Ok, my turn now... here's my impressions.
It's actually good with some decent vocabulary. It could be better though.- Presentation:
Decent. Interesting idea for the storyline. It just needs some cutscenes.- Length:
Very Good. It took me 6 minutes to beat it. You fight enemies in Saint-Mark bistro and Los Santos airport.- Difficulty:
Between above high medium and low hard. The lack of healthpacks or armor might give more focus to the player to stay alive.- Variety:
Very good. You fight a good variety of enemies with a good variety of weapons.It's a impressive mission overall . Try to improve things for your future missions like adding cutscenes and writing. Otherwise, Good job man .