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Posted 08 April 2010 - 08:17 PM Edited by brownbear, 08 April 2010 - 08:19 PM.

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1. OVERVIEW
1986:
A crime wave has hit Espania. Tough guys from England, Ireland, Russia, the Netherlands, Morocco and Georgia have made their home in the south, while Mexicans, Romanians, Colombians and Dominicans are taking up arms in Madrid.
The promise of cocaine, fine women, good alcohol and a sense of home with a nice climate is to attractive for small time cockney criminal Rory O’Brian to pass up. In London he was a small time stick up artist, suffering the pressures of Thatcher’s rule and unemployment. But here he can relax, drink Spanish beer and champagne, bathe in the roasting sun, eat paella and sleep with different women every night. So he thinks... pretty soon Rory is back into a world of brutality and treachery, but on a far grander scale than back home.
As he enjoys the fast life with his new found gang of British criminals every looks perfect. But as the gang starts to get greedy they start to fight with rival gangs from all over the globe. The gang hits the jackpot after they meet a man from Colombia who can get them a great cocaine deal, but after their money is robbed by a gang of Russians they have nothing to pay one of the biggest cartels in South America ... not a good idea.

2. CHARACTERS

Rory O’Brian
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A young, ambitious cockney kid. Hanging around with small time hoods on a Brick lane estate put a sense of criminality in him. After a botched robbery of a van full of gold bullion, he decides he cannot carry on living in such a depressing country, so he heads to Espania, the “in” destination for any self respect criminal. But he soon meets with an old friend from London who immediately drags him in to Spain’s criminal underworld.

Jack Kingsley
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A friendly and charismatic accomplice of Rory. Born in Birmingham, he was quickly adapted to the criminal lifestyle. After shooting a man in Birmingham, he fled to London were he met Rory, the two made friends quickly but Jack’s itchy trigger finger got the better of him and he shot another man in London. With that he fled to Spain, meeting other expat gangsters, he quickly got involved in Spain’s underworld.

Ramón Estevez
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A brutal, spontaneous psychopath. Living all his life in Spain, he quickly took advantage of the arrival of expat gangsters in Spain. He particularly liked the British, especially Jack Kingsley, who he formed a gang made up of Spanish and British gangsters.

3. LOCATION

Costa del Sol
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The coast of sun. This is the main base of the game, the area is roughly the same size and Liberty city, minus Alderney. The beach front is filled with fine restaurants and hotels, while the inland area is filled with brothels, villas and swimming pools.

Madrid
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The capital of Espania. A city full of crime and corruption. Amongst the old buildings and monuments lies an underworld of gambling, cocaine, prostitution and extortion. The city is around the same size as Liberty city.

3. WEAPONS

Melee:
Fire axe
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Knife
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Bat
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Handguns:

Colt 45
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Colt python
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Sub Machine Guns:

Uzi
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Star z70
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Shotguns:

Sawn-off shotgun
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Ithaca 37
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Assault Rifles:

Ak47
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M16
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#2

Posted 08 April 2010 - 09:02 PM

This is a very Good start, I look forwards to see more details on the Gangs in general, especially the Georgian Mafia.

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Posted 08 April 2010 - 09:04 PM

Cheers mate, i'll do some more, i should have an update tomorow hopefully.

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Posted 08 April 2010 - 09:04 PM

Like tropical settings man. keep it up.

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Posted 08 April 2010 - 09:53 PM

no offense dude but 1986 was already used. and dont say 2008 got used 3 times plz, those were dlcs. im not saying, im just saying

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Posted 08 April 2010 - 10:03 PM

Nice idea man

Here are a few pics that could inspire some more characters
Tough young enforcer
Young womanizer/criminal
Young gunman/criminal
Tough, old, psychotic hitman/enforcer

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Posted 08 April 2010 - 10:03 PM

QUOTE (Kwandilibro @ Apr 8 2010, 21:53)
no offense dude but 1986 was already used. and dont say 2008 got used 3 times plz, those were dlcs. im not saying, im just saying

I know, but i thought that '86 was best because its mid 80's, so it doesntlean to either side if you get me?

Thanks Bluecheer, i'll definatley use some of them.

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Posted 09 April 2010 - 06:48 AM

Good start BrownBear, but needs more work. Is the update today mate?

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Posted 09 April 2010 - 06:56 AM

I must say BB i hate how you make so many new topics and don't stick at them although i like this it really is cool better layout than your other ones anyway keep it up this could turn out really well.

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Posted 09 April 2010 - 11:13 AM

QUOTE (AnthMUFC-Champs @ Apr 9 2010, 06:56)
I must say BB i hate how you make so many new topics and don't stick at them although i like this it really is cool better layout than your other ones anyway keep it up this could turn out really well.

I know, ij ust get loads of ideas and want to use them tounge.gif .
Thanks for the feedback guys, and hopefully i will have some sort of update today.

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Posted 09 April 2010 - 01:39 PM Edited by WF the Hobgoblin, 09 April 2010 - 01:44 PM.

The Business always reminded me of Vice City.


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Posted 12 April 2010 - 08:20 PM

Don't say you have given up on it, please stick at it.

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Posted 12 April 2010 - 08:28 PM

QUOTE (TommyMufc-Champs @ Apr 12 2010, 20:20)
Don't say you have given up on it, please stick at it.

I agree with Tommy. you come up with a lot of good ideas but you don't do any of them justice. Pick one of them and just keep accumulating ideas on them

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Posted 12 April 2010 - 08:34 PM

QUOTE (akavari112 @ Apr 12 2010, 20:28)
QUOTE (TommyMufc-Champs @ Apr 12 2010, 20:20)
Don't say you have given up on it, please stick at it.

I agree with Tommy. you come up with a lot of good ideas but you don't do any of them justice. Pick one of them and just keep accumulating ideas on them

Yep. You come up with great ideas, pick one and stick at it.

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Posted 12 April 2010 - 08:35 PM

Looks promising.

Just a question: does Spain really have such varied underworlds, or did you make some of it up?

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Posted 12 April 2010 - 08:48 PM

QUOTE (General Goose @ Apr 12 2010, 20:35)
Looks promising.

Just a question: does Spain really have such varied underworlds, or did you make some of it up?

It did have a pretty varied criminal world, especially in the '80s.

And i will try to have an update soon, my computers been broken.

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Posted 12 April 2010 - 08:48 PM

Looks good don't do the idiot thing and quit it.

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Posted 12 April 2010 - 08:50 PM

QUOTE (brownbear @ Apr 12 2010, 20:48)
QUOTE (General Goose @ Apr 12 2010, 20:35)
Looks promising.

Just a question: does Spain really have such varied underworlds, or did you make some of it up?

It did have a pretty varied criminal world, especially in the '80s.

And i will try to have an update soon, my computers been broken.

Try and update soon, keep people happy turn.gif what do you say alien.gif

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Posted 12 April 2010 - 08:51 PM Edited by brownbear, 12 April 2010 - 08:56 PM.

QUOTE (AnthMUFC-Champs @ Apr 12 2010, 20:48)
Looks good don't do the idiot thing and quit it.

I know, i always do that, i just get loads of ideas and want to post them so i leave some good ones to die like Hustle and jive, damn i should have kept that alive sad.gif .

What should be my next update?, what would you guys like to see?

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Posted 12 April 2010 - 09:17 PM

QUOTE (brownbear @ Apr 12 2010, 20:48)
QUOTE (General Goose @ Apr 12 2010, 20:35)
Looks promising.

Just a question: does Spain really have such varied underworlds, or did you make some of it up?

It did have a pretty varied criminal world, especially in the '80s.

And i will try to have an update soon, my computers been broken.

Interesting...if it's on the web, could you PM me some links? I wanna know more. tounge.gif

Anyway, looking forward to an update.

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Posted 12 April 2010 - 09:23 PM

Avoid Danny dyer esque mockney nobbery and this could be a cool game .. like the business but .......just better









ps you need a 'sexy beast' ben kingsley style cockney nut job

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Posted 13 April 2010 - 06:24 PM Edited by greyamour, 13 April 2010 - 06:28 PM.

Its okay but the premise seems to be copied off "The Business". The format is pretty good but is pretty bog standard. Story is so so. Needs some work but not the worst I've seen. It was better than the abortion that was jive and hustle though.
6/10

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Posted 13 April 2010 - 06:59 PM

QUOTE (greyamour @ Apr 13 2010, 18:24)
Its okay but the premise seems to be copied off "The Business". The format is pretty good but is pretty bog standard. Story is so so. Needs some work but not the worst I've seen. It was better than the abortion that was jive and hustle though.
6/10

Well Jive and Hustle was really well recieed, so i think your idea of it being an abortion is your opinion.

And i didnt ask for a wannabe Simon Cowell to insult my topic's so don't insult them.
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Posted 13 April 2010 - 08:41 PM

QUOTE (brownbear @ Apr 13 2010, 18:59)
QUOTE (greyamour @ Apr 13 2010, 18:24)
Its okay but the premise seems to be copied off "The Business". The format is pretty good but is pretty bog standard. Story is so so. Needs some work but not the worst I've seen. It was better than the abortion that was jive and hustle though.
6/10

Well Jive and Hustle was really well recieed, so i think your idea of it being an abortion is your opinion.

And i didnt ask for a wannabe Simon Cowell to insult my topic's so don't insult them.
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Dude i was giving constructive criticism. Trying to help but if your'e gonna get your panties in a twist then I won't bother...
seriously man Im not a wannabe simon cowell. commenting and not liking what i see doesn't make me a wannabe simon cowell. Maybe my comment about it being an abortion took it to far and for that I apologise but it was pretty bad In my opinion. I mean "jive and hustle"....Im sorry. also you spelt received wrong. Just pointing it out. Im sorry I odnt like this but I generally dont like something which is a blatant rip off of the business. Maybe speak to akavari for help on making this better or sanjeem for better gang info.




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