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Posted 25 March 2008 - 05:07 AM Edited by Build Up Your Gang, 29 July 2008 - 09:50 PM.

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The Build Up Your Gang forum story game has been an icon in the GTAForum community for well over 5 years now. We are proud to present Build Up Your Gang once more. The concept of this is not hard, you simply pick a Gang and one of its Asset you then write stories for that gang and asset. You will receive $$$ for the stories you write. Better stories means more $$$ (no one said length was a bad idea either)

We hope you’ll take part in the fun
Yours Truly
The BUYG Staff


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Rules for the Build Up Your Gang thread
1. If you cannot come up with a complete thought please dont bother posting what you have at all. Just save it in notepad or word or something and come back with a complete story.
2. In addition to rule 1, please don't post half of a story and say you will be back to update it later as this can cause confusion to those that have to grade your stories.
3. To make it easier on us please check your spelling and grammar carefully as it makes it harder for us to read and grade them with multiple errors.
4. Please refrain from "flaming" other members as this will get this topic one of those neat, but unneeded, locks.
5. Most importantly if you need any help or assitance with writing/brainstorming/developing stories or if you feel the need to comment on the thread then please contact me with your opinions/expressions/concerns/problems. In addition to this if you feel that rule 4 had been broken please contact us before taking any action yourself.
6. Conversation is allowed in the topic. But refrain from going off topic.
7. NO DOUBLE POSTING, just edit your initial post.
8. We the BUYG Staff reserve the right to ban you from the topic if you break any of the rules. No exceptions.
9. Please refrain from cluttering up the topic, any questions regarding purchases, gang wars, cash, story count, ect. please PM me with all your questions.
Some general guidelines to follow when participating in this thread
1. DO NOT use weapons that your gang doesn't own and the same goes for vehicles. However keep in mind that when you purchase something for the gang anyone that is in that gang can use that item now.
2. The vehicles listed in red can only be used after a total of 20 stories have been written within your gang. You cannot use these vehicles before that condition is met.
3. If all of your gangs' properties have been occupied, you can buy more land for your gang. If you want a property in a city where you already have properties, it will cost $200. If you want to expand into a new city, it will cost $350. You may not purchase land that is already owned by another gang.
4. If the entire gang is idle for a week then so become their assets and their assets will look like this (Distillery (Alcohol)(daily Income $10) a idle asset means that the daily income will not be given until someone in the gang becomes active again. Active being an actual posted story that meets the rules above.
5. You can also take over property but it will cost you triple($600) what it would for a regular property. Also needed is the consent of the person who owns it and if no one owns it then you need the consent of the member of the gang who has been there the longest. Half the money will go to the gang the other half will just be taken away.
6. As of 5/31/08, if you decide to switch gangs, your old story count will be bracketed ( ) and you will start afresh with a new story count. The bracketed story count will be the sum of all your story counts from all the gangs you've joined, and the bracketed story count is used for bonuses such as the Multiple of 5 bonus, etc. See this post for more details.
These guidelines and rules have been brought to you by the BUYG Staff.

You can reach us via PM...
Build Up Your Gang

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Story Counts Bonuses
Story Amount
Prize(s)
Multiple of 5
For your 5th, 10th, 15th, 20th, etc. story, you get an extra $100.
10th story
Weapon or Item of your choice under $150
20th story
Vehicle of your choice under $500
50th story
Get any vehicle you want, except Hunter or Hydra, for free. Plus, asset/drug facility/business of your choice under $500
20 stories total in your gang
Unlock your gang's bonus vehicle, listed in red

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Gang Wars
1.) The gang that was attacked must form some solid reason (in an official post, in total character) about who they believe did it and why or how they're going to retaliate. This will be a Declaration.
2.) The two gangs meet with someone assigned to make all the formalities, write down what assets can't be blown to hell, what characters they don't want dying, anything agreed upon. But, at the same time, the other person must agree and get another favor in turn. Say if The Haitians don't want a specific drug-factory destroyed, the Cubans must accept it and not have one of their assets destroyed in return. Each gang is given a total of FIVE REQUESTS before the war begins. The lead characters will automatically be safe from being killed or from serious injury (unless agreed upon before the war starts).
3.) They go to war in their next story (that's right ONE story per person per gang), a panel of judges (The BUYG staff) will judge on a combination of four things:
1. Who writes the best story
2. Whose is the most reasonable
3. Who plotted theirs out strategically
4. Who made the clearest victory within their story

If it's close, the decision will be given to an independent source for the tie-breaker.
Any current gang wars (pending or in process) will be listed below
There Are No Gang Wars In Affect, At This Time

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Gta Gamer.'s Guide To A Successful Story. �2004
So ya wanna be a wiseguy storywriter eh? You think you gotta the balls?
Hmm riiiight. I just thought seeing as my stories are so fantastic and all I'd write up a little quide for the new comers, maybe some of the veterans but generally we all write pretty well.
Um I don't advise that any teachers on the board try to use it in their classes. Without permission of course. See copyright ^^
Step 1: Storyline - research key elements. Use tried and tested ideas. We've all seen the occasional gangster flick, so remember the sort of stuff you see in that, then come up with your own elements. I drew alot of inspiration from The Sopranos and GoodFellas which makes sense seeing as I was writing for the mob. Make it interesting but don't make up a heap of unbelievable bullsh*t. For eg. 'I pulled out of the parking lot and 50 niggaz with AK rocked up and started attacking me" is not going to win you any awards. Remember to plan the story to at least a few chapters ahead. Make sure you have all the key events planned for a while, then you'll be able to write to a plan and not run out of ideas.
Step 2: Location - Visualise the location you're writing in. For example in the story where my characters attacked a Triad convoy I (in San Andreas) looked for a good place to do it that made sense. I drove around Venturas figuring out routes for the characters to travel, I went and looked at the layout of Caligula's, where the other casinos were, I looked at maps of the city for pieces of writing.
Step 3: Typing - Always use Microsoft Word, or an equivalent to it, when writing your stories. It checks spelling and grammar and is easy to correct things. It also acts as a back-up if anything ever goes wrong. Here's what could go wrong when not using it:

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-So CJ is back on the block but whit bad news.Apparently he was gambling in LV at the 4 Dragons Casino and lost all of his money.Now he returns whit 15$."What the hell nigga!Whats this f*cking candy bar money!?" -Sweet ravaged."I told you Sweet , I lost the money gambling! THere was this ho and she wanted me to..""WHAT NIGGA!You lost our money over a ho!!?!Damn whose dick is getting us into trouble now." -Sweet getting even more pissed ,"Yeah i no bro ,..But she had killer knockers!" - Cj replied."Damn you nigga , damn you to hell..." -Sweet said and walked away leaving cj whit a confused look on his face.Sweet asked me to go hit on a Balla dope spot whit some OGF Members.So i took Curly Joe , Fat Sugga and Lil Fox and we headed out to the balla dope spot round the corner.Obivously we had no heat so we had to use our fists.Then Curly noticed a drug dealer whit a heater!.We walked up to him and i said :"Yo homie whatya doin?":The yayo pusher replied"I got what you need brotha pure stuff".When we were chatting curly and suga sneaked behind him and grabbed him.We dragged him behind a tall wooden fence and gave him a beating he wont forget.I picked up his Colt 9mm and checked the ammo."Shiit only 6 bullets" well we decided i would go in and blast on those fools.So i went to the door and knocked .A balla came to the door , obivously he was high on weed."You sup homie?" He said."F00L YOu're and your ballas broz are going down.Curly and the posse grabbed him and beat him up while i went in.Inside there was a broken down wall.No furniture at all expect for a rusty iron bed and a toared up sofa.There were 6 ballas in the room all whitout a strap- How convinient.I pulled out the Colt and popped a bullet in each of theyr head.No resistance as they were too high.We headed back to grove and grabbed some beers.


Now that is shocking.
Step 4: Layout - I found that the best way to do it is to have all action sequences in separate paragraphs. For example when going from one day to the next, leave a space between paragraphs.
Put speech onto a new line unless it's the same person talking e.g.
"So anyway he says he wants to whack this guy," Jason said. "And that he reckons he'll do it soon."

Oh, just a note by the way, with speech brackets " " the correct way to portray a sentence is, "insert writing here," he said. The comma goes before the close speech bracket and the fullstop after he said or any other suitable adjective. When using a question mark or exclamation mark at the end of the dialogue, the following word, unless it's a proper noun, should start with a lower case letter. E.g.
"What are you talking about?" he asked. [or] "What are you talking about?" Mike said.

Don't use he said, she said all the time either. Stuff like he asked, she replied, Joe shouted, Jane yelled. Put adjectives to describe the way they said it, or what they're doing as they say it. e.g.
"F*ck that," he said loading his gun. "Are you joking?" He replied, shocked.

Don't simply do a "I went here and did this, afterwards I did that. He did that so I did this" kind of storyline. Elaborate! Description is the key to a good story. Describe everything, it adds to the imagery and allows the reader to visualise the events of the storyline. And! You get more money for it too!

Um so yeah. Just doing my part to try and help.
Remember! Quality over quantity. A descriptive, short story is often better than a long, boring one lacking in description.
Thanks to Slo StenRacing for the design

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Posted 25 March 2008 - 05:09 AM Edited by Build Up Your Gang, 28 September 2008 - 07:31 AM.

The Gangs
Leone Family Mafia
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Liberty City
Salvatore's Mansion
---
0
Liberty City
Joey's Garage
---
0
Liberty City
Sex Club Seven
---
0
Liberty City
Cipriani's Ristorante
---
0
The Badlands
Chiliad Hideout
---
0
Las Venturas
Caligula's Palace
VinnieLeone
30
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Uzi 9mm, Colt Python, Desert Eagle, AK47, M4, MP5, Molotovs, Satchel Charges
VehiclesLeone Sentinel, Stretch, Huntley, Speeder
Money$3273
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
Southside Hoods
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Liberty City
Wichita Gardens
Scifen
9
Liberty City
8-Ball's Bomb Shop (Harwood)
---
0
Liberty City
Game Radio FM
---
0
Liberty City
Southside Hoods Club
mrgypsie
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Chainsaw, Desert Eagle, Uzi 9mm, Combat Shotgun
VehiclesHoodz Rumpo, Idaho Gang Burrito
Money$611
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
Vercetti Gang
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Vice City
Vercetti Estate
---
0
Vice City
Print Works
---
0
Vice City
Sunshine Autos
---
0
Vice City
Cherry Poppers Ice Cream
---
0
Vice City
Interglobal Film Studio
---
0
Vice City
Boatyard
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Brass Knuckles
VehiclesSentinel XS, Stretch
Money$47
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items1 Balls Of Cocaine
Forelli Brothers
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Liberty City
Marco's Bistro
---
0
Liberty City
Staunton Printing Factory
---
0
Vice City
Ocean Beach Hotel
---
0
Vice City
Malibu Club
---
0
Las Venturas
The Visage
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat
VehiclesForelli Excess, Elegant
Money$254
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
The Diablos
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Liberty City
Hepburn Heights
---
0
Liberty City
XXX Mags
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Brass Knuckles, Machete, Cleaver, Colt .45, Desert Eagle, Molotovs
VehiclesDiablo Stallion, Manana
Money$74
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
The Triads
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Liberty City
Belly Up Fish Factory
---
0
Liberty City
Mr. Wong's Launderette
---
0
Vice City
Chartered Libertine Lines
---
0
San Fierro
Wu-Zi-Mu's Office
---
0
Las Venturas
Four Dragons Casino
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Knife, Katana, Colt .45, Desert Eagle, AK47, Molotovs
VehiclesTriad Fish Van, Streetfighter, Buffalo, Elegy
Money$1200
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
The Yakuza
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Liberty City
Kenji’s Casino
---
0
Liberty City
Hyaku Dojo
Jacky Fiend
8
Liberty City
Internet Cafe
---
0
Liberty City
Aspatria Compound
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Katana, Colt .45
VehiclesYakuza Stinger, Kuruma
Money$409
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
Grove Street Families
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Los Santos
Sweet's House
---
0
Los Santos
The Johnson House
Trouble
11
Los Santos
Emmet's
---
0
Los Santos
LB's Lockup
---
0
San Fierro
Wang Cars
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Knife, Silenced 9MM, Desert Eagle, Molotovs, Tec-9, MP5
VehiclesBF Injection, Glendale, BF-400
Money$1770
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
Ballas
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Los Santos
Idlewood Crack House
Stefan.
3
Los Santos
Glen Park
---
0
Los Santos
B-Dup's House
---
0
Los Santos
The Pig Pen
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat
VehiclesMajestic, Tahoma
Money$320
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
Los Santos Vagos
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Los Santos
East Los Santos Gang House
mark-2007
11 (36)
Los Santos
East Los Santos Basketball Courts
---
0
Los Santos
Unity Station
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Tec 9, Molotovs
VehiclesBMX, Greenwood, Tornado, Oceanic
Money$2056
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
Varrio Los Aztecas
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Los Santos
El Corona Low Rider Meet
---
0
Los Santos
Willowfield Tattoo Parlor
---
0
Los Santos
Cesar's House
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Machete
VehiclesRemington, Savanna
Money$70
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
The Yardies
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Liberty City
Bedford Point Projects
Skimask101
3 (13)
Liberty City
Newport Garage
---
0
Liberty City
Borgnine Taxi’s
---
0
Liberty City
Belleville Park
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Desert Eagle
VehiclesYardie Lobo, Perennial
Money$346
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
Russian Mafia
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Los Santos
Grey Imports
DogOfHavoc
9
Los Santos
The Atrium
---
0
Las Venturas
V-Rock Hotel
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Colt .45, M4, Molotovs, PSG-1, Satchel Charges
VehiclesVoodoo, Sentinel, Sultan
Money$2079
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items1 ounce of cocaine
San Fierro Rifa
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
San Fierro
Doherty Crack Lab
---
0
San Fierro
Cranberry Station
---
0
San Fierro
Pleasure Domes
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat
VehiclesStallion, Blade
Money$187
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
Da Nang Boys
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
San Fierro
Pier 69
---
0
San Fierro
Easter Basin Docks
Masterkraft
10
San Fierro
Bay Cargo Ship
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Knife, Ingram Mac-10, MP5, Combat Shotgun, Grenades, Desert Eagle
VehiclesEsperanto, Sabre
Money$100
Racket and Businesses---
Assets ---
Items---
Sindacco Family
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Liberty City
The Dolls House
---
0
Las Venturas
The High Roller
---
0
Las Venturas
Meat Plant
---
0
Liberty City
Bitch'n Dog Food
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Knife, Silenced 9mm, Ingram Mac-10, Sniper Rifle
VehiclesSindacco Argentino, Landstalker
Money$893
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
The Bikers
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Vice City
The Greasy Chopper
---
0
Vice City
Howlin' Pete's Biker Emporium
---
0
Vice City
Moist Palms Hotel
marlord911
10
Liberty City
Chinatown Bar
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Brass Knuckles, Knife, Axe, Tec-9, Combat Shotgun, PSG-1, Molotovs, Grenades
VehiclesBF-400, Angel
Money$576
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
The Sharks
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Vice City
North Point Mall
---
0
Vice City
Abandoned Villa
radicell
3 (14)
Vice City
Downtown Ammu-Nation
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Colt Python, Desert Eagle, Uzi 9mm, MP5
VehiclesGang Burrito, BF Injection
Money$77
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
Colombian Cartel
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Liberty City
Import/Export Garage
---
0
Liberty City
Panlantic Construction Co.
---
0
Liberty City
Cartel Mansion
---
0
Liberty City
Spank Boat
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Colt .45
VehiclesCartel Cruiser, Patriot
Money$100
Racket and Businesses---
Assets ---
Items---
The Cubans
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Vice City
Cafe Robina
~PhusioN~
0 (23)
Vice City
Havana Streetwear
---
0
Vice City
Laundromat
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat
VehiclesCuban Hermes, Cuban Jetmax
Money$204
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
The Haitians
LocationPropertyGang MemberStory Count
Vice City
Auntie Poulet’s
---
0
Vice City
Ryton Aide Pharmacy
---
0
Vice City
Kaufman Cabs
Wanted Assailant
4 (20)
Vice City
Cocaine Factory
---
0
WeaponsBaseball Bat, Night Stick, Brass Knuckles, Pool Stick, Hammer, Screwdriver, Molotovs
VehiclesFreeway, Sanchez
Money$438
Racket and Businesses---
Assets---
Items---
Weapons
Melee Price
Brass Knuckles$5
Screwdriver$6
Knife$7
Cleaver$7
Hammer$10
Axe$10
Baseball Bat$10
Pool Stick$10
Golf Club$15
Night Stick$15
Machete$15
Katana$45
Chainsaw$75
Hand-Guns Price
Colt .45$95
Silenced 9mm$115
Colt Python$120
Desert Eagle$140
Sub-Machine Guns Price
Tec-9$140
Ingram Mac-10$150
Uzi 9mm$180
MP5$250
Shotguns Price
Shotgun$250
Sawn-off Shotgun$300
Combat Shotgun$350
Spaz-12 Shotgun$400
Machine Guns Price
Ruger$400
AK47$530
M4$675
Rifles Price
Hunting Rifle$50
Sniper Rifle$300
PSG-1$950
Throwables Price
Molotovs$5
Tear Gas$50
Grenade$65
Satchel Charge$300
Heavy Artillery Price
Flamethrower$2000
Rocket Launcher$3000
Minigun$4000
Heat Seeking Rocket Launcher$5000
Vehicles
Land
Vehicle
Availability
Price
Admiral
3
$300
Alpha
3
$350
Angel
3
$500
Barracks OL
2
$3,000
Banshee
3
$800
BF-400
2
$600
BF Injection
3
$450
Bike
3
$35
BMX
3
$45
Blade
3
$450
Blista Compact
3
$350
Bobcat
3
$200
Bravura
3
$350
Broadway
3
$350
Buccaneer
3
$300
Buffalo
3
$500
Bullet
2
$800
Burrito
2
$200
Burrito, Gang
3
$300
Bus
3
$375
Caddy
3
$200
Cadrona
3
$500
Cartel Cruiser
3
$500
Clover
3
$150
Cheetah
2
$750
Club
3
$450
Comet
3
$550
Elegant
3
$450
Elegy
3
$500
Emperor
3
$550
Euros
3
$450
Faggio
3
$100
FCR-900
3
$700
Feltzer
3
$450
Flash
3
$600
Forelli Excess
3
$600
Fortune
3
$500
Freeway
3
$500
Glendale
3
$300
Greenwood
2
$200
Hermes
3
$275
Hermes, Cuban
3
$300
Hotknife
3
$500
Huntley
3
$450
Hustler
3
$500
Infernus
3
$800
Intruder
3
$375
Jester
3
$600
Kuruma
3
$475
Landstalker
3
$400
Majestic
2
$250
Manana
3
$175
Merit
3
$350
Mesa Grande
3
$275
Moonbeam
3
$300
Mountain Bike
3
$50
Nebula
3
$250
NRG-500
3
$775
Oceanic
3
$300
Patriot
3
$650
PCJ-600
3
$650
Perennial
3
$225
Phoenix
3
$600
Picador
3
$350
Pony
2
$300
Premier
3
$400
Previon
3
$400
Quadbike
3
$450
Rancher
2
$375
Rancher, Gang
2
$425
Regina
3
$250
Remington
3
$400
Rhino (Tank)
1
$9,000
Rumpo
2
$200
Rumpo, Hoodz
3
$250
Sabre
3
$500
Sabre Turbo
3
$575
Sanchez
3
$450
Savanna
3
$450
Securicar
2
$1,600
Sentinel
3
$550
Sentinel XS
3
$600
Sentinel, Mafia
3
$600
Slamvan
3
$575
Sindacco Argentino
3
$600
Solair
3
$300
Strattford
3
$300
Stallion
3
$400
Stallion, Diablo
3
$550
Stinger
3
$700
Stinger, Yakuza
2
$500
Stratum
3
$375
Streetfighter
3
$115
Stretch
3
$600
Sultan
3
$600
Sunrise
3
$550
Super GT
3
$800
Tahoma
3
$350
Tampa
3
$400
Triad Fish Van
3
$400
Turismo
3
$750
Uranus
3
$550
Vincent
3
$350
Virgo
3
$200
Yardie Lobo
3
$400
Voodoo
2
$275
Yosemite
3
$300
Wayfarer
3
$400
Walton
3
$250
Washington
3
$500
Willard
3
$350
ZR-350
3
$750
Boats
Vehicle
Availability
Price
Coast Guard
2
$1,500
Cuban Jetmax
2
$1,500
Dinghy
2
$500
Jetmax
3
$1,500
Launch
2
$1,500
Marquis
2
$1,500
Predator
1
$1,500
Reefer
2
$1,500
Rio
2
$1,500
Speeder
1
$2,500
Squallo
1
$1,500
Tropic
1
$1,500
Vortex
1
$3,500
Aircraft
Vehicle
Availability
Price
AT-400
3
$15,000
Beagle
3
$14,500
Cargobob
3
$14,000
Cropduster
3
$10,000
Dodo
3
$10,500
Hunter
1
$999,999
Hydra
2
$999,999
Leviathan
3
$13,000
Maverick
2
$12,500
Nevada
3
$12,750
News Chopper
3
$13,450
Police Maverick
3
$14,000
Raindance
3
$13,600
Rustler
5
$1,900
Sea Sparrow
5
$6,400
Shamal
3
$10,500
Skimmer
5
$7,000
Sparrow
5
$5,500
Stunt Plane
5
$3,000
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Businesses
Type of Business
Cost to Build
Daily Profit
T.V. Station
$25,000
$975
Radio Station
$24,500
$670
Newspaper Press
$19,950
$865
Garbage Company
$4000
$75
Construction Company
$3750
$70
Underground Casino
$3500
$65
Nightclub
$6000
$60
Strip Club
$3450
$50
Whore House
$3200
$55
Bar/Saloon/Pub
$3150
$50
Protection Ring
$3000
$45
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Drug Rules
1. Once your hand is in the drug trade, only then will problems arise for your gang with the Feds
2. It is required that you write a story about purchasing the drugs, and another story about selling the drugs.
3. The BUYG staff will act like the DEA, FBI and the Police by confiscating drugs, money, weapons, vehicles and assets at any time. These are done randomly.
4. The money you earn is added to the gang bank account, where you may buy weapons, vehicals, properties, and other assets.
5. The drugs system is not to be taken advantage of. Do not consistently buy and sell in increasing amounts.
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Units of Drugs
Product
Amount of Product
Cost
Whole Sale
Marijuana
3.5 grams
$25
$40
Marijuana
Ounce (28 grams)
$160
$240
Marijuana
Pound (16 ounces or 448 grams)
$1100
$1680
Marijuana
Kilo (2.2 pounds or 998 grams)
$2400
$3200
Cocaine
1 gram
$55
$80
Cocaine
Teener (1.5 grams)
$75
$100
Cocaine
Ball (3.5 grams)
$260
$350
Cocaine
Ounce (28 grams)
$980
$1250
Cocaine
Pound (16 ounces or 448 grams)
$6000
$8500
Cocaine
Kilo (2.2 pounds or 998 grams)
$14500
$17400
MDMA (ECSTASY)
1 pill
$5
$10
MDMA (ECSTASY)
100 pills
$1360
$2000
MDMA (ECSTASY)
1000 pills
$4800
$7500
MDMA (ECSTASY)
10000 pills(Club Owner's DREAM)
$7250
$10000
Crack Cocaine
1 gram
$260
$380
Crack Cocaine
Ounce (28 grams)
$4900
$6640
Crack Cocaine
Pound (16 ounces or 448 grams)
$12450
$16950
Heroin
1 gram
$70
$110
Heroin
Ounce (28 grams)
$870
$1550
Heroin
Pound (16 Ounces or 448)
$4780
$6950
Crystal Meth
1 gram
$100
$140
Crystal Meth
Ball (3.5 grams)
$270
$350
Crystal Meth
Half-Ounce (14 grams)
$580
$700
Crystal Meth
Ounce (28 grams)
$1400
$2000
Crystal Meth
Pound (16 Ounces or 448)
$8000
$9400

Assets
Type of Business
Cost to Build
Weekly Profit
Drugs Produced
Scientist
$10,000
$595
100 Pills
Cocaine Importation Center
$9,500
$315
Pound (16 ounces or 448 grams)
Marijuana Farm
$6,500
$200
Pound (16 ounces or 448 grams)
Distillery (Alcohol)
$1,000
$100
N/A
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Posted 25 March 2008 - 05:15 AM

All the coding has been fixed, a few things changed and switched.
I tried to add all the users to their respectfull gangs to my full knowledge.
A few gangs are missing, along with most of the weapons. Some of the prices are off, so for now all properties are not for sale until i get to fixing the prices. Hopefully by the end of the week everything will be fixed.


To the BUYG Staff: IF YOU DO NOT UNDERSTAND THE CODING, PLEASE DO NOT TOUCH THE CODING!

I believe everything is set in place.
Now get writting!

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Posted 25 March 2008 - 07:50 AM

Good job johnson, lets see a few chapters eh?

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Posted 25 March 2008 - 10:31 AM

Ah, sweet. I'll get a story up by the end of today, maybe even start writing it at school. icon14.gif

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Posted 25 March 2008 - 12:25 PM

Ah, I'm glad to see this up as fast as it is. I'll soon be posting chapters again, soon as I get my groove back. Thanks for the coding fixes johnson. icon14.gif

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Posted 25 March 2008 - 12:35 PM

Ill get a story real soon.

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Posted 25 March 2008 - 12:38 PM Edited by radicell, 25 March 2008 - 01:08 PM.

Here is a summary of some things that still need to be done with the carry-over from the previous thread.

GTASA_passer's 5th, 6th, 7th, and 8th chapters need to be graded.

devilrock28's 9th chapter needs to be graded.

mark-2007
's 9th and 10th chapters need to be graded.

xNamexTakenx'
s 4th chapter needs to be graded.

Masterkraft's 2nd chapter needs to be graded.

radicell
's 2nd chapter needs to be graded.

~PhusioN~
's 3rd chapter needs to be graded.

GhostGlendale would like to join Grove Street Families at Sweet's House.

Josué would like to join The Triads at Belly Up Fish Factory.


EDIT: I'm okay with coding, and I've added these two people, as well as fixed some minor errors.

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Posted 25 March 2008 - 12:42 PM

I wouldn't imagine so, as long as the old topic still exists anyway. Everything you state that needs to be updated can be done from the last topic and simply posted here. Perhaps a link to the original topic(s) in the first post would be a good idea too.

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Posted 25 March 2008 - 01:10 PM

Hell yea

Chapter Nine : Back to the set



From the start of the morning, ive had this tought waving around my mind. I was thinking to ask Salvatore to go to Los

Santos with me and John. When i had the courage to look at my clock & calendar, i realised it was already 12 pm. I had

a little breakfast, packed my things and went to Salvatore. It felt like i was driving forever, even thou i was only 3

miles away from the mansion. When i arived, i saw Salvatore writing something down.

"Good Morning, Salvatore."

"Hey, Luke."

"I was wondering, would you like to go back to LS with me and John? To sort some things out."

"Strange, i was thinking the same thing."

"You were?"

"Yes, i even got some airlines tickets reserved."

This was my lucky day, only thing left was to ask John.

"You drive Luke, lets go pick up John."

When we went to John and asked him, he was suprised and agreed the same second. I left him to pack and went down so i

can check us out of the hotel.
Went to return my car, then to the airport. John and me were suprised when we saw that Salvatore reserved 1st class

tickets.

"Here we go boys, neyt stop : Los Santos!" said Salvatore

"Excuse me, mr. Salvatore, but i think LS gangs taken over our houses!" i said to him

"Way ahead of you. See those guys in the back rows, there all Leones. We got the guns over the line easy."

I was suprised, he never reacted so quicktly. The flight was pretty soft. When we arived, i was happy couse i was

gettin dizzy. We took a car and drove of to the Groove. Everything looked the same, except the Ballas everywhere. Mr

Salvatore gave us AK's and let us out, followed by the Leones.

"Die you motherf*cking peace of sh*t gangbanging cocksuckers!"

"NEVEEEEEEEER!" they yelled at us

"You will wish you havent said that. Die fools!" i replyed NICELY

Bullets started coming out of both sides. After 10 minutes there was a pool of balla blood on the floor. The hood was

taken back. John and me left our things in our houses. Next up was Emmets yard. Luckily it wasnt balla territory, it

was still ours.

"Man, we could turn this place into a weapon/drug factory. We only need the machines.", Salvatore said

"Hmm, not a bad idea. But first lets find Sweet and CJ." i said and dialed his number



"Hello, who is this?"

"Hey CJ, its me Luke."

"Oh, watsup homie?"

"Where are you? I just arrived to LS, me,John and the Leones took the hood back!"

"Hell yea! You ice cold dogs. Will come to the hood, then we can talk."

The guys liked what the hurd. We went back to the Groove and went to sleep.


BTW : when is Stefan gonna give us our cash for our stories? he didnt update the sheet!1

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Posted 25 March 2008 - 05:24 PM

The Triads - Belly Up Fish Factory - Introduction

"My name is Kang. I was brought here from China, smuggled in a large sack of rice. Damn that was an uncomfortable journey. The quality of living is much better here. I have alot of room in the back of my fish van to sleep at night, and in the morning I can wash myself in the ocean. I really like American women. There is alot of them around most times, they stand on the corners or walk up and down. They wear nice clothes, high skirts and long boots. I think they like me too. They call me Chink, I don't know who he is, maybe they mistake me for somebody else. I have a job at the Belly Up Fish factory. Usual hours are 6am until 9pm. On the weekends I go to kung fu lessons. Hopefully I will become a black belt."

The sun is slowly rising, far out at sea. In a factory courtyard a workforce assembles. A bunch of scruffy looking asian men stand in a line, as an older, well dressed asian man walks amongst them, performing a head count. The man spends a moment using his fingers to add up, then appears satisfied with his conclusion. He picks out four of the men and orders them to stand to one side. They are slow to follow his orders. "Ok! The rest of you, the usual routine, you know what to do!" The crowd doesn't move and continues to stand and stare. "C'mon you shower of sh*te! Get in that factory and get to work!" The crowd responds now. They all rush off into the doors of a large building, leaving an old man straggling behind, limping his way after them.

Kang looks about himself. Why have he and three other men been seperated from the group? There is Dong, a man who towers over the rest, who sailed all the way from China in a rubber dinghy. He has a physique like an American pro wrestler. Kang wonders if he might be related to the Yeti. He too has been picked out, and now stands beside Kang. Also, there are the twin brothers, Li and Yi. They deserted from the Chinese military and are now outlaws in their native land. They came to Liberty City the same way as Kang, in a sack of rice. They never seem to leave each others side. Kang wonders if they travelled in the same sack.

The well dressed man, earlier seen giving the orders comes marching over to the four men. "Right, you four. I have a different kind of work for you today. Someone upstairs needs a package picking up at Portland docks later today, and it just so happens you've got the job." Huh? What the f*ck's this guy talking about? Kang wonders to himself. Upstairs? "Li and Yi, I hear you two have got experience with machine guns? I suggest you familiarize yourselves with these then." The man flings two Uzi 9MMs in the general direction of the twins. One hits Yi in the face and knocks him to the floor. Yi lets out a high pitched scream. He dusts himself off and quickly scrambles back to his feet, a large swelling developing between his eyes. "Dong and Kang, you two are better off with something a little more simple, take these." The man hands them both a Colt .45.

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Posted 25 March 2008 - 07:05 PM

GtaSA_passer

Chapter 5- $24
Chapter 6- $20
Chapter 7- $27
Chapter 8- $29
Chapter 9- $26
Total - $126

Devilrock 28

Chapter 9- $31

Xnamextakenx

Chapter 4- $42

Masterkraft

Chapter 2- $49

Radicell

Chapter 2- $53

~PhusioN~

Chapter 3- $46

Josue

Chapter 1- $47 - very good intro and the Colt and Uzi will cost you $100 in total, meaning you have $47 left.

Can someone in this account update the coding please, with new reward money and weapons added?

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Posted 26 March 2008 - 08:27 AM

Can I have LB's Lockup please... I'm gonna post a story later or tomorrow tounge.gif

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Posted 26 March 2008 - 08:38 AM

Chapter 10 : Building fear


When i got into Sweets house, i saw the guys talking about some machinery.

"Hey Luke, today is the day!" said Sweet

"Day for what?"

"Day when we get some machinery and get that yard to its top."

"Alright, but where are we gonna get it?"

"Whoe,whoe relax. We first need to get a gate and a roof."

"There is a construction firm, they got theyre offices in Vinewood. On the other end of the city." Salvatore joined in

"Oh, i got it. We go and scare theyre asses so theyl build it for free!" Cj said

"Sure, im down." i told them

We got in the car and drowe off. It was damn hard finding it, but when we found it, it felt like a huge rock dropped

from me.

I pointed the gun at the director, "Why hello, Mr. Director."

"What do you want? Anything just dont kill me!"

"Actually, we had something in mind."

"Name it, will build it."

"We need a gate and a roof put on a yard. Its surounded with walls, only one part is empty. Thats where the gates come

in."

"We can do that."

"And, once the gate is finished. We need a roof on top of it. A curved one perhaps."

"You got it.", you could almost smell the fear in his voice

"We will be going now Mister..." i looked at his nametag. "Mister Jake."

"Oh and, the location of the yard. Its in Willowfield, in it there is a blown up car and a trash container. Go check

it out!", CJ finally said something

We got in the car and drove back to the Groove. I had this large feeling of acomplishing something.


"Ey niggas, is the construction sh*t settled?", Sweet asked same second when we came

"Roof and gate settled. Next up is the machinery." i replyed

"Salvatore and I are going to LC now. We are going to take some o his machinery for drugs and weapons." Sweet said

"You and CJ stay with John and clean up that yard of yours." Sal said

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Posted 26 March 2008 - 09:02 AM

GTASA_passer: $27.

marked by radicell

I'm not quite sure whether to add the money or not, as I see a lot of information has not yet been transferred from the previous topic.

autotheftisgrand: you've been added.

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Posted 26 March 2008 - 09:32 AM

This is my first try to write a fan-fic. So please say anything that can help me! biggrin.gif

Chapter One: A New Life

The ghetto never seems to change in a long time. Hookers are still roaming the streets looking for clients. Wannabe-gangstas are still listening to rap in there low-riders. Yet, change is the only permanent thing. Three years ago, The Ballas reigned over Los Santos. Grove Street were almost gone thanks to the base-slangin' pushers. Crime remained rampant all over the city with drive-bys and robbers, who robbed because of there addiction. All that changed with CJ coming home. I won't go into details since it's a long story all over again. He changed everything in almost a month.

I was only twenty one back then having just finished my third year from College. My family and I were living the good life in the Richman district; but bad luck happened to us. My dad was car-jacked and shot through the head when he was driving through Verona Beach. A witness said that it was one of those Ballas that did it. He, being the only source of income in our household died. My mother and I moved to Willowfield.
It was a sh*tty neighborhood, I couldn't sleep because of the gang wars and the sirens of the police. I tried looking for a job with a steady income; but I only ended as a cashier at the nearby Cluckin' Bell. Life wasn't great in those times; but it wasn't bad either. I had a few friends in my neighborhood, all of them belonged to a gang called Grove Street. I never knew all the gangs in Los Santos, all I knew about is the Ballas since they always hangout at Market. Richman was pretty far from Ganton so I never saw a GSF member from here. They told me all these stories about there gang, like being the dominant gang in all of Los Santos in the late 80's.

One day, while I was working at Cluckin' Bell, A few Ballas came in, there were at least 5 of them, almost robbed us blind. Good thing that a coincidence happened and some GSF came over at the right time. A shoot-out has taken place and only one Ballas managed to get out of the place.
One of the GSF's talked to me.

"You look familiar, do you live somewhere in Willowfield?"

"Yeah, I live next to the Low-rider shop."

"Then you must know about Dre and JD. They always hangout at the shop talkin' about cars and sh*t"

"They're my friends, they also belong to Grove Street right?"

"Uh-huh, Hey boy, whats your name by the way"

"Cameron."

"Cameron?!? sounds like a cracka's name!"

"I only moved about a month ago from Richman."

"Oh, well maybe we could hangout together, the name's Ryder, I live in Ganton. Anyway, we gotta bounce, some sh*t to take care of"

After that day, my life changed forever....


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Posted 26 March 2008 - 01:30 PM

QUOTE (Build Up Your Gang @ Mar 26 2008, 09:02)
GTASA_passer: $27.

marked by radicell

I'm not quite sure whether to add the money or not, as I see a lot of information has not yet been transferred from the previous topic.

autotheftisgrand: you've been added.

do the ca$h and the weapons. plus.. corect the story count

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Posted 26 March 2008 - 01:57 PM

mark-2007: (chapters from previous thread)

Great chapters!
Chapter 9: $51
Chapter 10: $46
Total: $97

autotheftisgrand: $37.

I have tried my best to carry over all the cash/weapons/stats correctly from the previous thread, and added the moneys for the stories from this thread. Also fixed up some coding.

QUOTE (GTASA_passer @ Mar 26 2008 @ 13:30)
do the ca$h and the weapons. plus.. corect the story count

Done. icon14.gif

all done by radicell.

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Posted 26 March 2008 - 01:59 PM

Just a heads up, the main image in the first post may need rehosting, it's showing up on mine as "user posted image". I'd change it myself, but I see someone is already logged in.

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Posted 26 March 2008 - 02:01 PM

It's fine for me.. you can do it now, I've logged out. smile.gif

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Posted 26 March 2008 - 03:08 PM



Chapter 1: The GSF

It's 25 of July. It's very hot outside. I woke up in LC on the street near the Francis Intl. Airport. Before i opened my eyes i was trying to remember what happened but i had no luck. When i opened my eyes, i saw a piece paper on the ground, nailed with a knife. I got up and took the paper with the knife. There it said:

Hey John,
Sorry for the wound you have on your head.

I touched my head and felt big pain, but i kept on reading...

We took your ID card and some money, but we left you 200$. Thats enough to get to Los Santos,San Andreas.

Signed, Salvatore Leone

Now i started remembering things... I was walking to the Francis Int. Airport from my cousin, Tony Santen.
When i was 1 KM from it, i heard some people running towards me. I didn't care, but suddenly a hard object hit me in the head. As i felt pain, i blacked out and fell on the ground unconscionus. That leaves me here on the street now. I've put the piece of paper in my pocket, and cleaned myself up a bit.
Then i went to the airport to buy a ticket. It cost 200$. The flight almost flew away so i started to sprint towards the plane. Running fast and dodging people, i finally got on the plane.

2 Hours later...

I finally arrived to the city of Los Santos, the ghetto city. A cab pulled over next to me. The guy inside was wearing green, like the Grove Street Families. I assumed he was a Grove Street Family member. He pulled down the window and said to me, "Get in, the ride is payed by a friend of yours." I entered the cab and the GSF member started driving. As he was driving me to somewhere i didn't know where, i saw big tall buildings and i started remembering every single piece of my life in LS.
We entered Grove Street. There was many GSF Homies waiting for this cab, there was Sweet infront of them. The guy pulled over and said that the GSF leader, Sweet was waiting for me. I came out and started talking to Sweet. After we greeted, we started talking...

"Yo John! How'sit hangin'?" Said Sweet, putting his gun in his pocket. "Ye, good but one of yo' friends said you needed me." I replied, with strangeness "Oh ye'! As you are a GSF member, i wan..." I stopped him in speech telling him, "GSF member? Yo' must'a have the wrong guy. Im John Stewman." Then Sweet replied, trying to convince me. "Ye,ye...Im looking for YOU, John Stewman. You went to LC to visit ya' cousin. You returned now, after one year. There was some up's and some down's, but we didn't need any help. Until now, the Balla's went selling weapons around LS. They make people join 'em. Now we need yo' help to bust the Balla Dope Push'as." I was thinking for a second, but then i replied, "Okay, i just need a place to sleep, cuz it's almost night time." Sweet then replied with joy, "Yo' can stay with me till ya find yo'self a decent house, man. See y'all 'round homies, tommorow we go on to some Balla killin'."
Thats when all the GSF homies departed and went to their homes. I went with Sweet. I need to rest and prepare for tommorow...

----------------------------

I was in belgium so i couldn't post for a day or so

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Posted 26 March 2008 - 07:34 PM Edited by Build Up Your Gang, 26 March 2008 - 11:33 PM.

Hi,

GhostGlendale

Chapter 1: $23

Someone please add this money to GSFs section. added money and story count as well.

Thanks.

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Posted 27 March 2008 - 12:39 AM

I am out of writers block!

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Joey’s Garage
Story # 10: The Meeting (Pt. 1)

I walked out to the car from the warmth of Grandpa’s mansion. It was starting to snow.
Unfortunately, I didn’t have a jacket. I was freezing and I was in pain with my leg.

“Michael, we have to pick up Toni from his mother’s restaurant. He’s coming with us.”
Grandpa said as he opened the car door of his Sentinel.
“Coming with us? Where are we going? I thought you were dropping me off at home.”
Grandpa’s phone rang, “Who could it be now?”
Grandpa paused as he answered his phone, “Who is it? – Luigi?”

Grandpa motioned me to get into the Sentinel. I slowly used my crutches to move to the car door.

“Grandpa, I can’t open the door. I’ll fall if I take my hand off of my crutch.” I whispered to Grandpa, who was still on the phone.

The door clicked as Grandpa opened the door and pushed me in gently.
Grandpa didn’t close the door. I could still hear his conversation.

“Okay. So meet us at the Bistro in a few minutes. About 2:25 or so.” Grandpa answered back to the caller.

Grandpa opened the door beside me and entered the car.

“Who was that Grandpa? Luigi?” I asked curiously.
“Yeah. It was Luigi.”
“You have to sue them, Grandpa.” I told Grandpa.
“Who ever said I was suing them? We’re going to talk about it like men. Not like some little sissy-boys with a lawsuit!” Grandpa said as he turned to me.

I let out a chuckle. We stopped at the entrence of the Toni’s restaurant.

Toni entered the car, “Hey Salvatore. Hi Michael. Thanks for bringing me along.”

“No problem Toni, after what you did for the family.” Grandpa said to Toni.

“What? You mean killing that made man? That was nothin’!”

Grandpa laughed, “Nothing? Nothing? That was a brave job Toni! I bet Mickey here couldn’t even do that!” Grandpa said as he pointed to Mickey “Hamfists”, who was driving.

I sat quietly in the car as we neared the Bistro in Newport, Staunton Island.
I opened the door and slowly moved out of the open door, trying not to fall.
We entered the smoke filled bistro only to see some Forelli goons and the new leader, Marco ElaFante.

To be continued……….

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Let's just say that there was an Italian bistro in Newport until 1997. Okay? (Remember these stories are set in 1996!)

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Posted 27 March 2008 - 06:01 AM

I'll get my story up soon, just gotta study for this maths exam.

Are we gonna set up a BUYG discussion topic?

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Posted 27 March 2008 - 07:31 AM Edited by radicell, 27 March 2008 - 07:42 AM.

QUOTE (~PhusioN~ @ Mar 27 2008, 14:01)
I'll get my story up soon, just gotta study for this maths exam.

Are we gonna set up a BUYG discussion topic?

I don't believe so. Last time Stefan tried that, and it got locked on the grounds of being "pointless".

EDIT: Stefan: I'll do it. What property do you want?

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Posted 27 March 2008 - 07:40 AM

Did it get locked? I thought that it simply died. Oh well. I'm actually going to switch with the Balla's; I stuffed up the coding last time, and for fear of stuffing it up again, can someone change it? I can still rate stories, just someone else has to change the coding when I do.

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Posted 27 March 2008 - 09:49 AM

Da Nang Boys - Pier 69

Chapter III:
Narrow Escape
Unlike the Los Santos Police Department, the San Fierro Police Department does not have a section dedicated to the control of gang violence. And so, with all of us under control, and our hands put in the air, the two San Fierro cops were at loss to what to do. Should they put us all in the cars and drive us back to the precinct? Or just fine us and let us go? They were unsure, and it showed on their faces.

It was a tense situation. Everyone stood in silence. There were very little pedestrians around. Most of them had fled when we were ordered out of our cars. A few of them stood on the corners, watching us, but ready to flee any second.

There were seven of us Da Nang Boys in total, five from Pier 69, two from Easter Basin. On the other side, the two groups of Triads had congregated quickly. I counted, and found that there was seven of them as well. Plus two cops, one of them pointing his 9mm at us, the second pointing it at the Triads.

The two cops were still exchanging confused whispers when I saw one of the Triad members nod his head. The two members standing to either side of him flung themselves at the cops, and in one swift movement, swung their baseball bats at the cops’ legs. The two officers were caught off guard and fell clumsily on the ground, dropping their pistols. The attacking Triad members knocked the cops unconscious and picked up their guns.

We were in trouble, and we knew it. With the cops out of the picture and the Triads having hold of two guns, our Boys wouldn’t stand a chance.

Trent’s reflexes saved us again. While everybody else was still shocked by what had just happened, Trent commanded, “Run!” Fast as lightning, everybody retreated and dashed down the sloped road, using the parked Triad Fish Van as a shield from the Triads’ bullets.

Giáp took control. “To Pier 69, everybody!” Although we were deep inside Calton Heights, it was still a grueling task to run to Pier 69 on foot. Our situation was bad, and it got worse as we heard a distinctive “VROOM” from behind.

It was the Triad van, and it was trying to run us over. The VROOM grew as the van accelerated towards us, the angry faces of its occupants visible clearly. I jumped to my left just as the van zoomed past us. Three other Boys had jumped to the left, while two had jumped to the right. When we got up, however, we discovered that one of us had been slow to react. He had hesitated, and when he tried leaping out of the way, it had been too late. The Triad van crashed into him, causing him to fly up high into the air into the side of some condo’s. His body fell down the length of the condo, leaving a faint trail of blood.

We had little time to mourn our friend, for the Triad van had already reached the bottom of the sloped road, and was trying to make its way back up it to get to us.

Giáp’s decisive voice rang out again, “Guys, you see that alley over there, we can use that to lose the car!”

A minute later, we emerged on the other side of the alley, in front of a car garage that belonged to someone name Michelle. We could see Pier 69 and its lights in the setting sun, and we all began sprinting towards it.

A familiar sound surrounded the air. VROOM! To our left, we could see the parked Triad Van starting up and gaining speed towards us again. It had been waiting for us there all the time! This time we didn’t need a command. We all began running as fast as we could towards the Pier, where we knew our buddies would help us out.

We sprinted onto the main road with the tram tracks. All of a sudden, the chatter of gunfire broke out. We paused, confused. These sounds were different to any other gunfire we had heard. We turned around, and saw a strange sight. The Triad van had turned around, and was trying to get away from the area. Looking at the street corners, I saw four Da Nang Boys, two on each corner, shooting at the van with automatic weapons.

The Triad van disappeared, leaking black smoke. The Boys yelled some curses, and began heading in the direction of us. When I saw them, my jaw dropped. “Ben, Ed, … where the hell did you get these things?”

As we all walked back towards the Pier, Ben explained. “New shipment. High-quality, perfectly new automatic machine pistols. They’re called Ingram Mac-10’s, but we just call’em Macs. We all get one.”

That night, I sat inside my apartment, gripping the Mac and getting the feel of it. Inside, I felt thankful that we finally had something decent to defend ourselves with.

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Posted 27 March 2008 - 10:01 AM Edited by GTASA_passer, 27 March 2008 - 10:06 AM.

Chapter eleven : The Desert airlines


I woke up almost unconches, i felt like somebody chopped of my arm. When my eyes got use to sunlight, i realised i was in the Desert. On an abandoned airstrip! There was a little cabin about a 100 meters away. I got to there with the constant pain in my arm. When i knocked on the door. A guy opened the door. He had long gray hair, and a gray beard. He was wearing a red Shirt but i couldnt recognise the color of his pants.

"Oh my god! What hapened to you man? Get in, i have a first aid kit inside.", he said

"Thank you. Im Luke.", i said when he proffesionally put a cast on my arm

"Im Truth. I know, its a weird name but i cant do anything with it."

"Oh. Can you tell me how i got here."

"Sorry. But i got a blank in my mind. I don't remember anything. I woke up unconces this morning. Last thing i remember is that someone hit me in the head, yet getting me unconces."

"I woke up like that too. Im from LS. I dont know how i got here or what hapened."

"Oh well. Since you are from LS, are you in any gang?"

"Yes, from the Groove Street families.

"I work alone."

"So, then can i help you with your stuff. Since its gonna be a long time before i can get back to Los Santos."

"Sure. You can help me, but now you need to get some rest until your arm is felling better."

"Cool. By the way, i have two guns from my gang. Maybe they will be useful."

"Which guns?"

"Two Desert Eagles."

"Oh man, what a couinsidence. I just ordered some ammo for them yesterday."

"Cool. Here you go. That one is yours."

I gave him the gun. All of a sudden i heard a loud sound, it sounded like a plane motor.

"Oh, thats my delivery." Truth said

We got out, i saw crates falling out of the plane. The next second there were parachutes opening ahead of every crate.
With a lot of struggle, we opened all of the crates in about half an hour. In them there were little boxes with ammo, lots of them. Then we got onto counting, every box had 50 bullets. Every crate had 20 boxes. There was 10 crates, making a total of 10 000 bullets. When i asked him how much did it cost, he told me it costs only 500$. Which means 20 bullets cost one dollar. Since the deagles were poverful guns it was like having infinite ammo. We hid the ammo in his garage. He put an extra bed in the corner so i can sleep there. He really seemed like a friendly guy. When i got in my bed, i gave it a little tought. He said he works alone, but i think he was lonely. He agreed that i help him. Why would he do that if he works alone. I draw peace with the fact that he was only lonely. I couldnt wait for tommorow and new adventures.

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when are you going to fix the weapons?


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Posted 27 March 2008 - 10:41 AM

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Prologue:

It was a cold, dark night on the streets of Los Santos. The air was filthy, the ground was a tad hard, and the hookers walking past were filled to the brim with an unbelievable amount of sleeze. It's hard to survive in this town, especially if you're in my gang.

Oops, I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Steven Daniel Cameronson, or as my friends call me, SD. I'm 24 (I turn 25 in November of this year, 1993) and I've lived in Idlewood for my entire life. My parents and my younger brothers, Matthew (aged 20) and Michael (aged 12) live in Las Venturas. I have very little contact with them, the ignorant bastards. I'm fighting for my life down here is this hole and the least they can do is throw me a bone...no, I can't resort to that. I have to fight this battle myself to survive.

My friends, I mentioned earlier, are members of the Front Yard Ballas, a set of the Ballas. I, myself, am a Balla, although since this neighbourhood has been 'annexed' by the Orange Grove Families, things haven't been quite so good. I used to sell some drugs from Flint County and San Fierro, but now with that business stopped, I have nothing to do. Of course, I get by with my job serving pizza at the local Well Stacked, and get a steady $10 an hour for 5 hours a day, 6 days a week. Not only that, but the hours are quite reasonable; 10:00 to 16:00. All in all, that adds up to $300 a week, which for someone in this part of the city, is quite good. And ever since Governer Fernandez cut off all taxes and electricity and gas bills to the eastern suburbs of Los Santos, life has been easier. I usually spend my money pimping out my '83 Majestic, or hiring hookers on the week-end for a bit of fun. I guess I'm addicted to weed, and I find myself smoking about an ounce a day, which is just over the average cigarette.

Enough about me, now we must focus on the matter at hand; the business section of my life. The Ballas hold only Jefferson, with a few low-key members like me living in Orange Grove dominated areas. Our biggest allies, the Vagos, whom we never really got along with but were on good terms with, had almost been wiped out and only hold Las Calinas. The Varios Los Aztecas, an ally of the Orange Grove, took over all of the former territories of the Vagos. What I have to do is simply fight my way up the food chain, and make sure that the streets of east Los Santos are run by the Ballas again. Whether it takes me weeks, months, or even years, I'm willing to do anything it takes...absolutely anything.

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Posted 27 March 2008 - 10:50 AM

QUOTE (GTASA_passer @ Mar 27 2008, 10:01)

when are you going to fix the weapons?

Now it's done. All gangs have a Baseball Bat to start out with.




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