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Ronieee
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#1

Posted 05 April 2010 - 04:58 PM Edited by Ronieee, 05 April 2010 - 05:07 PM.

Hi guys, this is my first try at making the mission, hope someone will like it!
The mission is short, you can finish it within 2-3 mins.

Point of mission is that CJ finds out Ryder is negotiating with enemy gang member, and tries to kill him
...be careful when you attack him, who knows what's gonna happen...

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Enjoy!

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#2

Posted 05 April 2010 - 05:22 PM

Hi there,

I played your first mission, here is my thoughts...

- Writing: I find it excellent. It has the gangster vocabulary but they're well written.
- Presentation: It's good. Nice viewing angle between different cutscenes.
- Difficulty: I find it average but for the cops interference can annoy some players.
- Length: As you mentioned, it can be done in 2 minutes. The player has to kill some Ballas and Ryder.
- Variety: The player only has to kill Ryder and his goons. Good variety of weapons there (not really a fan of Desert Eagle ^.^). Good use of enemy drive-by cars there.

Good job for your first mission icon14.gif . It's a good thing that you learned some basics of DYOM. Try to do more complicated stuffs with extended length. Anything else is flawless.

Have a nice day!!! biggrin.gif


Ronieee
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Posted 05 April 2010 - 05:48 PM

Yeah, you're right about the cops, that's why I lowered max wanted level to 1, so they won't come in cars & helis, and if I would deactivate it, it would be a bit unrealistic tounge.gif
And for weapons, I chosen pistol only because i wanted make it little harder. After the first objective, you can pick up weapons of death enemies and prepare for next one smile.gif

By the way, thanks for your comment!

PS: is there a way to hide the player while the cutscenes are being played?
and can I make multiple objectives to be visible, like two objective actors that you have to kill?

Brian Walker
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Posted 05 April 2010 - 05:54 PM

QUOTE (Ronieee @ Apr 5 2010, 17:48)
PS: is there a way to hide the player while the cutscenes are being played?
and can I make multiple objectives to be visible, like two objective actors that you have to kill?

First the cutscene teleport the player away, then make an actor and give him the animation, after the cutscene remember to HIDE the actor... or the mission can be f*cked, 2) Just make first enemys actor then the objective actor and turn on kill all enemyes, sry for my bad eng, im italian, hope i helped

Ronieee
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Posted 05 April 2010 - 06:26 PM

Thanks, that helped, I didn't even tried these features, silly me tounge.gif

I updated the mission but IDK how to edit the one on dyom.gtagames.nl confused.gif

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Posted 05 April 2010 - 06:48 PM Edited by JOJOXX, 05 April 2010 - 07:06 PM.

QUOTE (Ronieee @ Apr 5 2010, 18:26)
Thanks, that helped, I didn't even tried these features, silly me tounge.gif

I updated the mission but IDK how to edit the one on dyom.gtagames.nl confused.gif

That's is very easy.When you uploaded a mission,there write the --edit link---
colgate.gif .Try in the antecedent in the Mozilla Firefox to find.

Ronieee
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Posted 05 April 2010 - 06:56 PM

Well, I can't get back, since I closed the page which contained edit link. I tried searching it in browser's history, no luck, I just get error if I open the page displayed after my upload confused.gif

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Posted 05 April 2010 - 07:08 PM

http://dyom.gtagames...ct=edit&id=4617

That's your edit link.

Ronieee
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#9

Posted 05 April 2010 - 09:13 PM

IDK how you came to it, but it doesn't matter xD
Ok, so here are the changes:
-Max wanted level is 1 star, so no cops will arrive in vehicles
-Second cutscene edited, so now there can't be 2 players seen in it




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