I'll try the first mission you made. I'll edit later, and tell what's it like.
Ok, first of all, I didn't finish the mission cause my game crashed
(It doesn't deal with the mission, gladly)
I remember you said that you should recruit the 2 officers near the police car. Well, they can't be using animations if you want them to be recruited. You can only recruit people if they are set to "no animation" ( I think... Actually i don't think you can recruit people at all
I like how you set up the police parking lot!
Also, your mission was one of the few that had proper spelling/no run-on sentences. I have to congrats for that:
There should be a short cutscene in the beginning showing why they are killing drug dealers. I mean, cops just don't go around and kill people for no reason. Or thats maybe how they do things in San Andreas... hmm...
I also think the mission should be set to medium. I don't die on easy missions. Its mainly cause of those 2 Vagos with the MP5's. I killed the main one, but I couldn't get back in my car cause my health was too low, and his bastard friend was shooting next to the car door. He killed me soon after...
Overall, it was a really good mission, better than most of the amatuer missions. I look forward to the rest of the missions, and the mission pack!