't wait to see your next missions. ^_^

Sgt.Cop
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#3

Posted 10 May 2010 - 04:18 PM

thak u this is next mission
Destroy enme base:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5156
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Kratos2000
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#4

Posted 10 May 2010 - 04:26 PM

by ename you ment enemy?

Sgt.Cop
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#5

Posted 10 May 2010 - 05:09 PM Edited by Sgt.Cop, 10 May 2010 - 05:16 PM.

wate?. the mission is Destroy enme base
in start kill ename and do bomb and go

next
dont kill enmae and do bombs and run

part 2:
The sh*t!:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5157

sry me bad english

Kratos2000
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#6

Posted 10 May 2010 - 05:25 PM

QUOTE (Sgt.Cop @ May 10 2010, 17:09)
wate?. the mission is Destroy enme base
in start kill ename and do bomb and go

next
dont kill enmae and do bombs and run

part 2:
The sh*t!:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5157

sry me bad english

Well, if none will correct you, you will never learn, right?

There is no such word wate, it's what.
there is no such word ename, it's enemy.
we add 'the' when there is a noun. so it's "Bomb the enemy base"
we don't 'do' bombs, we activate them, then the bombs explode.

Happened to most of us. wink.gif

Sgt.Cop
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#7

Posted 11 May 2010 - 10:36 AM

the finish:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5166

next part
part 3:

Sgt.Cop
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#8

Posted 11 May 2010 - 12:23 PM

The Finish Ep2:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5167

AznKei
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#9

Posted 11 May 2010 - 10:18 PM

Wow, 11 missions in one day! mercie_blink.gif

That's impressive, I suppose you really enjoyed DYOM a lot. That's great! icon14.gif

I'll give you the reviews once I'm done playing with them biggrin.gif .

Sgt.Cop
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#10

Posted 13 May 2010 - 03:19 PM

The hlicopter Mission Ep 1:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5184

The hlicopter Mission Ep 2:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5185

The SWAT Sniper Mission Ep 1:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5186

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#11

Posted 13 May 2010 - 05:39 PM

part 4:
Assasian of House:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5191

Sgt.Cop
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#12

Posted 13 May 2010 - 06:12 PM

part 4:
the final:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5192

(this is no final)

Sgt.Cop
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#13

Posted 14 May 2010 - 11:29 AM

Part 4:
The Final Ep2:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5197

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#14

Posted 14 May 2010 - 12:43 PM

Part 4:
Tritor's:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5200

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#15

Posted 14 May 2010 - 02:04 PM

Part 4:
New Job:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5201

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#16

Posted 14 May 2010 - 03:02 PM

Part 4:
CIA 'training':
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5202

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#17

Posted 15 May 2010 - 09:08 AM

Part 5:
CIA FIRST mission Ep1:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5219
CIA FIRST mission Ep2:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5220

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#18

Posted 15 May 2010 - 05:59 PM

Ambush CIA:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5229

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#19

Posted 17 May 2010 - 08:04 AM

part 5:
SWAT Back:
http://dyom.gtagames...ct=show&id=5259




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