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Posted 02 April 2010 - 04:19 AM Edited by Jayd_101, 23 April 2010 - 04:18 AM.

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SET IN PRESENT TIME

Firstly, Could you Please post your thoughts on this topic after you've read this topic.

This topic is in progress and I am still working on it.

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It's 2010 and Brian Murphy is on the streets of Northen USA.
Brian runs a gang called the "Northern Aces". Brian was awating the arrival of his cousin Lester at the private airstrip just out of Seatlh, suddenly everyone hears gunshots exlosians, as they look out into the distance they see a bunch of people speeding towards them shooting, most people at the private airstrip died including Brian's cousin. But, Brian is still alive, he manages to get away from the ambushers. He finds a car not far away and speeds towards Seatlh.

Brian Tries to take back the streets and get revenge on the ambushers, he also has to rebuild his gang since most of them were killed. As he builds up his gang it becomes one of Northern States Most powerful Gang/crime syndicate.

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BIGGER MAP COMING SOON!!!

States:
Ontarna- (OA)- (Based on Montana)
Lincoln State-(LN)- (Based on Washington State)
Canada- (CA)- Canada unlocks after a "story" mission, different laws apply here, & it costs to go to Canada if you catch a flight or drive across the border.

Cities:
Melena- (MA)- (Based on Helena)-Ontarna- USA
Olympis- (OP)- (Based on Olympia)-Lincoln State- USA
Seatlh- (ST)- (Based on Seattle)-Lincoln State- USA
Vancouver-(VR)-Canada

Towns:
Bluemond
Pincy
Fort Henton
Stuistown
Wilbaux
Nelson
Vernin

Counties:
Stream County
Queen County
Slogan County
Barliegh County

Borders:
US/Canada Border- Costs $500 to go to Canada. Unlocks after a "story" mission. You can use this border to travel between the U.S and Canada.

PUBLIC PLACES:
Olympis National Park
Golf Club

Terrain:
Snowing in some parts of Ontarna and Lincoln State and Canada.
Green (No Desert)

(More Locations Coming Soon)

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Major Characters:

Brian Murphy (Charater you play as)
Race: White American/African American
Age: 25
Birthplace: Seatlh, Lincoln State, USA
Brian Murphy is a rich and powerful gang leader, but after the ambush, Brian is left poor and is no longer "powerful". But along the way he will find riches and power.

Jack Murphy
Race: White American/African American
Age: 20
Birthplace: Olympis, Liccoln State, USA
Jack is Brian's Brother, he is part of the Northern Aces.

Ryan Wilson
Race: White American
Age: 24
Birthplace: Algonquin, Liberty City, Liberty State, USA
Ryan is the Gun Specialist in the "Northern Aces" & is one of Brian's best friends.

Heather McAnderson
Race: White American
Age: 25
Birthplace: Melena, Ontarna, USA
Heather is Brian's & Jack's Cousin.

Andy Robins
Race: White American
Age: 30
Birthplace: Los Santos, San Andreas, USA
Andy is a crooked cop, he is selfish, has to have everything his way and makes people go out to get his drugs, but he will help the Northern Aces.

Harold Donald
Race: African American
Age: 30
Birthplace: Vice City, Florida, USA
Harold is Brian's Friend that is a mechanic and joins Brians gang called "Northern Aces".

Lawrence Burne
Race: White American
Age: 30
Birthplace: Seatlh, Licoln State, USA
Lawrence is Brian's best friend that you will have to do missions for aswell.

Bruce Anderson
Race: Canadian
Age: 32
Birthplace: Vancouver, Canada
Bruce is one of Lawrence's Canadian Friends, once you unlock Canada you get to do missions for Bruce.

Vincent Miles
Race: Canadian
Age: 24
Birthplace: Seatlh, Licoln State, USA
Miles is part of the Northern Aces in Canada, he is a well trained theif and Brian will have to do missions for Vincent.

Minor Characters:

Sean Vanders
Race: British
Age: 35
Birtplace: London, England
Sean is one of Harold's Friends.

Jordan Brandon
Race: African American
Age: 27
Birthplace: Las Venturas, San Andreas, USA
Jordan is a police snitch.

Zhan Chow
Race: Chinese
Age: 41
Birthplace: Beijing, China
Zhan is the head of the Yang Chinese Triads.

Millan Newton
Race: African American
Age: 50
Birthplace: Vernin, Canada
Millan is the boss of the Angels of terror MC.

Jordan Callan
Race: American/Canadian
Age: 41
Birthplace: Vancouver, Canada
Jordan is a Thug, you meet him in a story mission

Ray Burke
Race: White American
Age: 37
Birthplace: Melena, Ontarna, USA
Ray is a gangbanger with the M.O.B gang.


(More Characters Soon)

HUD

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HUD


Health (red bar) is on the left of the mini-map, Stamina (green bar) on the top right, and armour (blue bar) is on the bottom right.

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POLICE Army FIRE EMT Boats Motorcycles
STPD Patrol
STPD Cruiser
OPPD Patrol
OPPD Cruiser
MAPD Patrol
MAPD Cruiser
VRPD Cruiser
VRPD Calvacade
CRP Cruiser (Canadian Royal Police)
Unmarked Patrol
OASP Patrol (Ontarna State Police)
LNSP Patrol (Lincoln State Police)
Highway Patrol
Sheriff Patrol
Sheriff Ranger
SWAT Enforcer
SWAT Cruiser
FBI Cruiser
FBI Calvacade
FBI Buffalo
OASP Maverick
LNSP Maverick
STPD Maverick
Sheriff Maverick
FBI Maverick
SWAT Maverick
Predator
STPD Motorcycle
OASP Motorcycle
LNSP Motorcycle
USBA Sentinal
CBSA Cruiser
Parks Canada Warden's Admiral
Ports Canada Police Rancher
WVPS Cruiser
Canada Sheriff Service Buffalo
ERT Moonbeam
Barricks
Patriot
Hydra
Hunter
STFD Firetruck
FDMA Firetruck
FDLM Firetruck
OPFD Firetruck
State Firetruck
Fire Tanker
Fire Paramedic
Fire Ranger
Fire Chopper
Fire Paramedic Chopper
ST Paramedic
MA Paramedic
LM Paramedic
OP Paramedic
State Paramedic
Paramic Rancher
Air Ambulance
Coastguard Boat
Speed-max
Cruiser
Yacht
Sailor
Predator
Dingy
NRG-600
PCJ-600
PCJ-1000
Manchez
Ventoso
faggio
Sanchez
Chopper
Angel
Quad
Cars Vans 4WD/SUV & OFF-ROAD Local Service/Transport (The Protaganist can use these transportation services) Aircrafts Other RV's & Motorhomes (Can use these as savepoints)
Cheetah
Comet
Turismo
Sabre
Sabre GT
Hellenbach
Hellenbach GT
Jester
Sultan
Formula 1
Peyote
Chavos
Admiral
Voodoo
Rumpo
Pony
Yankee
Newsvan
Moonbeam
Blista
Cluck 'n' Van
Burgershot Van
Rancher
Ranger
Calvacade
Mesa Grande
ATV
Launch
DIRT
Snowmobile
OP Taxi
ST Taxi
MA Taxi
OA State Taxi Vans
CT State Taxi Vans
OA State Buses
ND State Buses
LN State Buses
Cabby
City Buses
Pizzaboy
Noodleboy
Pizza City Car
Maverick
Chopper
Cargobob
Leviathan
Raindance
Dodo
Skimmer
Shamal
ATF-747
Nevada
Bicycle
Mountain Bike
BMX
Unicycle
Skateboard (can carry Skateboard in inventory)
Rollerskates (can carry Rollerskates in inventory)
Snowboard (For use on snow, can carry snowboard in inventory)
Holiday
Camper
(More Vehicles Soon)

PUBLIC TRANSPORTATION

You can use these transpotations.

1) Taxi- Brian (protaganist) can hail a taxi by holding Triangle/Y and then get in the back by pressing Triangle/Y, and choose the destination you want to go to.

2) Bus- You can wait at the bus depot or bus stops to catch a bus, choose the bus stop you want to stop at.

3) Train- Wait at any Train station to catch a train.

4) Subway- Wait at any Subway to catch a underground-train.

5) Airplane- Go to any Airport to fly to any City. Costs $200 to catch a flight.

MORE TRANSPORTATION SOON!!!

CLOTHES

Shirts Jackets & longsleeves Pants & Shorts Shoes Pendants & Chains Watches & Glasses Hats Special Bag/holdalls, Backpacks, Breifcases, Gun Holsters (Can carry things in these bags/Briefcases & Gun Holsters)
White Tank
Black Tank
White polo
Northern Aces Shirt
Bowling Shirt
Madd-T shirt
White coler longsleeve shirt
USA Shirt
Seathl Shirt
Canada Shirt
Vancouver Shirt
Camo Shirt
Snow Jacket
Biker Jacket
Hiker Jacket
Camo Jacket
Camo Pants
Blue Jeans
Green Jeans
Blue Jeans Shorts
Heart Boxers
Boxers
Hiker Pants
Biker Pants
Cowboy boots
Snow boots
Black Low-tops
Black High-tops
Brown shoes
White Sneakers
Flip flops
Sandals
America Pendant
Canada Pendant
Dollar Pendant
Cross Pendant
Gold Chain
Silver Chain
Platinum Chain
Gold Watch
Silver watch
Platinum Watch
Black watch
Black Sunglasses
Grey Sunglasses
Swimming Goggles
Cowboy Hat
Northern Aces Cap
Red Cap
Black cap
Blue Cap
Green Cap
Trucker hat
Beanie
Seatlh Police Department Uniform
Olympis Police Department Uniform
Lincoln State Police Uniform
Ontarna State Police Uniform
U.S Highway Patrol Uniform
U.S Sheriff Uniform
FBI Suit
U.S/Canada Border Patrol Uniform
Vancouver Police Uniform
Canada Sheriff Service Uniform
Ports Canada Police Uniform
Business Uniform
Valet Uniform
Security Uniform
Northern Aces Gang Uniform
Robbery Suit
Black & Red Backpack
Black Backpack
Blue Backpack
Brown Holdall
Black Holdall
Brown Breifcase
Black Breifcase
Black Pistol/gun Holder
Brown Gun holder
MORE CLOTHES COMING SOON!!!!

Backpacks, bags/Holdalls, Briefcases, & Gun Holsters

You can buy Backpacks, Holdalls, Gun holsters & Briefcases at clothes shops or in Supermarkets. These are visible on the Protaganist, you can leave the bags or backpack in your car or at your safehouse if you don't want to carry it around.

VIGILANTES, MOST WANTED, & POLICE PATROL

These missions are similar to the previous GTA Games. But you also have the option of arresting them aswell, you might have to beat the suspect up a little then slap the handcuffs on them and put them in the back of the car, then take them to the police station and put 'em in a cell.

When you unlock the Printworks and Clothing Works, you can order Police uniforms and Badges to be made for you, you can also get a police radio, Handcuffs, Police Nightstick (baton), and pepper spray added to the inventory when you get the police uniform. You also unlock the ability to respond to crimes reported in the area when you recieve calls on the Police Radio when you start the "Police Patrol". With the Police Radio you can divert Police to a different location and make the police got to your position if you want one of their cars, you can wear & have the police uniform, Handcuffs, Pepper Spray, Police Badge, & Police Radio anytime you want to, just go to the Police Station or Safehouse to pick them up.

WAREHOUSE, GANG MANSIONS UPGRADES & VEHICLE UPGRADES

Warehouse and Gang Mansion Upgrades:

You can upgrade your Warehouse, TV studio, Mansions, printworks, and some safehouses on GTA: Northern States. You can put up security Camera's and order more rooms in your buildings, you can make a security room, the security room contains Computers wired up with the cameras so your gang can watch and listen to everything around the buildingto make sure no one is breaking in or snooping around your place.

Vehicle Upgrades:

You can upgrade your vehicle just like San Andreas, you can change paintjobs and vinals, mount a gun on the front of your car, tint the windows, change car rims & tires, and loads more!

CAR CRASHES & BUILDING DESTRUCTION & VANDALISM

CAR CRASHES:

In GTA Northern States when Cars crash and roll over they don't blow up, it's more like realistic because the car don't blow up when they crash.

BUILDINGS & VANDALISM & PROPERTY DAMAGE:

You can tag on building on this game, you can make your own tags and don't have to tag over other tags.

You can also blow up Some building you want to by blowing it up with a rocket launcher, you can burn down buildings also, and smash windows on buildings, the properties you damage will be re-buit again.

LAW ENFORCEMENT

STPD- Seatlh Police Department
OPPD- Olympis Police Department
MAPD- Melina Police Depatment
OASP- Ontarna State Police
LNSP- Lincoln State Police
USBA- United States Border Agency
RCP- Royal Canadian Police
CBSA- Canada Border Services Agency
VRPD- Vancouver Police Department
Parks Canada Park Wardens
Ports Canada Police Service
WVPS- West Vancouver Police Service
Canada Sheriff Service
U.S Highway Patrol
CA Highway Patrol
Sheriff
SWAT (USA Only)
ERT- Emergency Response Team. (Canada Only)
FBI
DEA
ARMY
NAVY
AIR FORCE

BUSINESS & SAFEHOUSES
(Note: All of these businesses you will own, and your gang will help run the businesses.)

Clubs/sport Places:
Stream County Golf Club
Seatlh Football Stadium

Safehouses/Gang Buisnesses:
61 Safehouses
7 Ganghouses
5 Warehouses

Shops/Garages & Car Modification Garages:
Save Smart Supermarket in Downtown Seatlh
24-7 Supermarket in The Shopping Square in Olympis
Pizza City in Shopping Mall in Melena
Tranzmodification Garage in Seatlh- Some of your gang members will go out and steal cars and bring back here to your garage, these cars will be modificated by your gang mechanics and your gang will be able to drive these cars.

Gang Turfs/store takeovers:
110 gang turfs
10 Shops
2 Banks

Airports/Travel Places:
Private Airstrip southwest of Seatlh
Vancouver City Travel
Olympis Private Airport
Seatlh City Buses
Ontarna State Taxis

TV & THEATRE BUILDINGS:
Lincoln TV Studios in Downtown Seatlh- You can buy this place after a "story mission". There will be a Newsvan parked outside for you to do missions in When doing the Newsvan sidemission you have to drive to the selected destination and then with a video camera, record everything at the scene. After you've finished recording, take the camera back to the studio. You can also do other missions inside the studio.

West Olympis Show Theatre- You run this place, you can schedule shows and earn money from selling tickets for people to come and watch the show.

Canada News Studio- Similar to the Lincoln TV Studios

OTHER:
The Northern Printworks- You can make up fake cash and Identificatin ID and Police/FBI Badges
Clothing Works- You can make/order uniforms to be made for you, anything from Police to burgler uniforms

MISSIONS

(Before and After the missions there will be cutscenes that will play)

#1. (The start of the game): After being ambushed, Brian manages to get away and find a car. The first thing you will have to do is get in to the car and drive to Jack's (Brian's brother) house (his house will be marked on the map).
MISSION PASSED
REWARD: N/A

Jack Murphy:
#2. Lay low: Drive with Jack to a safehouse in Sunset Hills, Seatlh.
MISSION PASSED
REWARD: $50 and a Safehouse

Harold Donald:
#3. Recruiting Drive: Drive around and look for people to recruit for the gang, once you've found three people, head over to the ganghouse in Henderson, Seatlh, and drop the new recruits off. Now go to meet Harold in Downtown, drive him to the warehouse in Industrial.
MISSION PASSED
REWARD: $150

Jack Murphy:
#4. Farewell Lester: Drive Jack, Harold and Lawrence over to the Cemetery in Seatlh, Protect everyone at the service from the El Corona gang. After the service drive Jack, Harold and Lawrence back to the ganghouse.
MISSION PASSED
REWARD: $200

Andy Robins:
#5. Bad Cop: You have to go over to Downtown to help the crooked police Officer Andy Robins from getting attackted from the El Corona gang. You have to kill all of the El corona's that are trying to attack Andy, and hold them off until the Cops come.
MISSION PASSED
REWARD: $200

Andy Robins:
#6. The Burndown: Head over to one of the El Corona gang's hideout over in West Suburbs, through petrol bombs at the gang house until it says at the bottom of the screen "Return to Andy's office at Downtown Seatlh Police Station".
MISSION PASSED
REWARD: $300

MORE MISSIONS ARE COMING SOON

ROBBERIES

BANK ROBBERIES

To rob a bank, just walk in, then pull out a weapon, then walk up to the teller and press the up button to trigger the mission (You can only trigger the mission only if you have the weapon out at the time). Press the left button for a Negative response like:
Give me the f*cking money now or i'll shoot you!!!
Or a Postive Response by pressing the right:
Give me the money now and everything will be ok.
You can also break into the bank safe, you will need an acomplice to make the hostages keep their hands up and make sure they don't alert the cops.
As soon as you recieve the money you can shoot the teller or just leave before the cops get there.

SHOP ROBBERIES

To trigger a shop robbery walk up to the Checkout operator and pull out a gun and aim the gun at the operator and press the up button (you have to have a gun to start the robbery). To give a negative response press the left button or a positive response by pressing the right button. You can either wait for him to give the money, shoot the operator, or leave if the cops come.

HOUSE ROBBERIES

To trigger a houuse robbery, smash a window of a house with a gun or baseball bat by manually aiming the gun or bat at the window then shooting or bashing at it, or trying to pick the door lock, then climb through the window by pressing the square/x button, or walk into the house through the doorway when you've broken the lock. Once you've gained entry grab anything you see that you can pick up by pressing the triangle/Y button and then get out the window you came through or going out the front door before the cops arrive if they are dispatched.

GANG RECRUITING

When walking around the streets you can try to recruit anyone, some people will want to join the gang, some people won't.

Some people have different abilities like, car mechanics & Gun technicians, computer experts, people with good combat skills and good shooting skills etc., it is best to have a gang with people that have good abilities but it is good also to have some members that have no abilities because you can get them trained up at a gym or at one of your gang assets. You Can recruit people from in USA & in Canada.

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Gun Technician

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Expert Car thief

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Food:

Pizza Stack
Pizza City
Noodle Palace
Cluck 'n' bell
Burgershot
Jack's Diner
PUB
Club

Clothes:

Dider Sacher
Criminal
Victim
Binco
Pro Laps
Hot Shot
R* Clothing
Suburban

Gadget Shops:

Laptops Galore
Hi-tech Hardware
Mobile
Fruit Iplod

Other:

Internet cafe's
AUTO CARS
BICYCLES
Skates

MINIGAMES/SIDE MISSIONS

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Newsvan
Random People Missions
Drug Dealing
Gang Wars
Street Racing
Vigilante
Paramedic
Fireman
Tow Trucker
Trucker
Bus Driver
Pilot
Pizza Delivery
Noodle Delivery

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Dice
Roulette Wheel
Pool
Chess
Checkers
Basketball
Football (American)
Soccer


GANGS OF GTA: NORTHERN STATES

Northern Aces
Vancouver Mobsters
M.O.B
Irish Mobsters
Jewish mob
El Corona Vago
Angels of Terror MC
British Gangbangers MC
English mob
Seatlh Triads
Yang Chinese Triads
Yazuka
Russian Mafia
Italian Mafia

ITEMS

Electronics (Portable):

Winzow Laptop (Windows Laptop)
Fruit Laptop (Apple Laptop)
Mobile Phone
Fruit Iplod Mano (Apple Ipod Nano)
Fruit Iplod Touch (Apple Ipod Toch)
Digital Camera
Video Camera
TV Video Camera

Weapons:

M4 Carbine
Ak47
SMG
Mini SMG
Desert Eagle pistols
Twin Pistol
Pistols
Shotgun
Double Barrell Shotgun
Sawn-off Shotgun
Flame Throwers
Bazooka
Heat Seeker Missile
Grenades
Satchel Charges
Chain Gun
Nightstick
Baseball bat
Crow Bar
Taser

ENTERTAINMENT

TV: On GTA Northern States, you can watch In-game TV like GTAIV.

Watching sporting events: You can go out to stadiums or such places to watch sports, you can even place traps before the game starts and watch the game come to destruction!

Nightclubs: You can go out to nightclubs and dance and even have a glass of beer.

Got to car events: You can go and watch anything fromstreet racing to Demolition Derby, and Legal racing.

Watch live shows at Theatres: Go out and enjoy watching shows at any theatre, and before the show starts you can rig the stage with mines or dynamite! Or you can just sit back, relax and watch the show.

MORE ENTERTAINMENT COMING SOON!!!

TV SHOWS

Channel CBC (based on BBC):
REPUBLICAN SPACE ALIENS: Watch Republican space Aliens on In-game TV
DEMOCRATIC SPACE RANGERS: Is similar to Republican Space Aliens
CBC LIVE NEWS: Watch NNC Live News for the latest news from around Northern States.
ACTION COPS: Action Cops is a cop show with all of the latest crime around Northern States.

NCN (Based on CNN):
CNN NEWS
GET A LIFE!: Is a comedy show
FAST AUTOS: Fast Autos is a show with fast cars and hotrods for sale & on show!

Licoln TV (Brian (the protaganist) runs this channel):
Lincoln TV news: Is a Lincoln State TV news show.
CSU LC: Is a show based on CSI NY
CSU Vice City: Is a show based on CSI Miami
SUV: Is a show based on SVU (Special Victims Unit)

Comedybase:
Shrubs- Shrubs is a comedy show based on scrubs.
Two men and half- based on Two and a half men
According to tim- Based on According to Jim
The small explosion theory- Based on the big bang theory

USATV (Can only watch this channel in USA):
Enemies (Based on Friends): Is a comedy show based on Friends.
Everybody Hates Ray (Based on Everyone loves Raymond): Is a comedy show based on Everyone loves Raymond.
The Simpletons (Based on Simpsons): The Simpletons is a comedy cartoon based on the simpsons.

Canada On Air (Can only watch this channel when in Canada):
Frontline Police: This is a Canadian Police show.
ICE!: This is an Ice skating show.
Canadian LIVE News: A Canadian News Channel

MORE TV SHOWS SOON!

RADIO STATIONS

Seatlh Radio
Type: Jazz

Ontarna LIVE
Type: Talk Radio

ROCK IT OUT
Type: Rock

Rockin and Rolling
Type: Rock 'n' roll

Lincoln 24-7 99.8 FM
Type: Alternative

RADIO VANCOUVER
Type: Orchestra

On the road Radio
Type: Country

(Soundtrack & Radio Logo's Coming soon)

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Website Name Website type Description Based On
Friends without FacesSocial/chatKeep in-touch with your GTA: Northern States contactsFacebook
TweeterSocial/chatkeep in-touch with your GTA: Northern States Contacts just like Friends without facesTwitter
FastautosonlineVehicles PurchasingYou can buy vehicles online at Fast Autos online, the cars that you purchase will be delivered to anywhere in the city that you select-
Pizzastack.comFood/deliveryOrder pizza online and wait for the pizza to get delivered to youPizzahutt.com
Seatlh Police DepartmentLaw Enforcement WebsiteSeattlton Police Department (STPD) Websitehttp://www.cityofseattle.net/police/
DLC COMING SOON

DLC TITLES:
GTA: Money & The Streets
GTA: Ganster Life

GTA Money & The Streets Protaganist:
Ray Burke

GTA Gangster Life Protaganist:
Jordan Callan


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Posted 02 April 2010 - 04:24 AM Edited by Jayd_101, 09 April 2010 - 05:22 AM.

More Weapons

Weapon NameWeapon FeaturesWeapon Strength
Brass Knuckles
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When punching, these give an extra painful punch.Extra sore punch
Silenced Pistol
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This gun Includes a silencer on itShort range pistol, takes two shots to kill.
Double Barrel Shotgun
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N/AShort range gun, kills instantly with one shot.
Silenced Sniper
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This sniper includes a silencer.This is a long range weapon, kills instantly with one shot.
Repeater Shotgun
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N/AShort range weapon, kills instantly with one shot.
Combat SMG
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N/AMedium Range Weapon.
Burst Carbine
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Optional, you can get the Burst Carbine with a silencer if you want, it will cost an extra $200Medium range weapon.
Flamethrower
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You can go to the gas Station to fill this weapon up so you can use it again.Short range weapon, burns people.
Parachute
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n/an/a
Chainsaw
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n/aShort range combat/melee type weapon

Weapon Logos made by Akavari112

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#3

Posted 02 April 2010 - 04:26 AM

Pics or it didn't happen.

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Posted 02 April 2010 - 04:48 AM

QUOTE (G#O$TR!D3R - 133457 @ Apr 1 2010, 22:26)
Pics or it didn't happen.

Calm down.

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Posted 02 April 2010 - 04:55 AM

QUOTE (Cilogy @ Apr 2 2010, 04:48)
QUOTE (G#O$TR!D3R - 133457 @ Apr 1 2010, 22:26)
Pics or it didn't happen.

Calm down.

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Posted 02 April 2010 - 07:35 AM

I think you need better presentation and a more in-depth story.
That said, you have some nice ideas here, the setting is definatley new, however i don't like the idea of a decorated cop who builds a gang.

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Posted 02 April 2010 - 07:50 AM

QUOTE (brownbear @ Apr 2 2010, 07:35)
I think you need better presentation and a more in-depth story.
That said, you have some nice ideas here, the setting is definatley new, however i don't like the idea of a decorated cop who builds a gang.

I was thinking of changing the overview and that he build a gang, I'm still thinking about it.

And don't forget I'm still working on it.

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#8

Posted 02 April 2010 - 08:17 AM

Try to be more creative on the names. I know SA names sound like they have been just mangled up from originals, but there is actually some thought put into it.

Los Angeles = The Angels
Los Santos = The Saints

Las Vegas = The Fertile Valleys
Las Venturas = The Fortunes ("Ventura" is better translated as luck, but there is no plural for it in English.)

San Francisco = Saint Francis of Assisi
San Fierro = Saint Fierro, fictional character whose name is actually a reference to San Fransisco's motto, "Oro en Paz, Fierro en Guerra" - "Gold in Peace, Iron in War".

You see the point, don't you? They didn't just mix letters together. They took something about the name and the place, and turned it into a new name.

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Posted 02 April 2010 - 01:53 PM

Great ideas, keep it up. smile.gif


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Posted 02 April 2010 - 01:59 PM

QUOTE (G#O$TR!D3R - 133457 @ Apr 2 2010, 01:26)
Pics or it didn't happen.

Try and contribute more to a topic then this please.

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Posted 02 April 2010 - 02:08 PM

I guess Zapple and Window are parodies of Apple and Windows? They already have GTA versions if I remember correctly. Apple's is Fruit, don't remember Windows.

Also, a suggestion for Bismarck could be another pre-WWII German leader (going on the city sharing a name with Otto von Bismarck.)

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Posted 02 April 2010 - 03:07 PM

"Seattlington- (ST)- (Based on Seattle)" — No kidding, but that is a bad name. Do you actually know anything about Seattle, where its name comes from, etc?

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Posted 02 April 2010 - 03:08 PM

Aside from the names, the amount of characters who have a name that is a multiple of 5 annoyed me. tounge.gif

I'm just being picky though.

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Posted 02 April 2010 - 05:54 PM

Us Brit's are a race all on our own? tounge.gif

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Posted 02 April 2010 - 08:48 PM

QUOTE (SammiiDoogles @ Apr 2 2010, 13:54)
Us Brit's are a race all on our own? tounge.gif

I don't know about Brits in general, but you Welsh, definitely. tounge.gif

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Posted 02 April 2010 - 09:12 PM

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Us Brit's are a race all on our own? tounge.gif

I loled.


Nice topic, I hope to see more from it. smile.gif

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Posted 02 April 2010 - 10:22 PM Edited by Jayd_101, 02 April 2010 - 10:34 PM.

Thanks for the nice replies smile.gif , those of you who have gave bad repies just remember I have more to come and I am still working on it.

QUOTE (Interrobangin @ Apr 2 2010, 15:07)
"Seattlington- (ST)- (Based on Seattle)" — No kidding, but that is a bad name. Do you actually know anything about Seattle, where its name comes from, etc?

You know I didn't make this topic so people can laugh at it and think it sucks, I thought it was quite good actually, I put good work into this.

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Posted 02 April 2010 - 10:32 PM

Looking back, I forgot to say I like your idea; it's obvious you put some work into it and it's a very good start. Just spotted a few mistakes, that's all.

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Posted 02 April 2010 - 10:35 PM

Thanks General Goose biggrin.gif

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Posted 03 April 2010 - 12:07 AM

QUOTE (Jayd_101 @ Apr 2 2010, 18:22)
QUOTE (Interrobangin @ Apr 2 2010, 15:07)
"Seattlington- (ST)- (Based on Seattle)" — No kidding, but that is a bad name. Do you actually know anything about Seattle, where its name comes from, etc?

You know I didn't make this topic so people can laugh at it and think it sucks, I thought it was quite good actually, I put good work into this.

It's a fair bit of criticism, though. Yes, it'd be nice if people provided something a little more constructive, but still, you post something. It's obviously not going to be perfect. So people will comment on what you got wrong. Try to learn from it.

I've seen what happens on forums where it was strongly encouraged to only leave positive feedback. Threads turn to utter sh*t in no time. So if you don't like negative responses, channel it towards motivation to do better.

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Posted 03 April 2010 - 01:03 AM

Updated....

QUOTE (K^2 @ Apr 3 2010, 00:07)
QUOTE (Jayd_101 @ Apr 2 2010, 18:22)
QUOTE (Interrobangin @ Apr 2 2010, 15:07)
"Seattlington- (ST)- (Based on Seattle)" — No kidding, but that is a bad name. Do you actually know anything about Seattle, where its name comes from, etc?

You know I didn't make this topic so people can laugh at it and think it sucks, I thought it was quite good actually, I put good work into this.

It's a fair bit of criticism, though. Yes, it'd be nice if people provided something a little more constructive, but still, you post something. It's obviously not going to be perfect. So people will comment on what you got wrong. Try to learn from it.

I've seen what happens on forums where it was strongly encouraged to only leave positive feedback. Threads turn to utter sh*t in no time. So if you don't like negative responses, channel it towards motivation to do better.

Yeah, but it would be nice to have some good comments aswell, I changed some city's names and I've changed Coshington State to Lincoln State.

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Posted 03 April 2010 - 07:40 AM

That's fair I suppose.

And yeah, I like "Lincoln State". Simple, yet very GTA.

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Posted 03 April 2010 - 08:20 AM

QUOTE (K^2 @ Apr 3 2010, 07:40)
That's fair I suppose.

And yeah, I like "Lincoln State". Simple, yet very GTA.

Thanks, biggrin.gif

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Posted 03 April 2010 - 08:24 AM

To be honest I think this idea is awful, nobody would buy a game about a fired cop turned thug, all his friends would still be cops. He would still have the moral code that made him want to be a cop, that's just stupid. Also, the names of the areas...wow.

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Posted 03 April 2010 - 08:27 AM

It is however, excellent that the main character is a halfrican. There's nothing better that that. icon14.gif

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Posted 03 April 2010 - 10:04 AM

QUOTE (G#O$TR!D3R - 133457 @ Apr 3 2010, 08:24)
To be honest I think this idea is awful, nobody would buy a game about a fired cop turned thug, all his friends would still be cops. He would still have the moral code that made him want to be a cop, that's just stupid. Also, the names of the areas...wow.

Any suggestions then?

Anyway it's a very good idea. Keep it up. I would contribute but i'm not exactly good with NeXt topics tounge.gif So yeah, nice one. biggrin.gif

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Posted 03 April 2010 - 04:57 PM

this topic sounds a lot like ur other threads. and the fired cop thing, like ghostrider said, would suck horse dick. and the location, no. just no.


but seriously the cop thing would be bad, a great cop just suddenly turns to crime and starts a gang? ouch

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Posted 04 April 2010 - 02:35 AM

QUOTE (Kwandilibro @ Apr 3 2010, 16:57)
this topic sounds a lot like ur other threads. and the fired cop thing, like ghostrider said, would suck horse dick. and the location, no. just no.


but seriously the cop thing would be bad, a great cop just suddenly turns to crime and starts a gang? ouch

It dosen't sound like my other threads, And I thought this game was good, you don't have to go too overboard saying that my game would suck a horses d*ck. Does anyone here like my game? I might change the cop thing.

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Posted 04 April 2010 - 02:41 AM

Time to lay down the law.

While positive and negative feedback is requested for the majority of these topics, you guys don't need to come in and just be like this sucks horse dick. That's nothing more then spam. He asked for feedback, not for you to tell him it's complete sh*t. With that being said, it's brings me to the old saying, "If you can't say nothing nice, don't say anything at all". For those of you who can't comprehend that; if you're just going to say it sucks balls, don't bother posting.

If there are any questions regarding this, PM me.

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Posted 04 April 2010 - 03:00 AM

QUOTE (Jayd_101 @ Apr 3 2010, 22:35)
QUOTE (Kwandilibro @ Apr 3 2010, 16:57)
this topic sounds a lot like ur other threads. and the fired cop thing, like ghostrider said, would suck horse dick. and the location, no. just no.


but seriously the cop thing would be bad, a great cop just suddenly turns to crime and starts a gang? ouch

It dosen't sound like my other threads, And I thought this game was good, you don't have to go too overboard saying that my game would suck a horses d*ck. Does anyone here like my game? I might change the cop thing.

i didnt say the game sucks horse dick i said the cop thing. and some parts of the game r good, i like the black character idea. especially with all the skinheads in the forums talkin racist sh*t




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