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Posted 12 April 2008 - 02:40 PM

New mission

" A Traders Savior"



Ray gets a phone call

Phone: hello ray,
Ray: who is this?
Phone: that does not matter the only thing that matters right now is you
Ray: what are you talking about?
Phone: The police are about to find out about
you and the deal
Ray: how do you know about that?!
Phone: the only police that is sertain it was you is going to turn your name in shortly
Ray: where is he?
Phone he is in the redlight district at paulies revune club
Ray: thanks he hangs up
ray goes to paulies and sees the police park his car and go in
ray get in the police car and takes it to the bomb shop and puts a bomb in it
ray takes the car back with out a scratch and parks it
the police gets in his car and drives and he blows up the car and himself

mission passed no money reward

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Posted 12 April 2008 - 03:30 PM

another new mission and i made young ray prototype skin so u can use it if you want or not

" Don bennys last dance"


ray gets a phone call

police officer: Ray, i need you take care of something
Ray: what?
Police: i need you to get rid of the leone family don
Ray: why what did he do?
Police: he has killed 20 officers in the past 3 days TAKE HIM OUT!!!
Ray: whoa, man chill out for a second where is he?
Police: he's at the leone manison near harwood
Ray: ok i'll do it
Police: ray make sure that skunks son sal don't see anything
ray hangsup
ray goes and picks up a chainsaw
and goes to the manison
he killed all the gaurds and members there and started walking toward don benny on the ground
Don: kid, please don't kill me i'll make you a made man anything you want just name it
Ray: sorry pal it's just buissness
Ray saws and it shows blood splat on rays face
mission passed 1300 dollars and chainsaw

i have wrote this it kinda like add on to don bennys last dance mission


Ray gets a call

police: Ray! you butcherd that guy i have'nt seen something that grousome sence the harwood butcher!
Ray: yeah, yeah, thanks to you i ruined my suit.
Police: don't worry about it ray tell you what stop by the staiton you've earned your badge
Ray go to the staiton and earns a police uniform .

Thats when you get the wearible police uniform



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#123

Posted 12 April 2008 - 03:36 PM

QUOTE (23rocks @ Apr 12 2008, 15:30)
another new mission and i made young ray prototype skin so u can use it if you want or not

  " Don bennys last dance"


    ray gets a phone call

  police officer: Ray, i need you take care of something
  Ray: what?
  Police: i need you to get rid of the leone family don
  Ray: why what did he do?
Police: he has killed 20 officers in the past 3 days TAKE HIM OUT!!!
Ray: whoa, man chill out for a second where is he?
Police: he's at the leone manison near harwood
Ray: ok i'll do it
Police: ray make sure that skunks son sal don't see anything
ray hangsup
ray goes and picks up a chainsaw
and goes to the manison
he killed all the gaurds and members there and started walking toward don benny on the ground
Don: kid, please don't kill me i'll make you a made man anything you want just name it
Ray: sorry pal it's just buissness
  Ray saws and it shows blood splat on rays face
mission passed 1300 dollars and chainsaw

i have wrote this it kinda like add on to don bennys last dance mission


Ray gets a call

police: Ray! you butcherd that guy i have'nt seen something that grousome sence the harwood butcher!
Ray: yeah, yeah, thanks to you i ruined my suit.
Police: don't worry about it ray tell you what stop by the staiton you've earned your badge
Ray go to the staiton and earns a police uniform .

Thats when you get the wearible police uniform

The police doesn't just send their men alone to go and kill a mafia boss. No way, they would send in the SWAT and get them to arrest everybody.

Also, I'm pretty sure Sal was already the don of the Leone family in 1987.

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Posted 12 April 2008 - 03:56 PM

i wrote it like that one because it never really said sal was don in 1987 so i was just mixing it up and 2 ray going in by himself
was because no swat team member had the balls to, and it was not really appoved to kill him by head police it was just one of rays friends whos a cop and hated the leones so really this don ray killed was real bada*s and i wrote it to prove rays strengh so later i could write in more boss's that heard about it that want ray to work for them

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Posted 12 April 2008 - 03:57 PM

QUOTE (23rocks @ Apr 12 2008, 15:56)
i wrote it like that one because it never really said sal was don in 1987 so i was just mixing it up and 2 ray going in by himself
was because no swat team member had the balls to, and it was not really appoved to kill him by head police it was just one of rays friends whos a cop and hated the leones so really this don ray killed was real bada*s and i wrote it to prove rays strengh so later i could write in more boss's that heard about it that want ray to work for them

That doesn't really make much sense.

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Posted 12 April 2008 - 04:41 PM

Ok RAYS FRIEND is a cop now that hates the leones right.... So he's always asking the head captin police to ambush them but the captin aways says no....So the friend baseicly asked to ray to kill him for him in simplafied

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#127

Posted 12 April 2008 - 04:51 PM

you should work on thoes missions.. and you've gotta know how stuff go in the police station.. you cant just pretend its a cartoon.. like in the mission where Ray mickes up the delaler.. shouldnt the police recognisze Ray?

and the police cant just send alone man to kill a mafia boss.. one more thing.. even if they did Ray might said that he has a warrent to search Sal or Bob's or whatever this dons name and then sneak through out the place maybe then kill him...

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Posted 12 April 2008 - 05:13 PM

I Was Thinking Changing Sex Club7/ Paulies To Somthing Else Like A Cinema
Or Somthing

I am Open To Any Suggestions

PM Me With Your Ideas

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Posted 12 April 2008 - 05:33 PM

QUOTE (junior731657 @ Apr 12 2008, 17:13)
I Was Thinking Changing Sex Club7/ Paulies To Somthing Else Like A Cinema
Or Somthing

I am Open To Any Suggestions

PM Me With Your Ideas

Thanks

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John Ill speak to ya via skype I have an idea

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Posted 13 April 2008 - 04:55 AM

Why, hello there. Most of you probably don't know me, and I expect that because I hang out in the writer's discussion, and sometimes poke my head into Gen. Chat, but John said it was alright for me to join as a co-writer or something because you need help coming up with a plot.

Now, I'm not a guy who reads into detail everything, so I skimmed over this topic, and from what I have discerned, we're dealing with Ray Machowski eleven years prior to LCS. This leaves a few options open, but what you got to realize is that Ray, in LCS, was being taught how to be a crooked cop by McAffrey, and he wasn't comfortable with it.

So, we can't have Ray start off crooked, hell, we got to start him off cleaner than a whistle. A stand up cop, with a "stand up" partner, Leon McAffrey. Leon can be sort of crooked, meaning he dabbles in criminal bribery, but isn't swimming in it. Ray, completely oblivious to Leon's intentions, can be manipulated by Leon into doing certain jobs because of, let's say, because a gang doesn't like another gang, when in reality, Leon wants one gang out of the picture for a payout from the mob. This still gives Ray the innocent cop look, but shows how he can so easily be manipulated, as in LCS.

This could give us the ability to link Ray to different gangs as he is sent by Leon to mess with them, unknowingly, such as busting weapon deals or setting up drug busts, then blaming another gang. We could then turn the plot into Ray trying to clean up Liberty, which results in alot of gangs dispersing, but some of the stronger gang surviving and being protected by Leon, which would explain his connection with the Leone Family.

It's hard to write for this because you want to write Ray as corrupt and still follow the GTA timeline. This takes place eleven whole years before LCS when Ray was uncomfortable with criminals. So this is the best type of storyline to go by for now, unless you decide to either throw away Ray, or diverge from the GTA timeline.

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Posted 13 April 2008 - 05:40 AM Edited by Dar, 13 April 2008 - 05:57 AM.

I agree with Cubanwhip, Ray needs to be a straight cop, but we could have some missions where he goes undercover, infiltrates a gang, gains their trust and then bring them down. This would be a good excuse for Ray to do some criminal activities. I was also thinking there should also be missions where you work for Internal Affairs, and expose your corrupt chief.

These are my ideas for bosses on Staunton-

-The Chief (who you later find out is corrupt)

-The Police Dispatcher (I think there should be a special parked cop car at the station, which you enter and a cutscene plays with the dispatcher calling for help with an armed robbery, bar brawl, mugging etc.)

-Internal Affairs (Two clean cops who, with your help, are investigating the others to expose them)

We also need to make a partner for Ray.

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Posted 13 April 2008 - 06:14 AM

Well, right now, I'm setting up the major parts off the "story". I've got most of the gangs down, some new, most should sound familiar:

Leone Mafia Family
Forelli Mafia Family
Sindacco Mafia Family
Harley's Angels
Los Vatons
Liberty City Triad
Japanese Yakuza
____________
____________

I need two more to replace The Hoods and The Cartel.

Also a list of radio stations:

Liberty V-Rock - Metal/Hard Rock
Lips 106 - New Wave/Synth
Liberty Talk - Talk Radio
Rising - House Music
Head Radio - Rock/Power Ballads
Kool 103 - Disco
Juice FM - Electro/Hip-Hop
Soothin FM - Jazz
MI 925 - Pop

I have a, sort-of-kind-of, story outline that really needs to be tweaked, but it has a basic outline of what should be done.

"Liberty City. Voted “Worst Place in America” for the second year in a row, the city teams with growing Mafias and small street gangs, battling for control over the expanding metropolis.
Ray Machowski, law abiding police detective, sees the city through rose colored glasses. Seeing the city as infested with criminals, but with a perfect police force that helps uphold the law, Ray helps his partner, Leon McAffrey clean up the streets of this city.
But what he doesn’t know won’t hurt him. It’s Liberty City, no one can be trusted and it’s all up for grabs."

I'm typing more and more on word and I should soon be starting up on writing the storyline/missions/script.

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Posted 13 April 2008 - 07:33 AM

QUOTE (Cubanwhip @ Apr 13 2008, 06:14)
Well, right now, I'm setting up the major parts off the "story". I've got most of the gangs down, some new, most should sound familiar:

Leone Mafia Family
Forelli Mafia Family
Sindacco Mafia Family
Harley's Angels
Los Vatons
Liberty City Triad
Japanese Yakuza
____________
____________

I need two more to replace The Hoods and The Cartel.

Also a list of radio stations:

Liberty V-Rock - Metal/Hard Rock
Lips 106 - New Wave/Synth
Liberty Talk - Talk Radio
Rising - House Music
Head Radio - Rock/Power Ballads
Kool 103 - Disco
Juice FM - Electro/Hip-Hop
Soothin FM - Jazz
MI 925 - Pop

I have a, sort-of-kind-of, story outline that really needs to be tweaked, but it has a basic outline of what should be done.

"Liberty City. Voted “Worst Place in America” for the second year in a row, the city teams with growing Mafias and small street gangs, battling for control over the expanding metropolis.
Ray Machowski, law abiding police detective, sees the city through rose colored glasses. Seeing the city as infested with criminals, but with a perfect police force that helps uphold the law, Ray helps his partner, Leon McAffrey clean up the streets of this city.
But what he doesn’t know won’t hurt him. It’s Liberty City, no one can be trusted and it’s all up for grabs."

I'm typing more and more on word and I should soon be starting up on writing the storyline/missions/script.

In my opinion we should keep the Diablos , the Hoods (but only the Red Jacks) and perhaps call the Harley's Angels a different name or keep it as Liberty City Bikers. As for a gang to replace the Cartel- a different faction of the Yakuza ( The Kasen don't have to be the only Yakuza group in Liberty), a gang of street thugs similar to the Streetwannabes/Sharks from Vice City, the Irish Mob or the Russian Mafia.

By the way, Leon was Ray's new partner in 1998 and I don't think people want to diverge from the GTA storyline.

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#134

Posted 13 April 2008 - 09:09 AM

QUOTE (Cubanwhip @ Apr 13 2008, 08:14)
Well, right now, I'm setting up the major parts off the "story". I've got most of the gangs down, some new, most should sound familiar:

Leone Mafia Family
Forelli Mafia Family
Sindacco Mafia Family
Harley's Angels
Los Vatons
Liberty City Triad
Japanese Yakuza
____________
____________

I need two more to replace The Hoods and The Cartel.

Also a list of radio stations:

Liberty V-Rock - Metal/Hard Rock
Lips 106 - New Wave/Synth
Liberty Talk - Talk Radio
Rising - House Music
Head Radio - Rock/Power Ballads
Kool 103 - Disco
Juice FM - Electro/Hip-Hop
Soothin FM - Jazz
MI 925 - Pop

I have a, sort-of-kind-of, story outline that really needs to be tweaked, but it has a basic outline of what should be done.

"Liberty City. Voted “Worst Place in America” for the second year in a row, the city teams with growing Mafias and small street gangs, battling for control over the expanding metropolis.
Ray Machowski, law abiding police detective, sees the city through rose colored glasses. Seeing the city as infested with criminals, but with a perfect police force that helps uphold the law, Ray helps his partner, Leon McAffrey clean up the streets of this city.
But what he doesn’t know won’t hurt him. It’s Liberty City, no one can be trusted and it’s all up for grabs."

I'm typing more and more on word and I should soon be starting up on writing the storyline/missions/script.

Liberty V Rock? It's LCR.. me and Junior talked it over allready.. LCR - Libert City Rock.. V rock is Vice rock..

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Posted 13 April 2008 - 10:07 AM Edited by Herne, 13 April 2008 - 10:55 AM.

Hey, this mod sounds/looks good!

My 2 cents (and some)..

You could start off with Ray as a mid-ranking uniformed cop, with a promotion later on, perhaps for a significant bust (One which he gets an illicit tip off for?).
You have to remember that as a law abiding cop, Ray isn't going to be into smash-and-grab, kill everyone type things so you'll have to be more creative with missions.

You could have an informant mission where you meet an informant but your meeting is ambushed and you have to get the informant out safely by shooting your way out (this is acceptable if you or anyone else is under threat), grab a car and race back to the police station, with cars chasing you and trying to run you off the road.
I like the thought of getting calls from the dispatcher for assistance on armed robberies etc. Maybe you could modify the vigilante mission so that you can activate dispatcher type missions whenever you are in a cop car?
It would probably be a good idea if you could somehow prevent the player from killing innocents. Unfortunately I think all the wanted level stuff is hard-coded, you might still be able to do this though.... If the player gets a wanted level he passes out, wakes up in hospital after a 'nervous breakdown'. But you would need to make things so that the player couldn't get a wanted level in the course of a mission (Easy enough I think) but what would be really sweet is if you could make it so that the player can intervene in those gang skirmishes you see in the streets without getting a wanted level. This might be possible if there is something in the SCM to do with the good citizen bonus (In vice if you punch someone being chased by a cop you get $50 and no wanted level).
You could have performance bonuses as a way to earn extra cash. (i.e. for intervening in lots of gang fights, 'catching' lots or criminals)
It is possible in vice to have gang members follow you around, they spawn in Vercetti mansion and you just walk up to them to get their help. You could maybe use this to get some help from fellow officers. Another possibility would be to have a key combo to call in backup (similar to the 'driver' mod?).

When I was playing LC I used a cheat/trainer to use the ray model and I had a mustang replacing the hotring spawning outside my safe house. :-). I would pretend to be a detective with a mustang.. you know.. like how some detectives have cool cars. So.. as Ray doesn't steel cars, maybe a car showroom is needed. In fact, there is already a car showroom, you could polish it up a bit, as it is going to be much newer. Ray could also be given a 'company' car when he makes detective. (Just by adding a parked-car spawner near his safe-house or somewhere in the station car park)

You could have a suave gang of sports car driving pastel suit wearers. Perhaps they are from Vice city? Is this set post Vice city? I think VC is actually set in 1987 isn't it? If so you could maybe have the Vercetti gang expand to LC (Gunning for revenge, now that he's taken out Sonny?) But as the Vercetti gang never got a hold in LC you could have missions which involve hindering and eventually getting rid of said gang.

Sorry, I think I got a little carried away...
I'm afraid I'm not much of a modder and I don't have much time (exams closing in). Maybe sometime after exams.. who knows?

EDIT: "Vice City, as depicted in Grand Theft Auto: Vice City, is set in 1986" -Wikipedia biggrin.gif . So it's feasible that Tommy Vercetti is trying to make a comeback in LC, get revenge, get back to where he was? AFAIK there isn't much back story for Tommy, just that he was in LC and went to jail and it was probably Sonny's fault?

EDIT2: sorry, last thing.. You could have missions where you find out a cop is selling information to the mob (any mob) but you need proof, so you get photos, similar to the VC mission where you photograph the senator with candy suxxx.
oooo... maybe having been ruined you can get this senator whats'isface to move to LC and try his luck there?

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Posted 13 April 2008 - 11:23 AM

QUOTE (jojo_7 @ Apr 13 2008, 09:09)
QUOTE (Cubanwhip @ Apr 13 2008, 08:14)
Well, right now, I'm setting up the major parts off the "story". I've got most of the gangs down, some new, most should sound familiar:

Leone Mafia Family
Forelli Mafia Family
Sindacco Mafia Family
Harley's Angels
Los Vatons
Liberty City Triad
Japanese Yakuza
____________
____________

I need two more to replace The Hoods and The Cartel.

Also a list of radio stations:

Liberty V-Rock - Metal/Hard Rock
Lips 106 - New Wave/Synth
Liberty Talk - Talk Radio
Rising - House Music
Head Radio - Rock/Power Ballads
Kool 103 - Disco
Juice FM - Electro/Hip-Hop
Soothin FM - Jazz
MI 925 - Pop

I have a, sort-of-kind-of, story outline that really needs to be tweaked, but it has a basic outline of what should be done.

"Liberty City. Voted “Worst Place in America” for the second year in a row, the city teams with growing Mafias and small street gangs, battling for control over the expanding metropolis.
Ray Machowski, law abiding police detective, sees the city through rose colored glasses. Seeing the city as infested with criminals, but with a perfect police force that helps uphold the law, Ray helps his partner, Leon McAffrey clean up the streets of this city.
But what he doesn’t know won’t hurt him. It’s Liberty City, no one can be trusted and it’s all up for grabs."

I'm typing more and more on word and I should soon be starting up on writing the storyline/missions/script.

Liberty V Rock? It's LCR.. me and Junior talked it over allready.. LCR - Libert City Rock.. V rock is Vice rock..

Actually, the V stands for Vulture. They mention the Vulture really often in VRock in both VC and VCS.

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#137

Posted 13 April 2008 - 01:14 PM

also you should add Flash Fm in liberty ciity in which flash fm was originated in liberty city in the 80's and it was turned into flashback fm in the late 90's which lcs and gta 3 took place

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Posted 13 April 2008 - 07:34 PM Edited by junior731657, 13 April 2008 - 07:46 PM.

Another Triad Family Has The Casino

Sorry I Forgot To Mention

portland triads and

staunton triads

The Triads Have The 5 Star Casino (LCS Big Shot)
(GTA3 Kenjis) Heres A pic:
user posted image
I have made graphic for the flags it says 5 star casino in chinese

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Posted 13 April 2008 - 07:58 PM

sorry about this but.... triads owning the casino? Isn't that a bit.. old? Yakuza owned it in gta3, Triads owned the casino in SA, why not have a different gang own it?
It looks very new and shiny to me, maybe it would have been under construction during the 80's? I'm not about to volunteer to model that tho, so i should just stfu blush.gif
I have a few more storyline/mission ideas but uhh.. I wont spam your topic unless you want to hear them.

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Posted 13 April 2008 - 08:09 PM

QUOTE (Herne @ Apr 13 2008, 19:58)
sorry about this but.... triads owning the casino? Isn't that a bit.. old? Yakuza owned it in gta3, Triads owned the casino in SA, why not have a different gang own it?
It looks very new and shiny to me, maybe it would have been under construction during the 80's? I'm not about to volunteer to model that tho, so i should just stfu blush.gif
I have a few more storyline/mission ideas but uhh.. I wont spam your topic unless you want to hear them.

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Posted 13 April 2008 - 08:45 PM

I don't really want to keep The Diablos and The Hoods because they were such a small gang way back in LCS and III, so back in 1987 they would either be non-existent or so small, they wouldn't be acknowledged. So I've replaced The Diablos with Los Vatons, a Puerto Rican gang and The Hoods with the aptly named "Harley's Angels" after the leader, Harley Miramontes, and his obsession with the classic 70's shows, Charlie's Angels, just to add some humor.

If Flash FM did exist in Liberty back then, then that would be fantastic. I had such a hard time coming up with a name for the pop station. So now it will be "Flash".

Also, thanks Dar, I didn't realized Ray was Leon's new partner. So maybe Ray can start off as a cop that just transferred into the LCPD and just starts off as a basic cop, and eventually gets promoted to Detective in the game for his superior job at regulating gang activities and his many drug busts. Leon McAffrey is just a fellow co-worker, and Ray can be suspicious of his crooked activities and some missions may revolve around exposing him and catching him in the act.

The Word document is almost finished so I might copy and paste it after I finish with the gangs and the introduction cutscene. Also, let me know if you want a prototype list of songs for the radio stations.

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Posted 13 April 2008 - 10:32 PM

Soon I would like Every one who has mission ideas
to get together and decide what story line is the
best one to use or maybe everyone get together
to come up with one story line

PM me for more info

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Posted 14 April 2008 - 01:48 AM Edited by 23rocks, 14 April 2008 - 01:52 AM.

Oh, sorry bout that, see i did not finsh lcs because it was soooo boreing, and i really have not played gta 3 in 3 years. But i agree he was a kinda non wannabe bad cop, but what do you think about we don't use the don benny mission and i personaly think the triad mission i wrote works, because let's say the traid's told the police their would be less crime rate in china town if they just help get the bikers out, so they send the "new guy" ray to help the triads and they want ray to esscort the guns dealer but then bikers come and try to kill him so you have to kill all of them at the docks and then get in the dealers gun van and go to china town but bikers start raming you half way their so you out run them to china town before van blows up and you pass resulting in the gain of 500 bucks

i tryed to work it in with the hole good guy thing but i don't think the cops would make ray the head officer right away so you have to gain police trust,but lets just say going with the other dudes crroupt head cop, hear is my new improved idea ok rays the guy thats just wants to help but just never had enoff power to do anything so growing up in liberty ray figures the best way to help is to be a police so he joins up but it turns out the head cop is some coke sniffing A hole kinda like tepenny from san, and treats ray like a runt and gives him jobs just to try to kill him for laughs, ray soon becomes tired of the officer and also finds that the officer is letting out dealers from prison to get free drugs, ray tells higher officers and they send ray with a group of officers and S.W.A.T. but the officer has heavy protection and has to get threw the building to the 3rd floor where the officer is when he gets their he find that all the other officers are preoccupied with gaurds so ray confronts the officer but he pulls out a gun and is about kill ray but he hears guns geting closer and starts runing out the back of the building to escapes to a car so ray has to chase him down and kill him before he gets to the frerrys then when ray kills him the head liberty officer promotes ray to the old officers job. and thats my portland police mission idea, of course other mini cop missions need to be wrote before you play the showdown with the head police. Well tell me what you think also i think the main story should be pretty much about a guy that just wants to do good for liberty also it would be cool if someone could make it so you could cuff people on mini cop car missions instead of killing them all and also a way to put them in the car and drive them to the jail colgate.gif

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Posted 14 April 2008 - 02:13 AM

also here is my ray head compared to old ray head feel free to use it if you like


http://s239.photobuc...=raycompare.jpg

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Posted 14 April 2008 - 02:44 AM

QUOTE (junior731657 @ Apr 13 2008, 22:32)
Soon I would like Every one who has mission ideas
to get together and decide what story line is the
best one to use or maybe everyone get together
to come up with one story line

PM me for more info

Sent you the mission outline for about 4/5 of the game. It's a very, very, very rough outline.

But I already have a pretty good idea of what happens after the storyline.

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Posted 14 April 2008 - 05:14 AM

Should I make a thread where the writers work on the missions? It's getting cluttered here with everyone posting unrelated story ideas.

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Posted 14 April 2008 - 06:48 AM

A new thread would be good. Or irc? I'm not very good with things like MSN and can't do skype sorry.
O.k. roughly, Ray is a n00b in uniform. He has just got divorced and moved to LC for a fresh start.
He can have some starting money. He needs to find his house, then report for duty.
Upon reporting for duty his cop uniform becomes available at the station (before he starts in jeans/t-shirt)
Police station is a money earning asset, so rather than paid for each mission, Ray is earning a salary.
Ray does some small missions, chasing muggers or whatever.
Ray is seen as a talented officer and gets put on a team (NOT leading) doing drug busts etc.
Amount earned by police station 'asset' increases. (i.e. a pay rise)
Possible side line -- Ray joins SWAT. Does some big busts, bank robberies, arms deals. Big gun battle showdowns.
Amount earned by police station 'asset' increases. (i.e. a pay rise)
Ray is promoted to some kind of team leader.
Amount earned by police station 'asset' increases. (i.e. a pay rise)
Ray takes his detectives exam..
Amount earned by police station 'asset' increases. (i.e. a pay rise) (you getting my drift?)
Of course Ray could still earn money other ways, including performance bonuses for really big busts.

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#148

Posted 14 April 2008 - 10:46 AM

QUOTE (23rocks @ Apr 14 2008, 04:13)
also here is my ray head compared to old ray head feel free to use it if you like


http://s239.photobuc...=raycompare.jpg

I ALLREADY made Junior a young Ray. and sorry but thats just lame MS Paint work

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Posted 14 April 2008 - 12:53 PM

in the mod he destroys all evidence, documents, of him existing. after it he gets a plastic surg to look young

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Posted 14 April 2008 - 05:13 PM

QUOTE (QwertyAAA @ Apr 14 2008, 12:53)
in the mod he destroys all evidence, documents, of him existing. after it he gets a plastic surg to look young

huh? I don't get that at all. Ray IS young, he doesn't need surgery and he IS a clean cop, with no shady background.. right? I haven't played LCS so I don't know for sure but.. well he is going to be younger right?

So, I had an idea that if you did have a Vercetti gang, you could have missions AGAINST them, as they are trying to muscle into LS and causing all sorts of trouble in the process. So Ray has to 'run them out of town'. This could involve all kinds of missions like drug busts, ambushing arms deals, meeting informants, stopping a bank robbery, whatever. The final mission against them could involve driving them out of town, perhaps arresting whoever is acting as Tommy's lieutenant (as I doubt it would be Tommy himself). At the end of it maybe Ray gets a nice sports car (Vercetti gang car) spawning at his safehouse.

Another quirky idea I had was that as an up and coming uniform cop Ray could be asked to test a new police bike, do an obstacle course, maybe a race? It could replace the Angel for example.. Or maybe it's a police scooter, I dunno. The bike performs nicely but suffers from electrical problems, like the sirens/lights not working (which is a real shame.. although it would be hard/impossible to make them work anyway!) but Ray gets to keep the prototype.




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