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Posted 02 May 2009 - 01:45 PM Edited by Sanjeem, 05 June 2010 - 09:33 AM.

Rockstar Games Presents...
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R* games presents to you, Grand Theft Auto Lonsdale city, A fictionalized Version of The city of London. This city has alot to offer you, Not to mention it is the Capital of The Great England. The Basic setting is in The actaul city, when Your player Raj Khan comes to Lonsdale to get away from the wars in Sri lanka. His uncle Aaran has already lived in Lonsdale city owning a corner shop and came to Lonsdale in need of work. Raj comes to Lonsdale to help his uncle in the shop with the food, drink and selling. But is food and drink the only thing Raj's uncle is selling?

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Story


There was once a man called Raj Khan, A 29 year old man living in the Forests and ghetto's of Sri Lanka. He was fighting in The war that was going on in the country at the time. He was fighting for his own life and freedom. He had no relitives there. He had an Uncle who had moved to Lonsdale City.

His uncle Harran Khan was living in Lonsdale city, he had moved their in search for work.He worked in a corner shop selling things to people dailey. He soled Drinks, Food, The Daylife Mail. Was that all he was selling though?

When Raj comes over to Lonsdale City, in the beginning he ends up doing small time jobs for his uncle in the corner shop when he arrives. Such as selling food to customers or delivering things everyday. One day his uncle told him to sell a pack of peas to a man named, Khalid Masood. In a mission Raj sold it to him, but he had wondered why the peas were at such a high price.

He finnaly finds out the truth after a few days, that his uncle had been secretly hiding drugs in the food and drinks he was selling. Raj asked why he got into this kind of crime with drugs, His uncle told him that it is the only way for a small-time person to make something of himself in a Big city like Lonsdale.

Raj does further missions for his uncle and people his uncle knows, for extra money. One day When raj has settled into Lonsdale City, His uncle askes him to deliver a truck full of "Food" to the man called Khalid Masood, which Raj had already met and worked for. The Truck contained a reasonable ammount of coke. Raj delivers the truck as told to.

When Raj arrives their though, Khalid was not around. Raj waited several minutes, until suddenly some pakistani looking gang members came out from nowhere and hit Raj on the head with a Cricket bat, which ended knocking him out.

Raj finds himself slowly coming back to life again, Only that this time he had awakened in an appartment somewhere. Khalid comes out behind him and faces raj. You had worked for Khalid before and knew he was not a man of his word. Khalid told raj that his uncle owed him alot of money, and that the drugs in the van did not pay nearly as half of what he owed him.

Khalid tells Raj that mabey if he were a Hostage, His uncle might work harder and pay the dept that he owes him. Khalid leaves the room with his pakistani gang members watching over Raj. One of them walkes sni**ering over to where raj was tied up in his chair. Raj skillfully kicked the guy in the balls, and then managed to kick him in the face, that made him fall to the ground. The seond one came up to him, but raj turned around making the chair smash into the gangster. Both where on the ground.

Raj managed to escape from the chair and made his way down from the block of appartments. Raj then got into a car and drove back to the corner shop where his uncle worked. When he arrived, Raj went up into the appartment above the shop, to find his uncle bleeding on the couch. Raj was horrified and annoyed, luckily his uncle was all right.

Raj now has to face gangsters trying to kill him wave by wave. Khalid would not give up until he had got the money, and gets involved deeply in criminal activity. He goes through all the trouble to find out where the man Khalid Masood was, The man who screwed Him and his uncle over. Raj sets out on a Quest for Revenge and gets all the imfo he can to find The man that screwed him over, Khalid. He goes on an adventure, through the whole of Lonsdale also to help his uncle get more money and hopefully, pay the dept before his uncle got into more trouble.


Gameplay and Features

Trains

Trains in This city are a Huge part of getting around. Unlike other GTA games, Trains in this game will be used alot more. You now have the ability to get inside trains and walk around in them. Their are many different types of trains in thsi city aswell. Their will be Underground trains aswell, and all the different train lines will be in the game, but named differently.

BackChat

This feature was first seen in San andreas. You now have the ability to talk back to people in the game. If they are rude to you, you simply reply rudly back and the same things applies if they compliment you. Their will be much more speech in thsi feature though compared to San andreas. If sombody is rude to you, and they continue to insult you, you do the same back until a fight occurs.

Robberies

Robberies will be another great side-mission of the game.
There are a number if places you can rob aswell. Since London is huge it will have many Banks, airports, museums etc. Lets start off...

pick-pocketing= No stars at all if you are not seen by the police.
Corner shop store= 1 star
Houses= 2 stars
Banks= 3 stars
Museums= 4 stars

Jobs

You can get alot more Jobs in the game aswell for side-missions.
Such as a job at the helitours to show tourists the monuments and city of London from the air. The Big ben is included in this game as is the London eye, river thames etc.

New features and Sidemissions

You can do Train mission, like in SA and if you go to fast the train will derail aswell.

Hidden Packages: This will be a big part of the sidemissions. You simply have to find 100 hidden Milk bottles around the city.

10= Discount of clothes, gun, supermarket prices
20= Unlock special Milk van
30= Health goes up by 25%
40= Armour goes up by 25%
50= Unlock Parachute with the Union jack on it
60= Unlock special car called Invisble, fastest car in the game.
70= Unlock helicopter on top of every safe-house that has a helipad
80= Ability to Bribe cops when on low wanted level
90= Ability to sprint for longer
100= Unlock special Plane at the airport, called the B7K7. Bigger jet plane to fly.

Taxi Driver missions
Vigilanti Missions
Paramedic Missions
Corner-shop deilivery, For your Uncle you deliver cury's and food to customers.
Gambling Host at Casino's.
Hitman
Rackets, and Turf, You can take over more assets, from Oposition Gangs.
•Tourist missions
•TV news reporter for crime.

Multiplayer.
This will be more expand than ever.
You can create your guy or Girl not only in clothing but you have the ability at the very start, to change their Bone structure and how fat or Thin you want them to be.

Their will be 10 levels of challenge to complete them, unlocking different clothes and features etc.

Gangs of Lonsdale City (London)

Russian Mafiya

Russian Mafia Isn't Just one whole Gang. Their are lots of different Bratva's a slang word for Brotherhood. The Crime they perform which is of Many as usual, along with Killing at temporary Drugs, But it is known for their Use of Protection Money, and also one of Lonsdale's Major Gangs.

Turkish Mafia

To some Imfomation, The Turkish Mafia are not just accused of the Crime performed, But also a major part in terrorism, Both Religeouse, and Political. Also one of Lonsdale's Biggest Drug Traffickers and Dealers. They are seen to be on top of the market, and have connections with Turks, and Afghans, as afghanistan is where the drugs were firstly found to be made. Ethnic turkish and Kurdish gangs are responsible for 70% of heroin travelling through UK.

Albanian Mob

Although not as notouriouse, powerfull or Big as it's Italian and russian counterparts, it has a big influence on the world, as it is fast growing and tries to connect with many gangs to benfit from it. It controls roughly 75% of brothels in Lonsdale City, alot of which is in Soho.

Yardies

Originally from Kingston Jamaica, A Large ammount of Yardies are now in London, and one of London's most feared and ruthless Gangs. They are Involved in Ilegal Drug trade, Gun crime and Crack cocaine, marijuana.

Dragon Triads

The Triads, formed originally in Hong kong, It is now one of the most powerfull Asian Gangs operating in Lonsdale city and the U.K. They are expanding their operation in every-direction, from Human trafficking to Extortion.

Tamil Tigers

Tamil Tigers are Based on the Tamil Snaked said to be southern Asian. Their is not much imfo as This Gang isn't one of the biggest in Lonsdale, But it was one of the first ever street Gangs, and is still running today, But not as Major as they were. They are in the bad books for thei Brutal killings of victims.

The Kane Firm

This Gang is an Old school cockney Gang, A well-respected and powerfull Gangs in Lonsdale City. They were said to of been formed in the 1970's. Whilst alot of powerfull members are behind bars, the Gang still Operates, and their biggest involvments are protection Rackets, and armed robberies.

The Ndrangheta

This Cartel or Mafia originates in Italy, although with most of it's presence being there, it has invested in alot of Ilegal and legitmate buissneses for their Evil purposes, to enrich itself with power, money and greed. They are responsible for importing 80% of the whole of europes cocaine, therefore have members and associates committing criminal acts all over europe.




Major Characters

Raj Khan - 29 year old, sri Lankan refugee, living in Lonsdale City 2010. Works for his Dad Aaran Khan, supossingly in a corner shop, only to find out that not only was the food drugs, but he owed money to a Loan-shark and boss of a small Pakistani Gang, Khalid Masood. Raj is the Protagonist.

Aaran Khan - 57 year old, came to England lonsdale city, to look for a Job and get out of Sri Lanka. However with him trying his best to avoid crime, he found himself earning so little, that he decided to hide and sell drugs in his groceries and food. But to start that buissness he took a Loan from a Loan shark Khalid masood.

Khalid Masood - 40 year old man, Moved when he was 38 from the conflictm in Pakistan, he used to be an ilegal arms trader for the Taliban, however he was arrested, and after that he came to Lonsdale city, to start a Loan-sharking and criminal entiprise.

Borislav Ivankovic - 50 year old man, and Head od the Ivankovic Bratva in Lonsdale city, a fairly powerfull and one of the few Organized Bratva's in the world. He befriends you through Khalid Masoods conections, finds out about you, and uses you for buissness, and uses you to kill Xaje Visar an Albanian Kingpin in Lonsdale city, so that Boris could take over his Brothels and assets.

Yuri Cohen - a 37 year old Isreali Refugee from Tel Aviv, he was beleived to previously sell fire arms to israeli special forces, however when the Russian Mafiya took over the israeli underworld, thats when he met Boris Invankovic, and worked for him and became his personal body-guard in his russian Bratva.


Xaje Visar - a 47 year old Kingpin in lonsdale city, he is believed to have carried out murders, arms smuggling and ownage of Brothels, when he is killed by Raj, the Albanians are Furiouse with the Russians, however Boris Ivankovic blames everything on you, and hands you over to the Albanians making the Albanians and russians allies again. You do work for the albanians as you explain to them it was Boris who made you kill Xaje, but the Albanians already know that, for a final task they ask you to kill Boris as a final favour, and they betrayed the russian-albanian alliance.

Jackie Woo - a 60 year old man, Head of the Dragon Triads based on the 14k triads in London a medium sized operation. When you work for him, He asks you to dismantle a number of operations, the first one's are the Yardies who havent been paying protection for being on triad turf, you go to them, and ask for it, they refuse to pay however so you start a gang-war and finish them off along with your triad allies.

Salvatore Velaro - a 50 year old man, Head of the Ndrangheta clan, The Igzani's who are operating in London, funding Ilegal and Legitimate buissneses. When you meet, he asks you to do much work for him, involved whacking some of his Members and associates, them being pretend Union delagates working for you, however they have decided to pocket most of the cash which angers sal, you kill them.


More Characters and features coming soon...




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Posted 02 May 2009 - 02:18 PM

I do like the idea of London Lols!
Also i think the story is good, it is plain orginal out of the mind! tounge.gif

Keep it coming nice job cookie.gif !!!!

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Posted 02 May 2009 - 03:12 PM Edited by Jacky Fiend, 02 May 2009 - 03:16 PM.

I guess you've given up on Orland City now then? I like the name Lonsdale City though.

I've got to ask - what side of the war was Raj fighting on? Because that can reveal lots about his character. Was he fighting for the Sri Lankan Government? Tamil Tigers? Or another faction?

I like the Robberies feature, looks awfully familiar. sly.gif

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Posted 02 May 2009 - 03:25 PM

He was fighting for the Tamil tigers.
I read quite a bit about them, His uncle wasn't though, his uncle had gone to Londsale in search of work. And i did have ideas from your post icon14.gif

About giving up on Orland thats not true at all, you sir have made GTA majestic, Los santos and las venturas.
Why did you give up on Los santos and have it locked?

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Posted 02 May 2009 - 03:30 PM Edited by Jacky Fiend, 02 May 2009 - 03:45 PM.

It's Great Britain, by the way, not Great England. We just call it England - there's nothing great about it. Trust me.

Why did Raj leave the conflict if he was on the winning side then? The Sri Lankan Government have pretty much defeated the Tamil Tigers, as far as they're concerned, so I don't see why he'd want to flee a war he's about to win.

Why does it say that Khalid was the one too screw Raj over? If anything his Uncle did by not paying him the money he owes Khalid.

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About giving up on Orland thats not true at all, you sir have made GTA majestic, Los santos and las venturas.
Why did you give up on Los santos and have it locked?


Las Venturas is my main project while Majestic City is a join effort being worked on by both me and Chunk (as mentioned in the opening post); I had Los Santos closed because I didn't want to stretch myself out too far. sly.gif

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Posted 02 May 2009 - 04:08 PM

QUOTE (Jacky Fiend @ May 2 2009, 15:30)
It's Great Britain, by the way, not Great England. We just call it England - there's nothing great about it. Trust me.

Why did Raj leave the conflict if he was on the winning side then? The Sri Lankan Government have pretty much defeated the Tamil Tigers, as far as they're concerned, so I don't see why he'd want to flee a war he's about to win.

Why does it say that Khalid was the one too screw Raj over? If anything his Uncle did by not paying him the money he owes Khalid.

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About giving up on Orland thats not true at all, you sir have made GTA majestic, Los santos and las venturas.
Why did you give up on Los santos and have it locked?


Las Venturas is my main project while Majestic City is a join effort being worked on by both me and Chunk (as mentioned in the opening post); I had Los Santos closed because I didn't want to stretch myself out too far. sly.gif

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It's Great Britain, by the way, not Great England. We just call it England - there's nothing great about it. Trust me.


The size of the house prices ph34r.gif

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Posted 02 May 2009 - 10:38 PM

QUOTE (Jacky Fiend @ May 2 2009, 15:30)
It's Great Britain, by the way, not Great England. We just call it England - there's nothing great about it. Trust me.

Why did Raj leave the conflict if he was on the winning side then? The Sri Lankan Government have pretty much defeated the Tamil Tigers, as far as they're concerned, so I don't see why he'd want to flee a war he's about to win.

Why does it say that Khalid was the one too screw Raj over? If anything his Uncle did by not paying him the money he owes Khalid.

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About giving up on Orland thats not true at all, you sir have made GTA majestic, Los santos and las venturas.
Why did you give up on Los santos and have it locked?


Las Venturas is my main project while Majestic City is a join effort being worked on by both me and Chunk (as mentioned in the opening post); I had Los Santos closed because I didn't want to stretch myself out too far. sly.gif

If your Uncle owes money to somebody, would you let a bunch of Pakistani members beat him to death? i think not, when i say screwed over i dont mean it like that, i mean it like Khalid sort of Just wanted to get the money but just in a Insane violent way. He could of at least waited. But since this is GTA he didn't and now you go through the story to help get money from people you work with, In the end Khalid wantes to kill you aswell, so what would you do if you were Raj?

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Posted 02 May 2009 - 10:40 PM

QUOTE (Sanjeem @ May 2 2009, 23:38)
...so what would you do if you were Raj?

Earn the money and pay him back.

You didn't answer any of my other questions. tounge.gif

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Posted 02 May 2009 - 10:43 PM

Well personally I think this is great. The features look pretty dam awesome as well.

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Posted 02 May 2009 - 10:46 PM

QUOTE (Jacky Fiend @ May 2 2009, 22:40)
QUOTE (Sanjeem @ May 2 2009, 23:38)
...so what would you do if you were Raj?

Earn the money and pay him back.

You didn't answer any of my other questions. tounge.gif

Sorry, I am not too sure about the war right now, it was just an excuse as a storyline so that Raj could move to Londsale although, i will do some research. My teacher told me alot of them were fleeing because of the wars and many people where suffering and being killed. Raj didn't like the whole war theme either.

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Posted 03 May 2009 - 06:27 AM

I think a sri lankan man suits Lonsdale city, because their are loads of them over their, nice work, i kind of like it rolleyes.gif

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Posted 03 May 2009 - 06:34 AM

QUOTE (Mr.Bulgarin @ May 3 2009, 07:27)
I think a sri lankan man suits Lonsdale city, because their are loads of them over their...

There are pretty much people of every colour, creed and religion in London. It's one big cultural melting pot with hundreds of stories to tell. That's one reason I think Rockstar haven't tackled London yet; they just haven't been able to do it justice up until this point.

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Posted 03 May 2009 - 06:39 AM

I esspecially liked your story sanjeem, and the drugs hidden in the foood, thats good thinking.
Also it is nicely set out which is good, Please do more!!!!!! it looks awesome.

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Posted 03 May 2009 - 06:41 AM

I personnally think this is your best GTA topic considering you have done around 5 on this forum. happy.gif

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Posted 03 May 2009 - 06:44 AM

QUOTE (Asian-Invasion @ May 3 2009, 06:41)
I personnally think this is your best GTA topic considering you have done around 5 on this forum. happy.gif

I know i have done quite alot. Most of them where just simple plain ideas without thought. This one however has thought put into it, This and Orland City.

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Posted 03 May 2009 - 06:45 AM

This is good, but you need to stick with this and not make another GTA. I made Lincoln State and have stuck with it. It makes people more aware of the topic and you will get more replies.

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Posted 03 May 2009 - 06:46 AM

QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ May 3 2009, 06:45)
This is good, but you need to stick with this and not make another GTA. I made Lincoln State and have stuck with it. It makes people more aware of the topic and you will get more replies.

I will update it weekly, since i am at boarding school, i can only acces onto this sight rarely their. Have to do it at the weekends.

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Posted 03 May 2009 - 09:45 AM

Try and put parachutes in, seeing big ben whilst falling from the sky must be cool sight.

colgate.gif Also make a extra special featured section with all the knew game features it has that IV or something didn't.

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Posted 03 May 2009 - 12:57 PM

I rather like this GTA game that you have made. Don't give up on it, it is Genius, just improve on it.

One question aswell, How big is the game in Mind? bigger than IV?

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Posted 03 May 2009 - 01:13 PM

Updated on Gameplay and Sidemissions. More will come to it soon of course. And to the above question above, The game will have 2 airports to roughly the size of San andreas.

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Posted 03 May 2009 - 02:42 PM

The Only thing i don't like about this game is the fact that, It is set in London.
The only thing you will need in that place is a Knife and the story is all good but still lols tounge2.gif

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Posted 03 May 2009 - 03:02 PM

QUOTE (Mr.Bulgarin @ May 3 2009, 15:42)
The Only thing i don't like about this game is the fact that, It is set in London.
The only thing you will need in that place is a Knife and the story is all good but still lols tounge2.gif

What is wrong with London? It's no worse than some of the other places I've seen people suggest - Grand Theft Auto Toronto? No thanks!

Gun crime is a serious problem in London, as it is in any other major city. There is a rising number of gun related incidents seen across the capital and I don't think a knife will help you when you come face to face with a loaded pistol. There was a recent shooting in south-west London as a matter of fact.

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Posted 17 May 2009 - 02:05 PM

Update:

Missions

Mission Intro: Arrival

It was 2:00 oclock in the morning, and Raj Khan had just got off a plane from Sri Lanka.
He was waiting in the pick-up zone for his Uncle Harran Khan.
He saw taxis and cars go by whilst seeing peds get into their cars and heard the sound of Planes taking off and passing above. He looked into the distance and glanced at the twinkiling city, with all the sign Boards lit up advertising things in the Big city.

Raj Had waited for a while now and their was no sign of his Uncle. He had no mobile phone on him so he went to a pay-phone and dialed his Uncles number. The phone Rang and sombody picked up.

Indian man: Hello who is speaking?

That sombody who picked up was not his uncle though.

Raj: Hello, Um i am calling for my uncle, and I dont think you are him, Unless your Voice has got Drasticly high in the past four years.
Indian man: No no, I'm sanjit i work for your uncle *The man yawns* so, what is it that you want.
Raj: I want to know why my uncle isn't here to pick me up, and why do you have the his telephone?
Sanjit: I heard it ringing on the table in the shop. I was just sleeping, he must of left it behind, so i picked up.
Raj: ok, so how the hell do you suggest i get out of here.
Sanjit: where are you right now?
Raj: Hamerthrow international airport (based on heathrow)
Sanjit: Ok, i will be their soon to pick you up, Honestly i don't even know where your uncle is, goodbye.

Raj hung up the pay-phone and went to sit down on the seats outside.
He took out some gum from his Inside pocket and started chewing on it.

Another cutscene begins.
Raj is sleeping on the seats waiting for this man called Sanjit. The nights and early morning were cold, and silent, their was nothing apart from the occasional plane passing overhead.
The silence though was broken, with the sound of screeching wheels coming closer. Raj woke up from the sound and looked into the distance.
A black Taxi was coming towards him fast out of the fog. Raj saw a skinny Indian man with a turban on in the taxi, who he thought to be Sanjit.

The Black Taxi pulled up in front of him and the Man got out and walked towards Raj.

Sanjit: Hello?, you must be Raj, harrans....
Raj: Yes yes, thats me Raj Khan.
Sanjit: Excelent a pleasure to meet you *shakes hands with Raj* you look tired.
Raj: That i am, same applies to you.
Sanjit: Yes, i'm afraid you woke me up *chuckles*
Raj: Sorry about that, i wasn't to know.
Sanjit: Of course you wern't, here let me help you with your bags.
Raj: oh, thankyou. *Raj walks towards the Taxi rubbing his eyes*
Sanjit: Do you mind driving?
Raj: Why not, might aswell.
Sanjit: Thank-God, i'm so tired, i'm afraid i'll fall asleep at the wheel. *throws Raj the keys and they both get in*

You are now in control of your character, and it will say to follow the Dark green Line on the map to get to your destination in Wembly (based on wimbledon)

Raj: So, do you work for my uncle alot?
Sanjit: *yawns* ah, yes i do, Usuually i'll be in the corner shop on, Mondays tuesdays and fridays helping him.
Raj: When did you move to this City.
Sanjit: *very tired voice*I came over with my familly from India, Their was a terrorist attack in Mumbai, My familly felt no longer safe, especially with the kashmir war against Pakistan
Raj: I suppose it was for the better to move here, however don't you ever miss Mumbai...
Sanjit: (No reply)....
Raj: Hey sanjit....
Sanjit: (snores)...
Raj: Oh never mind!


You now have a peacfull journey to the shop in wembly.
When you arrive you drive the car into a parked area where an orange marker is.

A cutscene begins, you see the corner shop and the two of you in the car. You switch off the engine and Sanjit Suddenly awakes, For a second muttering things in his sleep until he awakes properly.

Sanjit: Oh.....we are here. *sanjit sits up properly and rubs his eyes* Common let me show you to the appartment above the shop.

Raj and Sanjit get out, and Sanjit opens the corner shop doors and leads you up to your apartment through the shop. You go up some stairs and enter the appartment. Sanjit shows you your room and your bed.

Sanjit: Here is your room and bed, Hope you like it.
Raj: Don't worry, it's better than what i had in sri lanka.
Sanjit: mmm, Well, i better be off now, i'm going home and having a little snooze.
Raj: you do that

Sanjit just about to walk downstairs when Raj stops him.

Raj: Hey sanjit!
Sanjit: Yes?
Raj: Is my Uncle ok, not in any trouble?
Sanjit: I'm sure he's fine, you might see him tomorow.
Raj: Ok, thankyou sanjit for everything.
Sanjit: No problem, Goodnight *shuts the door behind him*


It will now say how to save the game by pressing triangle when near the bed.

End of Mission.

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Posted 17 May 2009 - 04:04 PM

QUOTE (Jacky Fiend @ May 3 2009, 15:02)
QUOTE (Mr.Bulgarin @ May 3 2009, 15:42)
The Only thing i don't like about this game is the fact that, It is set in London.
The only thing you will need in that place is a Knife and the story is all good but still lols tounge2.gif

What is wrong with London? It's no worse than some of the other places I've seen people suggest - Grand Theft Auto Toronto? No thanks!

Gun crime is a serious problem in London, as it is in any other major city. There is a rising number of gun related incidents seen across the capital and I don't think a knife will help you when you come face to face with a loaded pistol. There was a recent shooting in south-west London as a matter of fact.

Yes gun crime is a serious problem in London but the gun crime going on is almost non existant compared to areas such as Detroit. He also was going on about knives as a joke as there's alot of stigma in the media about it.

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Posted 17 May 2009 - 05:06 PM

Am I the only one thinking of Londsdale? That's related to White Supremacy, right? (Not sure about the whole story).

This is a good idea, but I wonder: Is your protagonist one of those sweet hearted Niko Bellic types, or a bad ass Tommy type?

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Posted 17 May 2009 - 05:09 PM

QUOTE (ScratchCard @ May 17 2009, 18:06)
Am I the only one thinking of Londsdale? That's related to White Supremacy, right? (Not sure about the whole story).

Lonsdale is a British clothing company who make boxing equipment and other sports related clothing.

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Posted 17 May 2009 - 05:11 PM

"In the 1980s and 1990s, Lonsdale clothing became popular among skinheads and mod revivalists."

That's what I was talking about. Don't know how it is in England/US, but here it's often racists who wear that.

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Posted 17 May 2009 - 05:12 PM

QUOTE (ScratchCard @ May 17 2009, 18:11)
"In the 1980s and 1990s, Lonsdale clothing became popular among skinheads and mod revivalists."

That's what I was talking about.

There's a big difference between "skinhead" and "racist."

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Posted 17 May 2009 - 05:13 PM

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QUOTE (ScratchCard @ May 17 2009, 18:11)
"In the 1980s and 1990s, Lonsdale clothing became popular among skinheads and mod revivalists."

That's what I was talking about.

There's a big difference between "skinhead" and "racist."

I know. Like I said, I don't know the whole story.

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Posted 17 May 2009 - 05:15 PM

QUOTE (ScratchCard @ May 17 2009, 17:06)
Am I the only one thinking of Londsdale? That's related to White Supremacy, right? (Not sure about the whole story).

This is a good idea, but I wonder: Is your protagonist one of those sweet hearted Niko Bellic types, or a bad ass Tommy type?

Thankyou.
And to your question, he is a bit of both, it really depends. Each weekend i will be working on some missions, and you will see his character.

What i had in mind is that, He cares about familly, If their are people getting in his way, He will deal with them. Remember he was in the Tamil War in Sri Lanka. He has come to escape, but killing isn't a knew thing for him. If he has too kill sombody for the right reasons he will.

So in a way he is not like tommy who will just kill mindlessly for Money no matter who he upsets.




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