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BUYG: Build Up Your Gang

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#1291

Posted 27 September 2008 - 10:10 AM

Can someone mark my story a few pages back, please?

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#1292

Posted 27 September 2008 - 11:11 AM Edited by Build Up Your Gang, 27 September 2008 - 11:58 AM.

Sorry about that Stefan.

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Stefan
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3rd story
$42
$288 + $42 = $320

Nice chapter with a good balance of dialogue, description and plot. Although "as if it had been in the dirty hands of Mike Ashley." is a bit of an odd choice of simile, haha. How dirty are Mike Ashley's hands? Also, a bit of an odd plot with a street gang who have just emerged from turmoil a year previously to then go on and own more businesses than anyone else in the world. But good overall.

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And I'll edit in the previous ratings. Also, rackets and busineses are up! Wait, no they're not! The post is too long, we think. As soon as we paste the coding into the box and click 'Preview Post' it doesn't do anything, and clicking submit wipes it clean (just as well we had the old coding copied just before!)

Any help?

rated and updated by mark-2007

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#1293

Posted 27 September 2008 - 12:59 PM

I guess I'll take The Leones on at Mt. Chilliad Hideout

Might take me a day or two to actually think of something to do out in the badlands tounge.gif

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#1294

Posted 27 September 2008 - 05:50 PM

If that's the case, Mark, I suggest we make a new topic. This one has become quite crowded and contains a lot of pages filled with crap. If we make a new topic we can reserve the first three pages (like we did with BUYG IV) and set out the topic like this:
  • Post #1: Introduction & Rules
  • Post #2: Gangs
  • Post #3: Purchasables

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#1295

Posted 28 September 2008 - 12:49 AM

Agreed with Jacky, this topic has been great, but it's filled with rooshandark8 junk and Angelo crap. If we started a new topic, we'd have a third post for weapons, vehicles, drugs, and rackets.

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#1296

Posted 28 September 2008 - 01:21 AM

Thirded, even though how funny it all was BUYG is serious business.

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#1297

Posted 28 September 2008 - 03:12 AM

Agreed, I think we should make a new one. Same story counts and money as before though. Also it says I have only written 3 stories for the Yardies not five.

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#1298

Posted 28 September 2008 - 07:12 AM

I think we should get everything up to date on this one, then transfer over to a new topic.

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#1299

Posted 28 September 2008 - 07:29 AM

Crime Desk


The sudden and irregular increase in wealth of the Varrio Los Aztecas has drawn the attention of the Los Santos Police Department. Following the deportation of a high ranking Varrio OG, known only as Gantons Most Wanted, the LSPD yesterday stormed the man's former residence, and have discovered a secret trapdoor that led to a large storage bunker well below the ground. LSPD officials were "shocked" at the "unimaginable" amount of stolen weapons and artillery hidden in the bunker. Sources leaked that the Varrio Los Aztecas stashed more than $50000 worth of cars, vans, guns, and boats, as well as a helicopter in the bunker. According to a police official, the LSPD will be sealing off the entrances to the bunker in the next few days. The official also called for the impounding of all the stolen vehicles as well as the confiscation of the unlicensed weapons, and the arrest of the high ranking Varrio OG's involved in the thefts. The gang will be expected to pay fines of around $49000 to compensate the rightful owners of the vehicles.


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They were simply too lucrative. All that was abused drug money anyway.

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#1300

Posted 28 September 2008 - 07:33 AM

'Cough' 'Cough'... dats some good sh*t. Its about time something happened to the Varios Aztecas, it was taking up most of the screen when I would look my gang (There right above the Yardies).

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#1301

Posted 28 September 2008 - 07:37 AM

I'm getting alittle tired of the Bikers.. could i please switch? erm..Groves, San Fierro wang cars please. smile.gif

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#1302

Posted 28 September 2008 - 07:42 AM

Your switch is noticed, but it won't appear until the new topic is posted. You are still welcome to write stories.

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#1303

Posted 28 September 2008 - 07:50 AM

QUOTE (~PhusioN~ @ Sep 28 2008, 01:42)
Your switch is noticed, but it won't appear until the new topic is posted. You are still welcome to write stories.

When are we gonna make this b*tch?

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#1304

Posted 28 September 2008 - 08:49 AM

QUOTE (Skimask101 @ Sep 28 2008, 15:50)
QUOTE (~PhusioN~ @ Sep 28 2008, 01:42)
Your switch is noticed, but it won't appear until the new topic is posted. You are still welcome to write stories.

When are we gonna make this b*tch?

Soon. We need to get a consensus among the staff, as well as finalize some ratings and rackets/businesses. Expect it by midweek, if not by the end of this week.

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#1305

Posted 28 September 2008 - 08:52 AM

QUOTE (radicell @ Sep 28 2008, 02:49)
QUOTE (Skimask101 @ Sep 28 2008, 15:50)
QUOTE (~PhusioN~ @ Sep 28 2008, 01:42)
Your switch is noticed, but it won't appear until the new topic is posted. You are still welcome to write stories.

When are we gonna make this b*tch?

Soon. We need to get a consensus among the staff, as well as finalize some ratings and rackets/businesses. Expect it by midweek, if not by the end of this week.

Cool but it still says I only have written 3 stories for the yardies even though I've written five.

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#1306

Posted 28 September 2008 - 09:18 AM

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