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JuNioR_
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Posted 31 March 2010 - 09:34 PM Edited by Junior123456789, 01 April 2010 - 05:14 PM.

I've made the cousins bellic in GTA SA DYOM V5, hope you like it... if you like i can try to make more IV missions in Dyom. Anyway, the link is here:
DOWNLOAD The cousins Bellic

Dialogs fixed biggrin.gif

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Posted 31 March 2010 - 10:06 PM

There is a site where you can upload your missions fast and easly,gonna try it

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Posted 31 March 2010 - 11:04 PM

i'm not downloading it if it's not uploaded to the DYOM site.

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Posted 31 March 2010 - 11:09 PM

Dyom link: (pic in the page)

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Posted 31 March 2010 - 11:14 PM

i will try it, it seem to have alot of spelling mistakes from the picture

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Posted 31 March 2010 - 11:20 PM

My english is a sh*t

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Posted 01 April 2010 - 01:43 AM

Hi there,

Your mission is well done, nice recreation of the GTA IV's "The cousins Bellic" mission. As you mentioned, the problem is that the dialogs at the beginning scroll too fast, they're unreadable.

For the dialogs, I suggest you to do this:

- Menu > Objectives > Add Objectives > Add Special Objectives > Timeout > Put between 3 (short dialog) to 5 seconds (long dialog) > Show time "Off" > Write your dialog
- Do the procedure again with the next dialog.

Keep up the good work smile.gif . I want to know what kind of stuffs would you put next tounge2.gif .

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Posted 01 April 2010 - 11:26 AM Edited by Kratos2000, 01 April 2010 - 11:29 AM.

I have played your mission,
i said it will have a lot of spelling mistakes?
I was wrong biggrin.gif
(Sure, there are some but not that much), don't say "My English is sh*t" if i don't even know what i'm talking about. My bad, sorry.
You don't have to agree immediately.

I can't really comment on this mission because it's only Dialogue>Driving>another little timeout> Mission Complete! +Respact

Nice mission, just try to make some bigger missions.

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Posted 01 April 2010 - 11:27 AM Edited by Junior123456789, 01 April 2010 - 12:09 PM.

Thanks.

I made a new, now all the dialogs are readable:

Download

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Posted 01 April 2010 - 04:44 PM

Aaah, this sh*t sucks! icon13.gif

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Posted 01 April 2010 - 05:14 PM Edited by Junior123456789, 01 April 2010 - 05:16 PM.

F*ck you

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Posted 01 April 2010 - 05:47 PM

How do you make text appear on the screen like that? I know how to do it when you're in a cutscene, but how do you do it when the PC is driving?

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Posted 01 April 2010 - 05:55 PM Edited by AznKei, 01 April 2010 - 07:20 PM.

QUOTE (Unwanted-4-Murder @ Apr 1 2010, 17:47)
How do you make text appear on the screen like that?  I know how to do it when you're in a cutscene, but how do you do it when the PC is driving?

Check the message I wrote above, it's explained there...

PS: Check my missions whenever you have the opportunity. I would like your feedbacks smile.gif .

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Posted 01 April 2010 - 08:51 PM

QUOTE (Junior123456789 @ Apr 1 2010, 17:14)
F*ck you

Wooh tough guy, I just told my opinion. I didn't want to hurt your feelings. tounge2.gif
But, if you want to play it that way, fine, f*ck you too! tounge2.gif icon13.gif

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Posted 01 April 2010 - 11:30 PM

QUOTE (AB0333 @ Apr 1 2010, 20:51)
Wooh tough guy, I just told my opinion. I didn't want to hurt your feelings. tounge2.gif
But, if you want to play it that way, fine, f*ck you too! tounge2.gif icon13.gif

Saying "Aah this sh*t sucks" is not an opinion. dozingoff.gif

Anyway, I have to agree with Aznkei, using the timeouts as dialogue was a good idea. I didn't see it as scrolling to fast, and it was a nice recreation to the GTA 4 mission.


But yea, it wasn't really a mission. Try to make it bigger & other stuff.



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Posted 02 April 2010 - 05:48 PM

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Saying "Aah this sh*t sucks" is not an opinion. dozingoff.gif

You, philosopher, go act a brainiac at some other place. dozingoff.gif And who asked you anything?




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