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#241

Posted 24 January 2009 - 10:07 AM Edited by Build Up Your Gang, 24 January 2009 - 10:10 AM.

radicell here... Big-Money
Please use the EDIT button. Do not double (or in your case, quadruple) post. THIS IS YOUR ONLY WARNING

You have been added to Dwayne's apartment.

Rucke:

that's unfortunate, you've been keeping this going for quite sometime, so thanks for that. see you soon.
$40 and $45. for your two stories, good job with them. +$100 bonus for 15th story

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Hey, man! nice to see you around, you've been added. icon14.gif

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Alright, added.

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Definitely a good one for a first story. You've got great potential here, that's a $35. icon14.gif

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#242

Posted 24 January 2009 - 11:08 AM

Nice man ! But is this for the PC version? and when you say 35$ what do you mean with that?
And when i want some land for my gang do i have to pay in real life or is it this money i get when i do stories? smile.gif

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Posted 24 January 2009 - 11:09 AM

Ok, man but i own a Cab Depot so if someone needs a ride tell me wink.gif

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Posted 24 January 2009 - 12:26 PM

QUOTE (Big-Money @ Jan 24 2009, 19:09)
Ok, man but i own a Cab Depot so if someone needs a ride tell me wink.gif

Read the f*cking first post. Seriously?
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The concept of this is not hard; you simply pick a gang and one of its areas. You then write stories for that gang and asset. You will receive $$$ for the stories you write. Remember, better stories means more $$$ (no one said length was a bad idea either).


Rule #7 states DO NOT DOUBLE POST. Know what this means? Use the EDIT button. I've already asked for all your previous double/quadruple posts to be merged. If you double post in here again, you will be banned.

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#245

Posted 24 January 2009 - 08:44 PM

Can you please remove me from the angels of death, thanks, K bai.

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#246

Posted 25 January 2009 - 01:41 AM Edited by claude-3, 26 January 2009 - 05:35 AM.

There are some pretty inactive people, maybe you should give 'em a couple more days to post back to show they're still active, and if they don't then maybe you should take them off the list?

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Posted 31 January 2009 - 05:29 PM

Chapter 1: Introduction. It’s Just Business


Ever since the war between the Ancelotti and Pegorino, we have been getting a lot more respect from the other families. With a new Crimin Capo and Sotto Capo we have a fresh start. In 2007 Domenic ordered me and Frankie “Frankie Hearts” Gallo to whack 3 capos in the Ancelotti Family, Frank Garone, Charles Matteo and Big Mickey Sontoro. About 2 months later Nino Testa (My old Capo) was arrested for the murder and Gene Pegorino became the Capo of the Testa crew. My name is Carlo “Peeps” Decicco, my younger brother is a powerful Capo in the Pavano Family. His name is Nick “Baby Nicky” Decicco. I’m acting Capo for Gene’s crew as he is in ill status and he can not lead the crew. Domenic “Pip” Lombardozo was a Pegorino Capo for almost 24 years, though he is very invisible to the public; he is in fact the most murderous man in Liberty or even the country. Pip has ordered over 67 hits on the Five Families. In his life according to his former boss Jimmy Peg that Domenic has carried out 156 hits personally. Well I should start the story before I ramble on.


(Little Italy, Liberty City)

(Frankie and Phil and I were sitting in there car, waiting for Rosario Zito who is the new Gambetti Acting boss for almost half a year. Phil, Frankie and I have been assigned to clip Roy. Roy owes Loopy Lupisella for something and Loopy says that Roy has not paid him back on his depts.) “Jeez what’s taking this blood sucker so long?” Phil asked. I responded “He is taking up the ass by someone probably.” “Frankie, get your pistol, I’ll take the shotgun.” I said. (Frankie and I went into Roy’s apartment and quietly snuck in his kitchen. I started to hear footsteps coming closer and closer to the door; I held the shotgun in particular way so I can’t be detected. The door opened, but me and Frankie were as still as an Ice Cube.) “Peep, Peep”. Frankie calling me in a low voice, “Do we whack this maron or what?” he says to me and I responded “Not yet, when he turns on the light we will shoot.” I said.
(The Lights turned and my adrenaline pumped, everything has slowed down as we started to fire.) As quickly as the shooting started it ended. Frankie and I walked towards Roy. Roy is dead; we hear screaming and police sirens so we left in a hurry.
(As Frankie and Carlo ran out the apartment, Phil drove near them to pick them up.)
Frankie with blood on his clothes and face was in shock from what he had to see. Then again this is only his 3rd hit. Frankie is not a cold killer but he does get the job done.)

(The Next day in Westdyke, Alderney)

(Angelo “Big Daddy Scarfo” Scarfo and Pip are planning to rebuild the old casino into a nightclub/Café. I drove up to the construction site with Patsy Marino. Patsy and I go way back since the 70’s. Pasty helped me and I helped him.)
“Pip, Big Daddy how’s ‘it goin with the “Lupera” (Name of Club) Patsy said.
“Fair I would say” Pip replied. “Hey Angelo, can I speak to you about something?” I asked. “Sure.” He says. (Angelo and Carlo walk toward‘s the Lupera.) “I was thinking about Frankie and the Zito hit. Well Frankie and Phil have done a lot for the family and I was wandering if you know… they can get made.” I said. Angelo looked at me with high uncertainty. “Carlo, you know that there Irish and Cosa Nostra does not take kindly to micks.” He says. “Well Angelo you forgot that now you have to be Italian on your father side and Frankie is more Ital than Phil, Regardless their both Italian on their father’s side.” I said. (Angelo looked at me again but with an easy smile.) “Fine, but I will talk it over with Domenic.” Angelo said. (I was excited to tell Frankie and Phil, but I had to handle some business.)


(Hove Beach, Broker)
(69thst Dinner)
(My job was to whack a member of the Petrovic crew. This ass wipe owned Angelo 450k. So my job was to shoot him in public.)

I parked next to the entrance, I opened the door and something struck me in the back of my head. As I fell down The only thought in my mind was that… I am going to have to kill a lot of f*cking Russians.


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#248

Posted 05 February 2009 - 01:07 AM

THE ALBANIAN MOB

Epilogue: With What Happens


The lifeless, black night; why people desire to garner the warming, gleaming rays of the sun in their eyes and on their skin. Their life left hopeless and only the bright, fiery sun would heat up their dreary spirits. Nothing could darken on a day like this than how it already is. A blank figure stood in the middle of a paved street, staring off into the starred sky. Exhausted and bitter, a cold pistol in his hand; his clothes bloodied and his face stern and scowling.

He could no longer scavenge in any rubble of the destroyed morality that was once built into him, his life days and years ago was no longer obstructed in his cranium, only dust and black pity left. Just as he stared off into space and deep loneliness, a vehicle pulled up in front of him, its brightening headlights strongly piercing his grim and bloodshot eyes. The tired man quickly curtained his eyes with his arm and shut his lids and grimaced. A voice rung through his head. He remembered something; at least something. Valon Topali was back inside his cruel world, with the simple mumbling of words that brought it back. He only wanted to glance back on the life before everything happened.

“Valon?”

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#249

Posted 06 February 2009 - 07:38 PM

Making up new ideas took shorter than I thought. I'll probably be back with a new story at the end of next week.
I'm gonna write about after the events of GTA and since many characters has been killed (including Ray, Pegorino and Anthony Corrado) I'm gonna introduce some new ones.

Benito "Benny" Marcone, 63 year old underboss of the Pegorino crime family who just has been released from prison to become boss after Pegorino's death. He's real old school and is born in the old country.

Benny Jr. Marcone, Benny's son who just has become a made member in the family. Nobody really got some high hopes in this kid becouse he always abuses his fathers power but he's going to be a good earner later on. 32 years old.

Victor Martiano, 50 year old brother of late George Martiano (the capo that was killed in chapter one for being a rat). Victor is back from hiding after he killed a made Ancelotti member as a favour for Pegorino.

Johnny Spaneglia, 41 year old long time soldier in the Pegorino family. Just like Benny Marcone he has just been released from prison. Before he went in he was Albert's best friend, now he's gonna have to compete with Dog Corella.

Mario Angelo, 47 year old capo in The Ancelotti Crime Family based in Little Italy. Owns a pizzeria not far away from Drusilla's. He dislike the Pegorino construction in South Alqonquin and does everything to get a share out of it.

All I can reveal about the next chapter is that it's going to be called "Reuniting the Family".

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#250

Posted 08 February 2009 - 12:33 AM

Nice ideas Rucke. icon14.gif

BUYG IV needs more members for the BUYG account. So far, only radicell has been rating the stories. I was thinking of joining a gang, but maybe when this is a little more active. If I can help in any way, that would be great. smile.gif

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Posted 08 February 2009 - 05:22 AM

I will join the Petrovic Bratva at the Cabaret Club.

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#252

Posted 09 February 2009 - 12:28 PM

VinnieLeone
A better introduction to your stories than before, $35.

Wanted Assailant
That was a great passage, but rather short for a BUYG story. $30. It's interesting how you start with the epilogue first.

Rucke
Looking forward to your return, mate.

william
Well, you've helped out graciously with the new gangs, maybe now we'll write a few stories, eh? biggrin.gif

You guys can probably guess who I am (radi...). I'm not too sure about this topic's future. It's recently been plagued by banned senseless members, PBMs, and inactivity. I'm just hoping some more people will come around to participate; thanks to those writing for having faith in it. icon14.gif

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 02:04 PM

I PM:d over 50 guys probably and told them to join GTA IV BUYG.

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 02:27 PM Edited by mrpain, 09 February 2009 - 02:57 PM.

I will join the M.O.B. Hell yea...


EDIT: If im in the gang, I would like to be placed at the Outlook Pay'n'Spray.

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 05:18 PM

Don't f*cking PM me any advertisements for this sh*tty game ever again.

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 09:40 PM

I got a private message about this. I would be interested in doing Spanish Lords at the South Bohan Projects. I know there is a guy in that slot... but he hasn't written any stories or anything. Let me know if I can take that.

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 10:52 PM

QUOTE (Jordy. @ Feb 9 2009, 17:18)
Don't f*cking PM me any advertisements for this sh*tty game ever again.

Nice, that was a worthless post.

For now I'm going to write stories in the other BUYG topic. But I might join this one in a couple of days or something. smile.gif

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Posted 10 February 2009 - 09:22 AM Edited by mrpain, 10 February 2009 - 10:46 AM.

Hey didnt see my name in the M.O.B list. Wat gives?
Anyway Im still gonna write a story now for the M.O.B.

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M.O.B
Chapter 1: Proving Youself


Episode One: Joining the gang.


Sitting in my car, a brown Futo, I keep staring at the Outlook Pay'N'Spray. Should I join or should I dont? I got out of my car and walk slowly into the Pay'N'Spray. "I'm here to join the Money Over Bitches!" I cant believe I just shouted just like that infront of some M.O.B gangsters.

"You wanna join?" the newly appointed leader of the M.O.B, Jermaine Andrews, asked me, "Do one job with me and maybe you can brother."

"A job now? So fast? Yo I only have a knife and a pistol with me now." I replied.

"Dont worry this job gonna be easy yo." And so me and Jermaine got into his Black Manana and he was driving us to one of the Jamaican gang Hillside Posse's apartments. "Whats you name bro? And what are you?"

"My name's Sammy Rock but you can call me by my street name, MrPain. I've been wanting to join the M.O.B all my life and take over the Liberty City."

"You will my brother, only if you can do this job properly and join the gang."


We arrived at the apartment. Jermaine said we are hitting a Jamaican dude called Christian as he was responsible for killing one of the M.O.B. We were just outside the apartment's door with just pistols and knifes. We can hear few Jamaican dudes talking Rasta sh*t inside. Jermaine smashed opened the door and fired a few rounds hitting nobody. What luck. So far I've only seen 4 Jamaicans and no Christian. They all had shotguns and we had pistols. We're f*ckED!. But I didnt cared because I wanted to join the M.O.B so bad. No turning back now...

I told Jermaine to stop firing and let me do it my way and I was surprised he agreed. The Jamaicans thought we were dead and one of them came to the door to check on us. When he came to the door, I quickly swapped out my knife and stab him to death. I fired a few shots into the room killing one of them and shot a headshot onto another. Last guy remaining and he knocked me down onto the floor with his shotgun and was about to shoot me. "I gonna kill you bloodclot'."

"Too bad rasta." Jermaine finally got a shot into somebody and killed that Jamaican.
"See all those bullet holes in that wall? Thats all your missied shots." I insulted Jermaine.
"Cheeky nigga." Jermaine just laughed. "Lets find that Christian rasta now."

Right after that, Christian ran out of his apartment from where he was hiding and was heading towards the roof. We ran upstairs and Christian threw a brick at Jermaine injuring his leg. "Get the f*cking rasta." Jermaine ordered me and so I kept running after Christian. We were on the roof and I pull the trigger of my pistol. Then I realised I have not reloaded my gun. He took out his knife and so did I. It was a knife on knife.

He lashed out with the knife and missed causing an opportunity for me to stab him. I stab him in the back, twisted my knife and stab him once more in the leg. He should be dead right now. As I was walking away, I heard a gunshot. Jermaine fired Christian as he was about to backstab me.

We got to the Manana and Jermaine said, "Good job MrPain. You're with the M.O.B, but you're not in the M.O.B. If you wanna be in the M.O.B, you gotta complete 4 tests." Jermaine started the engine and asked me to drive. We noticed some Jamaicans in Voodoo cars with their guns out heading towards us. " Here comes test #1, Getaway Driver! "


So the test begins and I put my foot hard onto the accelerator.

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Posted 10 February 2009 - 12:24 PM Edited by Rucke, 10 February 2009 - 12:26 PM.

QUOTE (mrpain @ Feb 10 2009, 10:22)
Hey didnt see my name in the M.O.B list. Wat gives?
Anyway Im still gonna write a story now for the M.O.B.


radicell (the BUYG admin) visits the thread once a week. Sometimes more than once a week. When he get here next time he will write your name on the M.O.B gang. And nice first story mrpain icon14.gif

@ Mafioso86

When radicell visits the thread next time I'm sure he will put your name there instead couse we don't want inactive people here.

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Posted 11 February 2009 - 01:01 PM

QUOTE (Rucke @ Feb 10 2009, 12:24)
QUOTE (mrpain @ Feb 10 2009, 10:22)
Hey didnt see my name in the M.O.B list. Wat gives?
Anyway Im still gonna write a story now for the M.O.B.


radicell (the BUYG admin) visits the thread once a week. Sometimes more than once a week. When he get here next time he will write your name on the M.O.B gang. And nice first story mrpain icon14.gif

Yea cant wait for my name to be put down on the M.O.B list cause I got another story coming out of my mind

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Posted 12 February 2009 - 03:24 AM

Big-Money should be removed from the North Holland Hustlers, at: Dwayne's Apartment because he's banned.

Also, Pr0xy flooder (sorry if name spelt wrong) requested to leave the Navy Yard for the Angels Of Death.

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Posted 12 February 2009 - 10:22 AM

Still havent seen my name on the M.O.B list but wat the heck heres my 2nd story.Kinda short but still worth a read.


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Chapter 1: Proving Youself



Episode Two: Test #1 Getaway Driver



Three Jamaican Voodoo cars were heading towards us with guns firing. I didnt drive Jermaine's Manana before so it was difficult for me to drive. "Once you hijack a car, you gotta feel comfortable with it and just drive smoothly. Know what's the car's strengths and weaknesses." That's the advice Jermaine gave to me. Jermaine open fire at them but missed as usual.

If we want to get rid of these Rastas I gotta do it myself! I drove full speed ahead against heavy traffic and noticed a truck coming up on a three way road intersection. I drove and drift to the right and one of the Voodoo cars got smashed by the truck. Two left. I realized the two left were on both of my sides, one on the left while the other on the right. They were trying to ram me off the road! I waited for one of them to hit. The right side Voodoo was about to hit me but luckily I braked and that car hit the car that was on my left side. Haha I gonna take this motherf*cking rasta down! Right after I thought that, Jermaine spoilt mine fun when he shot the Jamaicans in that last Voodoo.

"Thats the last of em'. You did good MrPain." Jermaine then got a text message from one of the M.O.B saying that a gang war has occurred at Firefly Projects with the Jamaicans again. "Test #2, Gang War!"

I loaded my gun and off we were rollin!

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Posted 12 February 2009 - 01:36 PM

QUOTE (gtavices @ Feb 12 2009, 04:24)
Big-Money should be removed from the North Holland Hustlers, at: Dwayne's Apartment because he's banned.

Also, Pr0xy flooder (sorry if name spelt wrong) requested to leave the Navy Yard for the Angels Of Death.

Pr0xy has already request to be removed.

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Posted 12 February 2009 - 02:52 PM Edited by Rucke, 12 February 2009 - 02:55 PM.

Okay now I'm back on track!

Pegorino Crime Family
Drusilla's

(One year after chapter 16)

Chapter 17: Reuniting the Family

The family was a complete chaos becouse the death of many keymembers since last year. Members like Ray Boccino, Anthony Corrado and even Jimmy Pegorino himself had been killed. Pegorino was killed under mysterious circumstances during a drugdeal with the Russian Mafiya. Anthony Corrado was killed for being an FBI informant. He turned rat not long after the death of Mike Stabino. Ray was killed for being a suspected rat, but instead of giving the feds information he ratted out the Pegorino's to the Ancelotti and the Gambetti families.

Our underboss, Benito "Benny" Marcone was released from prison last month after 7 years in prison for a murder and was now gonna take over as boss after Pegorino's death. He was an old school mobster born in the old country. He liked to wear grey suits and always had a fedora hat when he went outside. He was hard but also fair and that was just what the Pegorino family needed right now. I didn't really like his son though. He's son, called Benny Jr. was in my opinion a lazy and spoiled kid who was made into the family only becouse of his father's power. The first thing Benny Sr. did when he got out was to made his son into my crew. Yes, now when Ray was gone I had become the new capo over his crew. Since me and Dog Corella was good friends he was moved over from La Villa's crew to mine. So new had had fellow respected soldiers on my side, Dog Corella, Sally Boy Florente, Benny Jr. and soon my old friend Johnny Spaneglia. He was going to be released tomorrow.

Right now I got out of my car outside Benny Marcone's house. He was having a comehome party for Victor Martiano, a soldier and brother of late George Martiano. He had returned after a few years in hiding after he killed a made Ancelotti member as a favour for Pegorino. Many high ranked members attented at the party, not Mark Toro though. He had been sentenced to 2 years in prison for narcotics so now his nephew, Joseph "Joey" Toro took care of the crew for him.

"Hey Albert! Glad you could come too." Marcone greeted me when I got inside. Marcone lived in a mansion not far away from Pegorino's old place.
"Benny, how you doin'? Is our boy here yet?" I asked.
"No it's a suprise party. He thinks that I'm the only one here. Let's join in the living room." Marcone said.

Victor Martino knocked at the door at Marcone's mansion. When he got in, half the Pegorino family greeted him. Martino looked chocked but seemed very happy to join his old family again. Now when Dominic La Villa was gone he was going to step up as capo over La Villa's crew. That meaned that he was going to be my new partner in our South Algonquin Construction Project.

"Jeez, I don't know what to say. Thanks everybody." Martino said.
"Welcome home Victor!" All the family members shouted.

When I got out from the bathroom Benny Marcone wanted to talk with me. He all of a sudden seemed very serious.

"Albert you know Jimmy Pegorino was like a brother to me. I want these russian assholes to understand what they did to me." Marcone said.
"I'm not sure I understand." I said. But it was pretty clear that he wanted someone gone.
"Alexi Krakovich is reputed to be the new leader after that Dimitri Rascalov's death. I want you or some of your boys to kill him." Marcone said.
"Don't worry boss, I'll get it done." I said.

The next day I woke up early. I was gonna pick up Johnny Spaneglia outside the Alderney State Correctional Facility. I was going to pick him up at 11 a.m. He had been inside for 5 years now for recketeering charges and I was honesty a bit nervous to meet him again after all this time. When I got there a saw Johnny standing outside in a white t-shirt and blue jeans. He looked exactly the same.

"Johnny my man! How are you old friend?" I asked when I got out the car.
"Hey Albert. I'm really happy to see you after all this time. Oh I can see you've put on some weight." Johnny joked.
"You f*cking jerk, I was gonna say you looked exactly the same but now I don't." I laughed.
"Now when I'm out, let's celibrate. Why don't we go to Jaggy's Steakhouse?" Johhny asked while we got in the car.
"They closed 4 years ago..." I said.
"Dammit, I liked that place." Johnny said.
"Look if you want to get back on your feet and earn back some respect I might have a job for you." I said.
"I'm always open for that." Johnny said and smiled at me.

I told him about the russian called Alexi that Marcone wanted dead. Johnny agreed to kill him right away so we headed over to the Camrades Bar in Hove Beach, Broker where he used to hang out. When we got there Alexi was on his way in. Johnny got out from my car and popped a bullet into Alexi's backhead. Then we headed to Auto Eroticar in Alderney. The owner called Earnie owed Ray Boccino alot of money but couldn't pay. Now when Ray was dead and I was the new capo it was me he owed the money to. It was this guy I got my Sentinel from.

"Hey Earnie, you got my money?" I asked when we walked in.
"No I'm sorry but I don't. Look, take one of the cars instead." Earnie said and that sounded like a great deal to me.
"Alright, I take that one." I said and pointed at a black PMP 600.
"Fine..." Earnie sighed.

Now when I got a new car I decided to give Johnny my Sentinel. A man in his position can't live without a car and especially not if he's working for me.

Chapter 17 end.

Chapter 18 coming soon.

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#265

Posted 13 February 2009 - 11:04 AM Edited by mrpain, 13 February 2009 - 11:08 AM.

Im still waiting for the admin to put my name on the M.O.B list. Heres my third story, wish I could have some cash for all of these stories that I wrote anyways. I seriously need some guns to buy for.

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M.O.B
Chapter 1: Proving Yourself


Episode 3: Test #2 GANG WAR


Firefly Projects, thats where I used to grow up. I remembered the playground and the ocean nearby. Now its full of drug dealers and sometimes gang wars. Now I'm part of one of those gang wars. Once Jermaine and me were near Firefly Projects, I can already hear gun shots nearby. We were parking our car at quite a distance from Firefly Projects. " Yo Jermaine, why we stopping here? "

" I want you to meet a guy from the M.O.B. We cant win the gang war by ourselves. " He then told me to wait in the car. Few minutes later, he came out with a guy with lots of bling. Jermaine came to me and said, " Hey this guy's name is Cash X. "

" What up! " That Cash X already knows about me as Jermaine told him about me already. " MrPain right? Lets go take Rastas bitches down! " And hell yeah we roll.

The gang war was happening at the playground. That playground was where I always used to relax when I was a kid. Now bullets fill up my childhood at the playground. Jermaine, Cash X and me got out the Manana and started shooting at whatever Rasta we saw. I noticed everytime one of our guys took cover at the swing sets he will always get shot at by a hidden shooter. While Jermaine and Cash X were busy with some Jamaicans, I decided to find the hidden shooter. I heard some shots coming out of a bush. I went there and saw a Jamaican with glasses and a hoody. I was gonna shoot him then a Jamaican shout out " Get tat bloodcot bout to shoot Jacob! " Then an oncoming car was about to hit me but I quickly dodge it. A Jamaican was about to throw a grenade at me so I quickly ran away and I past by the swing sets. The oncoming car hit the swings and was stuck. The guy with the grenade threw the grenade accidentally at the swings and exploding the car causing to fly in the air. Rastas suckas. I didn't cared about the hidden shooter anymore as he was fleeing away.

Cash X was the opposite of Jermaine from what I saw. Cash X was cocky while Jermaine was damn serious. " Hey Rastas, you aint gonna put a bullet in me! " Cash X was just shooting mad and hitting everyone he shoots unlike Jermaine who as usual, misses. As we were finishing the last of the Jamaicans, Jermaine told me about Cash X. He told me that Cash X can be a rat sometimes. Cash X is the 2nd in command for the M.O.B. Cash X can be loyal but at the same time he can be untrustworthy as he has his sights of conquering Liberty City. Just like me.

One last Jamaican left. " I always want to make my last kill stylish. " That's what Cash X said and was about to do. That Rasta did not have any ammo left so Cash X kick him in the nuts, pee all over him and shot him in the head 5 times. It was a stylish kill alright.

" Alright MrPain, usually after a gang war there will be cops so hustle up and let's go." Jermaine told me that and asked me to leave and go to the Outlook Pay'N'Spray. My brown Futo car was still there and when I reached there, I took my Futo and drove to Burger Shot. As I was eating there, a group of bikers came in. They were the Angels of Death. They were robbing the place. I called Jermaine and asked him what should I do?

" What should you do? Easy, Test #3, KILLING ON YOUR OWN! "

I didn't like this test but what the hell. If I wanna be a M.O.B, I gotta do this right.

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Posted 13 February 2009 - 01:01 PM

Alright guys, apologies for the holdup. As said, the admins get busy sometimes and we try to keep checking in here as staff account at least twice a week.

mrpain:
you've been added to the list, at long last. While your second chapter was rather short, I think your first and third chapter were great starters to a BUYG career. icon14.gif You got your cash, $35 for chapter 1, $29 for chapter 2, and $37 for chapter 3.

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Nice to see you back mate, and glad you've adopted an advanced storytelling approach of skipping in time! Keep up these excellent installments, you got $44 for that last story. Thanks for trying to spread publicity too, evidently it's worked with some people and not with others, thanks for trying to help out. icon14.gif

Big-Money and proxyflooder has been removed.

Jordy.
Yeah, well then, f*ck off.

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Glad you joined, I'll replace you right away. In fact, I'll be sending PM's to inactive members, if they don't reply they'll be wiped.

william prepared some new gangs for the IV BUYG, I'll add them hopefully tomorrow since I'll have to forward the PMs from my account to the BUYG account.


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Posted 13 February 2009 - 01:57 PM Edited by mrpain, 13 February 2009 - 02:00 PM.

Hell yeah I've been added!!! Since I got $201, I might as well buy the Sanchez bike. So I should have left $81 right now. Will be hard to think up a next story though.

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Posted 13 February 2009 - 06:41 PM

M.O.B
Chapter 1: Proving Yourself


Episode 4: Test #3 KILLING ON YOUR OWN


The bikers were shouting at everyone to give them money while I was hiding at a corner still eating my burger and I wish Jermaine and Cash X were here. Screw this! I came out of hiding, threw my burger into one of the bikers' face and blindly fired my pistol. I ran out of the Burger Shot and got into my Futo. Once I started my engine, the bikers were already on their bikes. It was easy for me to kill em' all because all I had to do was drive ram into them. So I ram and ram until they were all dead. I spared one biker though, he was about to die anyway. As I drove off, that biker was talking on the phone.

sh*t my car was badly damaged from all that ramming. The engine stopped a few times as I was driving. I then got a called from Cash X, "sh*t MrPain hurry up to the Pay'N'Spray!"
What the hell? What's wrong? I had a hard time driving there but once I reached there, I saw dirt bikes outside the Pay'N'Spray. I saw Cash X and he walked towards me and said, "These bikes are called Sanchezs, they are now new vehicles for the M.O.B. See that green Sanchez? That's yours."
"Thanks man!" Haha I can finally get rid of that Futo and got a new Sanchez bike!
"So MrPain, heard some bikers was robbing the Burger Shot and you kill all of them?" Cash X gave me a curious look.
"Hell yeah I did that." Then I noticed I can hear roar of bikes coming down from the street. I saw a gang of bikers speeding past by and one of them threw a grenade onto my Futo. KABOOM! Who cares about my Futo anyway?

"MrPain, I'm riding shotgun on your bike! Lets go take this motherf*cking bikers down. Lets roll bitches!" Some fellow M.O.B hop onto their Sanchez and drove. I got onto my green Sanchez and with Cash X behind, we were about to take some mother f*cking bikers down!

The M.O.B caught up with the Angels of Death. It was dirt bikes versus chopper bikes. We had 6 dirt bikes including mine chasing 10 chopper bikes. Let the bike wars begin. Cash X was shooting but kept missing due to the fast speed. One of the M.O.B got shot down already. " Pull up, I'm taking that bike! " Cash X got out of my bike and took the guy who got shot bike.
I fired my pistol at one of the biker's tire and he spun out and got killed by an incoming car. One of the M.O.B managed to destroy two bikes but did not kill the bikers. So I was like showing off doing a wheelie and I wasn't paying attention to what's in front of me then I heard a splat sound with blood splattering all over my bike. I then realized that I had wheelied someone right in the face. I then did a backflip with the help of a ramp and shot three bikers as I was landing. Whoa! Did I just did that?

So there's four of the Angels of Death left. Most of the M.O.B lost track of them but me and Cash X was at their tail. Four against two, sh*t that's not fair! Cash X shot two of them and caught up with one of the bikers. He was side by side with him. Cash X just punch the biker and the biker fell of his bike and then splattered his blood all over a wall he hit. One left and this f*cker is mine! I wanted to make this last kill stylish, just like Cash X. That biker turned around to face me. He took out his baseball bat and drove full speed towards me. Since he wanted to go with a baseball bat, I took out my knife drove towards him too. Drive by baseball bat versus drive by knife. What an odd match-up. He swung his baseball bat but I dodged and knife stab him. He then crashed into an oil tanker causing a huge explosion. I quickly met up with Cash X and Jermaine called him.

"Don't worry Jermaine we will meet you there." Cash X didn't look too happy, "Jermaine wants us to meet him to secretly follow a Jamaican with loads of cash in his van."
"Loads of cash? What are we waiting for? Lets go!" Jermaine told Cash X that we should probably take a car. So we parked our bikes at the Outlook Pay'N'Spray and took Cash X's blue Futo. We drove to a Jamaican cafe called 8-ball or something. Jermaine was already waiting in his Manana with another dude. "Hey MrPain, good job with that test. Your final test will come up soon. Oh this dude is also from the M.O.B and his name is SamO. He deals with business sh*t."
That SamO was about to finish his cigar and said to me "Yo MrPain right? I heard good things about you. Hope you can join the M.O.B."
Jermaine then told us what was the plan; two cars,which is us, following a Jamaican called Greedy Boi driving a van with loads of cash in it. Once he stopped, we will kill him and steal the van. I was in the Manana with Jermaine while SamO was with Cash X in the Futo. "Alright there's Greedy Boi going to the van. sh*t two more Jamaican cars following him. He's got protection!" Jermaine said the plan has changed and that Cash X and SamO must lead the two protection cars away from the van.

So we were following and the van stopped beside a prostitute. I was so pissed, "What the f*ck is this guy doing?!?"
"Relax, the hooker is a good opportunity for us" Jermaine then reloaded his gun.
They stopped at a private alleyway and the hooker was f*cking that Jamaican. Now it's our chance! Cash X and SamO was doing a drive by and the two protection cars gave chase to them. That Greedy Boi was still f*cking the hooker. Jermaine and I got out of the Manana and shot two bullets into the van to get that Greedy Boi's attention.
"Get out right now!" Jermaine was about to throw him out of the door but he came out with the hooker hostage.
"I aint givin up. Get away befor I shoot dis bitch!" That Greedy Boi was dead serious of shooting that bitch.

Jermaine looked at me and said " Test #4 Money or Bitch? "

f*ck you Jermaine.

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Posted 13 February 2009 - 06:41 PM

Algonquin Triads
Chapter 1
A New Job

It was about 8:18 AM when I arrived at the RS Haul warehouse, the job was simple enough, unload the shipments from the boats. At about 11:45, I was called by one of the other workers, Charlie.

"Hey, Jimmy!" Charlie yelled
"What!" I shouted back
"The boss wants to see you." said Charlie

"What does the boss want with me?" I wondered.

I stepped into the bosses' office and took a seat. The boss was named Mr. Lee, he was a 65-70 year old man, and had a thick Chinese accent.

"Hello, Jimmy." Mr. Lee said.
"Hello, sir" I responded.
"No, no, call me Mr. Lee." said Mr. Lee
"Ok, Mr. Lee." I agreed.
"So, Jimmy, I hear you are good driver." Mr. Lee said.
"Yes, I am, why? I asked.
"I need good driver for job this evening." Mr. Lee said.
"I can do that, I have my own car, a metallic blue Feroci" I responded.
"You'll be taking two Triads to a deal at Red Hook docks in Broker, with some Russians" Mr, Lee explained.
"What's the deal?" I asked.
"Alliance, we'll be able to really take out our enemies after this, also, you'll need this." Mr. Lee said, taking a Micro-SMG out of his desk.
"What's the Micro-SMG for?" I asked.
"These Russians can double cross anyone they deal with, so if they try anything, take them down."
"Thank you, Mr. Lee" I responded.
"You may leave now." Mr. Lee said.
"Goodbye." I said.

Chapter two coming soon.

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Posted 13 February 2009 - 06:45 PM

Hey GT409 your story is kinda flat, no offence but how bout a little action?




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