NEW CHAPTER'S UP FOLKS.
It's a slow chapter, but it contains two events that i really wanted to put over, and, although one's very subtle, they're both very important.
Some stats for you folks.
Eight chapters, 14,696 words (including titles), 1,268 lines of prose!
Thanks for reading so far. Sorry for such a long delay, i've been so obsessed with Red Dead, it's eaten up alot of my free time (and i'm only just into Mexico, but this isnt the RDR topic so enough on that). I'll try to keep the chapters coming regularly, but since i started i've scrapped 4 chapters (5, but one was redone), so i'm striving for quality over regularity.
Keep commenting with your thoughts and suggestions. If i get enough feedback i may follow through with my idea for a sequal/prequal/altern-qual...