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maxpaynexxx
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#1

Posted 23 February 2010 - 06:32 PM Edited by maxpaynexxx, 26 February 2010 - 03:11 PM.

Just uploaded my very first mission. Please try it out and give me tips and suggestions.

Especially looking forward to other mission designers pointing out my mistakes.

Bodyguard

Thanks sigh.gif

Part 2 is up :-

Bodyguard Part 2

Some Tips/Pointers :-

1. When you are told to, do look around the mansion. U will find stuff that will help in the upcoming encounter.

2. When the big fight starts, try and stay on the ground. If u move up (where Sonia and Mike are), the attackers just start going round the building sad.gif

3. When u are on the roof, be careful not to fall down on the ground. U may be unable to finish the mission then.

LnDProductions
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#2

Posted 23 February 2010 - 07:03 PM

Just played your mission and its nice, man, good work!

maxpaynexxx
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#3

Posted 24 February 2010 - 02:02 PM Edited by maxpaynexxx, 24 February 2010 - 03:23 PM.

Thanks for the kind comments leoncj, very much appreciated blush.gif

Blimey, just found a mission already made by 12jango, called "Body Guard"

http://dyom.gtagames...act=show&id=157

Pretty nice mission, and I should be more careful in choosing mission names in the future. moto_whistle.gif

Also, it seems all the ideas I come up with, someone has already made a mission on it confused.gif

drakic
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#4

Posted 24 February 2010 - 09:13 PM

Well, there are nearly 4000 DYOM missions, it's often that someone has already made a mission with a similar theme. Feel free to name your mission with anything you want, and to make what you want. icon14.gif

maxpaynexxx
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#5

Posted 26 February 2010 - 03:17 PM

Ok drakic, just afraid that someone may feel I copied their stuff.

Part 2 has been uploaded, took some time, since I am playing other peoples missions as well.

Plz try it out cool.gif

Brian Walker
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#6

Posted 01 March 2010 - 05:47 PM

QUOTE
Carl -Female Voice- Ty for save me cj you are my hero-

tounge2.gif wow.gif biggrin.gif XD , good job, now i try the part 2

Brian Walker
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#7

Posted 01 March 2010 - 05:58 PM

plz make part 3 i wanna know who want kill the bitch

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#8

Posted 02 March 2010 - 04:49 AM

I played your ' BodyGuard Part 2' and i must say very good! Great Work! Nice cutscenes, story etc everything was great. Looking forward to your other missions.

maxpaynexxx
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#9

Posted 03 March 2010 - 03:05 PM

Thanks for the comments Brian and GTA!!! biggrin.gif

Part 3 got delayed because I got busy playing others missions, and also custom modules for Neverwinter Nights. But I will get it done (someday) tounge2.gif

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#10

Posted 30 March 2010 - 07:59 PM

I like this missions,
this mission is funny colgate.gif biggrin.gif

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#11

Posted 31 March 2010 - 05:57 AM

but rly make part 3 smile.gif

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#12

Posted 01 April 2010 - 06:49 PM

I really like the style your missions have - some sort of cinematic flair. How do you make the words different colors like that?

Brian Walker
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#13

Posted 01 April 2010 - 07:36 PM

QUOTE (Unwanted-4-Murder @ Apr 1 2010, 18:49)
I really like the style your missions have - some sort of cinematic flair. How do you make the words different colors like that?

Do you mean how to color the text's?
There is a guide, look it wink.gif

AznKei
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#14

Posted 02 April 2010 - 02:42 AM Edited by AznKei, 02 April 2010 - 02:46 AM.

Hey there,

I played your bodyguard missions, this is what I think:

Bodyguard:

- Dialogs are excellent. It's pretty rare to find DYOM missions with rich vocabulary but you did it, and you put colors to make it easier to read. Congratulations!
- Cutscenes are excellent. Nice viewing angle between different cutscenes. They really add the suspense for this type of mission.
- Difficulty is quite easy, as the whole mission involves riding a limousine, killing enemies in small quantity and some enemy pursuits.
- The length is very good. I done it in 8 minutes, not too long, not too short.

Bodyguard part 2:

- Dialogs are at the same level as part 1, excellent!
- Cutscenes are at the same level as part 1, fantastic!
- Difficulty is quite hard, as they are many enemies that have better weapons and have better accuracy shots. Not only that, the player is only equipped with a pistol.
- The length is excellent. I done it in 10 minutes in which the whole mission, the player have to kill many fake cops with different weapons.
- The story is excellent, but the ending is a cliffhanger which upsets many people (including me) waiting for a part 3.

Overall, your missions are some of the best missions ever made icon14.gif . Everything is almost excellent. The cliffhanger at the end of part 2 make me upset as it seems that the whole story is incomplete sad.gif . I give you an A+ (90%) for your mark. I hope you do a part 3, because everyone is waiting for it.

Otherwise good work and have a nice day colgate.gif !!!

maxpaynexxx
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#15

Posted 16 May 2010 - 06:33 PM

Thanks for the comments guys, especially AznKei blush.gif

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Sorry about the delay, got busy with real life and all. sad.gif

Will try to get into designing again, but don't hold your breath suicidal.gif




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