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#61

Posted 17 October 2010 - 08:26 AM

This is great work, Morkie!

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Posted 17 October 2010 - 12:26 PM

Thanks Mati!
Hoping to have another chapter in about a week or so... smile.gif

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Posted 18 October 2010 - 02:31 PM

QUOTE (Mokrie Dela @ Oct 15 2010, 20:00)
just a little update to say i worked on a chapter earlier. I will not tell you what it is other then:
It's a flashback.

got a few chapters waiting upload - not 100% happy with them yet but hold on. smile.gif

also, those who want to see a sequal, or alter-ual, now's the time to say so!

Post here or PM me. enough interest i will write it. not enough.... i MAY write it one day.....

please sequal it biggrin.gif

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Posted 22 October 2010 - 10:26 PM

when will you post the next chapter?I like this story

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Posted 22 October 2010 - 11:02 PM

QUOTE (Prasdana @ Oct 22 2010, 22:26)
when will you post the next chapter?I like this story

When it's finished - and by finished i mean proof read and i'm happy with the quality!
Gonna work on it in a min - the first time i've had time

Thanks for your interest!

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Posted 22 October 2010 - 11:57 PM

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Posted 24 October 2010 - 12:47 PM

cant wait!

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#68

Posted 25 October 2010 - 04:05 PM Edited by Mokrie Dela, 25 October 2010 - 04:08 PM.

New chapters posted.


yes i said chapters

Chapters 12 (Sweet dreams) and 13 (Get this done, then we'll talk) are up.

As always, post your thoughts and suggestions etc smile.gif

Not long left now!

P.S. This story will probably be UNDER 20 chapters in length (total)

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Posted 25 October 2010 - 04:58 PM

I love it!!!

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Posted 23 November 2010 - 01:12 AM

Two more chapters up! #s Fourteen - Hunting the Hunters and Fifteen - The Voice.

Enjoy!

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#71

Posted 23 November 2010 - 04:09 PM

Gonna read it now.

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Posted 24 November 2010 - 12:19 AM

cool, let me know what you think man

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#73

Posted 24 November 2010 - 12:05 PM

finally, you included Luis in this story. good job icon14.gif

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Posted 24 November 2010 - 02:15 PM

Luis was amazing. Good idea to include him.

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Posted 24 November 2010 - 05:18 PM

Thanks guys. Luis has a role to play too. wink.gif

The Voice will be revealed very soon...

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Posted 27 November 2010 - 09:23 AM

Cool wonder who he is.

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#77

Posted 15 December 2010 - 06:17 PM Edited by Mokrie Dela, 15 December 2010 - 11:29 PM.

Just a little word to all the "fans"

I'm planning something special for this topic. Nothing major but a little thing.

You'll see it soon! tounge.gif

*Idea aborted*

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#78

Posted 15 December 2010 - 06:28 PM

QUOTE (Mokrie Dela @ Dec 15 2010, 18:17)
Just a little word to all the "fans"

I'm planning something special for this topic. Nothing major but a little thing.

You'll see it soon! tounge.gif

Come oooon, tell us what it is suicidal.gif

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Posted 15 December 2010 - 07:54 PM

hahaa noooo tounge.gif

Its just a small idea i had. Nothing major.

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#80

Posted 15 December 2010 - 08:04 PM

...is it done yeeeet? biggrin.gif

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Posted 15 December 2010 - 09:10 PM

QUOTE (mati1501 @ Dec 15 2010, 20:04)
...is it done yeeeet? biggrin.gif

Nope! tounge.gif
Itll be a while - a few days at the least (time permitting)

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Posted 15 December 2010 - 09:24 PM

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Posted 15 December 2010 - 10:05 PM

QUOTE (Izzi @ Dec 15 2010, 21:24)
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Thanks!

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Posted 28 December 2010 - 10:15 AM

This is f*ckin awesome man. icon14.gif

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Posted 29 December 2010 - 02:41 AM

QUOTE (LuisBellic @ Dec 28 2010, 10:15)
This is f*ckin awesome man. icon14.gif

thanks! Vote for me when the awards come around! haha tounge.gif

In all seriousness though, GTAF didnt notify me of your reply, so sorry for the late reply tounge.gif

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#86

Posted 30 December 2010 - 04:07 PM

Hey man, How many chapters do you plan?

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Posted 31 December 2010 - 12:44 AM

QUOTE (mati1501 @ Dec 30 2010, 16:07)
Hey man, How many chapters do you plan?

Probably 20. Maybe less. Everything's planned out - its just a case of writing it!

come new year im planning on writing more. Hopefully have something good up soon!

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Posted 03 January 2011 - 03:32 AM

I've nominated this for the best story award, keep up the good work icon14.gif

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Posted 03 January 2011 - 09:04 AM

QUOTE (02fishera @ Jan 3 2011, 03:32)
I've nominated this for the best story award, keep up the good work icon14.gif

Me too icon14.gif

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Posted 03 January 2011 - 05:53 PM Edited by Mokrie Dela, 03 January 2011 - 06:26 PM.

Wow, thank you guys - that really does mean alot! Thanks smile.gif

BTW can someone link me to the "nominating" thing? I havnt seen it - found it.




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