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Posted 12 March 2009 - 10:21 PM

Here's what I made of the story;

Ben Lopez, a Mexican ex-drug dealer, has been serving in the U.S Army for at least two years now. His childhood consisted of himself with three younger brothers, with two very abusive parents. At the age of 16, Benís father had eventually left the family, murdering the boys mother upon his departure, Ben nor his brothers have seen him since. Enraged with anger and cowering with fear, he was forced to sell drugs to street gangs at the mere age of 16 to simply survive and to take care of his three younger brothers. In 2002, at the age of 20 Ben had enrolled for the U.S Army, to escape his past and create a better life for himself, and his brothers.

Two years later, Ben had found millions of dollars worth of diamonds, next to several bodies. He took the diamonds to report to the Sergeant to obtain a medal for honesty. Once reported, the Sergeant took the diamonds, and framed Ben for saying he had killed the people, stole the diamonds and was going to sell them for drugs. This was believed to due the Police having evidence of Ben being an ex-drug dealer. Ben was forced back home to the dreaded Burrington which he had tried to escape.

Benís oldest brother was informed of Benís return, and agreed to pick him up from Burrington Airport. Once met he tells Ben who he is somewhat disappointed that Ben was unable to make a better life for himself. He explains how he has been working for a Puerto Rican drug dealer for several months, and that you should give him a visit once they get back to his runned down house. Once there, you are greeted by your beloved dog from childhood (felt like adding something unusual from other GTAís), your brother tells you to meet him at the dealers place where heíll make an introduction, gives you his phone number and tells you that you can use his old Turisimo-328 and throws you the keys. This is your first safe house, itís medium sized, with two floors but sort of untidy, like the South Bohan safe house in GTA IV. Thereís two bedrooms, one for your brother and the other for you. Your brother has not made contact with the others ever since you left for the U.S Army. One is supposedly working hard to become a Politician. Who youíll meet further in the game to try and help him unfairly to help him be a success in his career. The third has an unknown whereabouts but he will probably be found later on.

The Puerto Rican dealer is impressed with Benís progress and gun skills when he is told to kill an opposing gang dealer and is told to meet the gangs leader to do some jobs for him. Ben is told that his old Sergeant has sold the diamonds to his father, who is leader of his own criminal empire and major head of the state. Whilst also being a Politician, meaning he is very high in power. Ben tries to create his own criminal empire, in order to compete with his father. When his father finds out that his own son is trying to run him out of the state, he sends men to his house, kidnapping him and his brother and leaving them in the countryside of Carcer City. Not knowing where they are, they escape the country side, accompanied by your loving pet dog, you must follow him in order to find your way out of the countryside, into Carcer City, theyíll find themselves in an extremely busy street. Your brother recognises the area, and tells Ben heíll try to find the second brothers (the one wanting to become a politician) phone number and will inform you when he does. Ben is left with $270, whilst his father took the rest, his small criminal empire has been destroyed and now has to start from scratch in Carcer City. They stay at the second brothers a lot nicer house, and Ben will now have to do work for him.





I also thought of another weapon that the first gang you meet could use. The nail-gun. Due to the gang being small and guns being hard to find and only found in secret gun shops like in Liberty City. The gang can use nail guns due to them being easier and cheaper to find than regular guns. Itís still used by pulling a trigger, and can cause severe damage when used.

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 10:33 PM

I like it. The dog thing is unique, too. biggrin.gif

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 10:38 PM

QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 21:55)
Ok, I put three of those songs up, but I can't do the damned thumbnails.

Cool, also I'll try to find some more songs. But first prehaps for characters mabye some minor GTA IV characters like can be a major characters in the story.

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 10:39 PM

QUOTE (sethpenguin @ Mar 12 2009, 22:38)
QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 21:55)
Ok, I put three of those songs up, but I can't do the damned thumbnails.

Cool, also I'll try to find some more songs. But first prehaps for characters mabye some minor GTA IV characters like can be a major characters in the story.

Yes, that would probably be the case. Maybe the Little Jacobs gang can be explained in this story.

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 10:42 PM

QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 22:39)
QUOTE (sethpenguin @ Mar 12 2009, 22:38)
QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 21:55)
Ok, I put three of those songs up, but I can't do the damned thumbnails.

Cool, also I'll try to find some more songs. But first prehaps for characters mabye some minor GTA IV characters like can be a major characters in the story.

Yes, that would probably be the case. Maybe the Little Jacobs gang can be explained in this story.

Prehaps Elizabeta Torres can make an apperance as a girlfriend.

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 10:42 PM

QUOTE (sethpenguin @ Mar 12 2009, 22:42)
QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 22:39)
QUOTE (sethpenguin @ Mar 12 2009, 22:38)
QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 21:55)
Ok, I put three of those songs up, but I can't do the damned thumbnails.

Cool, also I'll try to find some more songs. But first prehaps for characters mabye some minor GTA IV characters like can be a major characters in the story.

Yes, that would probably be the case. Maybe the Little Jacobs gang can be explained in this story.

Prehaps Elizabeta Torres can make an apperance as a girlfriend.

Whoah, great idea! I'll try to fit that into the story.

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 10:46 PM

QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 22:42)
QUOTE (sethpenguin @ Mar 12 2009, 22:42)
QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 22:39)
QUOTE (sethpenguin @ Mar 12 2009, 22:38)
QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 21:55)
Ok, I put three of those songs up, but I can't do the damned thumbnails.

Cool, also I'll try to find some more songs. But first prehaps for characters mabye some minor GTA IV characters like can be a major characters in the story.

Yes, that would probably be the case. Maybe the Little Jacobs gang can be explained in this story.

Prehaps Elizabeta Torres can make an apperance as a girlfriend.

Whoah, great idea! I'll try to fit that into the story.

Thanks.

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 10:47 PM

QUOTE (sethpenguin @ Mar 12 2009, 22:42)
Prehaps Elizabeta Torres can make an apperance as a girlfriend.

Ha, that would be quite funny but interesting. She could be the first girlfriend you meet, she's slimmer back then as she is in some concept art if you look. But it turns out she only likes you due to you being a drug dealer where she'd steal some coke off you or something when your not looking. When you find out they break up and she leaves for Liberty City to become the successful drug dealer she is.

Sort of makes an interesting story connected to GTA IV.

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 10:55 PM

Also some more song suggestions,

D12 ft Eminem-My Band
Eminem ft D12-One 2 Shot
Twista ft Kanye West-Slow Jamz
D12-Purple Pills

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 11:06 PM

Thanks for the songs and idea. I might show the whole story, from beggining to end, in summary.

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 11:08 PM Edited by sethpenguin, 12 March 2009 - 11:14 PM.

QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 23:06)
Thanks for the songs and idea. I might show the whole story, from beggining to end, in summary.

Sound good also prehaps you could include Roman Bellic making an appereance, his role could be an annoying tourist who gets into trouble with the gangs.

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 11:11 PM

QUOTE (sethpenguin @ Mar 12 2009, 23:08)
QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 23:06)
Thanks for the songs and idea. I might show the whole story, from beggining to end, in summary.

Sound good also rehas you could include Roman Bellic making an appereance, his role could be an annoying tourist who gets into trouble with the gangs.

Maybe, but was Roman in America when it was 2004?

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 11:13 PM

QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 23:11)
QUOTE (sethpenguin @ Mar 12 2009, 23:08)
QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 23:06)
Thanks for the songs and idea. I might show the whole story, from beggining to end, in summary.

Sound good also rehas you could include Roman Bellic making an appereance, his role could be an annoying tourist who gets into trouble with the gangs.

Maybe, but was Roman in America when it was 2004?

He moved to Liberty City in 1998.

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 11:18 PM

Ok, then he might make a tiny appearance. Also, should I post the different districts of each city and countryside?

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 11:19 PM

It's up to you.

BTW are you going add those songs I just suggested?

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 11:22 PM

QUOTE (sethpenguin @ Mar 12 2009, 23:19)
It's up to you.

BTW are you going add those songs I just suggested?

Oh, forgot. I'll add them right now.

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 11:32 PM Edited by Dragonex100, 12 March 2009 - 11:39 PM.

Does any one have any ideas for a rock station or 2004 Hit music station or something? EDIT: I made a classic rock station. Its song-less, though. I know a few good songs for it. biggrin.gif Still need other stations.

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 11:41 PM

QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 23:22)
QUOTE (sethpenguin @ Mar 12 2009, 23:19)
It's up to you.

BTW are you going add those songs I just suggested?

Oh, forgot. I'll add them right now.

OK but you should change it so that the song names are the links not the artist. Also here's another idea for a radio station (that you could just copy and paste it into the original post)

The Lincoln Vibe:R&B/Pop
Songs:
Black Eyed Peas-Where is The Love?
Outkast-The Way You Move
Usher-Burn
John Legend-Used to Love You

Try to find more.

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Posted 12 March 2009 - 11:56 PM

Ok, I added the station. I need to find some good driving rock songs. Probably AC/DC or Ossy Osbourn.

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Posted 13 March 2009 - 12:03 AM

QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 12 2009, 23:56)
Ok, I added the station.

Thank you but there are a few errors in the text.

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The Lincoln Vibe:R&B/Pop
Songs:
Wheres the love at? Black eyed peas
Wheres the love at? Black eyed peas]The way you move[/URL]Outkast
BurnUsher
Used to love you John legend




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Posted 13 March 2009 - 12:04 AM

Oops, thanks, I'll fix that. Added two songs in the rock station.

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Posted 13 March 2009 - 12:36 AM

QUOTE (Dragonex100 @ Mar 13 2009, 00:04)
Oops, thanks, I'll fix that. Added two songs in the rock station.

Ok one more mistake, the song My Band is by D12 not Twista.

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Posted 13 March 2009 - 12:52 AM

Ok, its fixed. I'm proud to say, after day ONE this thread is marked as a 'Hot Topic'

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Posted 13 March 2009 - 01:01 AM

QUOTE (sethpenguin @ Mar 12 2009, 23:13)

He moved to Liberty City in 1998.

I believe u, but where did u find this out that he came in 1998?

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Posted 13 March 2009 - 01:03 AM

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QUOTE (sethpenguin @ Mar 12 2009, 23:13)

He moved to Liberty City in 1998.

I believe u, but where did u find this out that he came in 1998?

In the events of GTA IV, which is set in 2008, Roman has been a Liberty city resident for 10 years. It is mentioned during cutscenes and in dialogue.

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Posted 13 March 2009 - 01:08 AM

Too much like SA imo...And dont people ever get tired of the un-realistic squarish maps..?

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Posted 13 March 2009 - 01:18 AM

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Too much like SA imo...And dont people ever get tired of the un-realistic squarish maps..?

How is it possible to make a map that is super-realisticly shaped? What matters is what is in the map anyway.

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Posted 13 March 2009 - 02:24 AM

This is good and is an amazing idea but the more realistic one to happen is the vice city thread by 08Lasventuras.

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Posted 13 March 2009 - 11:09 AM

I think the vulture should be based on stealth jet. Also getaway driver sidemission. and maybe the ability to sell cars you steal?

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Posted 13 March 2009 - 12:12 PM

Yes, Vice City is more likely to happen than carccer city or this idea. But you never know right? Also, the Getaway driver mission is a good idea, but in the game you actually can rob banks your self, and be the getaway driver. But I may add that. I like the idea of selling cars. And I just might make the Vulture a stealth Jet icon14.gif




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