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Posted 18 February 2007 - 04:11 AM Edited by TonyZimmzy, 06 August 2007 - 09:19 PM.

THIS STORY/SCRIPT IS COMPLETED. STARTED ON: 17 FEBUARY 2007 - FINISHED ON: 06 AUGUST 2007. THANK YOU FOR READING.

GRAND THEFT AUTO: HEART CITY STORIES BOXART [FRONT]. CLICK HERE TO VIEW.
From Left to Right: Hunter Chopper, Randy Strohmeyer.
Sabotage, The Green State Subway.
Charlie Cohen, Gary Strohmeyer (Top), Harley.
Nate Barcalow [Protagonist]
, Gary Strohmeyer (Bottom), Loki.


GRAND THEFT AUTO: HEART CITY STORIES BOXART [BACK]. CLICK HERE TO VIEW.
From Left to Right: Randy Strohmeyer, Giovanni Fibbonacci [Antagonist] , Carmella Fibbonacci.
Suni Xu, Pink Banshee, Lieutenant Miller, Boat.


GRAND THEFT AUTO: HEART CITY STORIES MAP (UPDATED) CLICK HERE TO VIEW.
NB [Safehouse] - Nate Barcalow's Home.
G [Safehouse] - Grandma's Home.
C [Charlie Cohen] - Diamond Flush Casino.
F [Fredwardo Quardro] - Fredwardo's Apartment.
X [Sabotage] - Sabotage's Payphone.
R [Randy Strohmeyer] - Randy Strohmeyer's Family Home.
M [Marc Allen] - Marc Allen's Nightclub.
C [Carmella Fibbonacci] - Carmella Fibbonacci's Mansion.
T [Turf Gates] - The Saint's Base.
L [Loki] - Loki's House.
S [Suni Xu] - Suni's Country House.
C [Cari Xu] - Suni's Country House.
M [Lieutenant Miller] - Fort Arleson.
A [Alexandre Capelo] - Alexandre Capelo's huge mansion.


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UPDATES SECTION
Aug. 06: Heart City Stories is complete. Added Final Mission, "Justice"
Aug. 03: Updated Some Stuff + Added New Mission: "Genocide"
Jun. 22: Updated Map + New Mission: "State Slicking"
Jun. 17: Added Alexandre Capelo + Derek Doherty to Character's List + New Mission: "Inside Job"
Jun. 15: Added Mini McAllester to Character's List + New Mission: "Problem Child"
Jun. 14: Added Cari Xu + Grant Gilmoore to Character's List + New Mission: "Albatross"
Jun. 11: Added Roberto Sucré to Character's List + New Mission: "Rumpo-bump off"
Jun. 09: Updated Character's List + New Mission: "Sundown In Triad Town"
Jun. 07: Added Woozie to Character's List + New Mission: "White Regime"
May 31: Updated Character's List + New Mission: "Boat Jacked"
May 15: Many Updates to Character's List + New Mission: "An Eye For An Eye"
May 12: Updated Character's List + New Mission: "Together Forever"
May 11: Added Lieutenant Miller to Character's List + New Mission: "Project: Cold War"
May 04: Added Turf Gates to Character's List + Updated Map + New Mission: "Commando Firehouse"
Apr. 24: Added Carmella Fibbonacci to Character's List + Updated Map + New Mission: "Soul Mates"
Apr. 22: Added Giovanni Fibbonacci to Character's List + New Mission: "Giovanni Fibbonacci"
Apr. 13: Added Marc Allen to Character's List + Updated Map + New Mission: "We're Not Alone..."
Apr. 11: Added Sabotage to Character's List + Updated Map + New Mission: "Sabotage"
Mar. 26: Updated Character's List + New Mission: "The Casket Of Roderick Usher"
Mar. 26: Added Charlie Cohen to Character's List
Mar. 21: Updated Character's List + New Mission: "Stone Cold"
Mar. 21: Added Harley to Character's List
Mar. 19: Updated Character's List + New Mission: "A Death In The Family"
Mar. 16: Added Vincent "Vince" Apollo to Character's List
Mar. 16: Updated Character's List + New Mission: "Fredwardo's Big Day"
Mar. 01: Added Rick Armstrong to Character's List + New Mission: "The Slip"
Feb. 27: Added Audrey "Grandma" Barcalow to Character's List + New Mission: "Love Thy Neighbor"
Feb. 24: Added a Map + New Mission: "Fredwardo's Last Pizza"
Feb. 21: Added a Support Section. If you enjoy the story, show your support smile.gif
Feb. 18: Added Randy Strohmeyer + Fredwardo Quardro to Character's List & New Mission: "Fredwardo's Bank Robbery"
Feb. 18: Added Back Boxart
Feb. 17: Added Rebecca Barcalow To Character's List
Feb. 17: Added Intro + Beginning Mission: "Brother"
Feb. 17: Heart City Stories Released


GRAND THEFT AUTO
Heart City Stories

Heart City is the capital of Green State in England. Green State consists of Four Major Sites. Heart City , Gadebridge City , Downtown , New Stanford .

Heart City is based on London. It equals the size of Los Santos & San Fierro in San Andreas.
Gadebridge City is based on Manchester. It equals the size of Las Venturas, San Fierro in San Andreas & Shoreside Vale in Liberty City.
Downtown is based on Detroit in America. It equals the size of Las Venturas in San Andreas
New Stanford is based on the richer parts of London, connecting to Heart City. It is the size of Shoreside Vale in Liberty City.

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RADIO STATIONS

Sunshine FM
Rock

Revamp 98.7
Classic

Heart2Heart
Chat

Southside 106.6
Rap

Yellow FM
Pop

Broken Hearts
Soul


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Sunshine FM - Hosted by Dawn Gervis "Because Sunshine isn't always as light as it seems"
Playlist:
Rammstein - Mein Teil
Deftones - Back To School
Underoath - I Don't Feel Very Respective Today
He Is Legend - I Am Hollywood
Papa Roach - Getting Away With Murder
Enter Shikari - Mothership
The Darkness - I Believe In A Thing Called Love
My Chemical Romance - I'm Not OK (I Promise)
Green Day - American Idiot

Revamp 98.7 - Hosted by Tommy Reynolds "Music is like a fine wine, With age it always becomes better"
Playlist:
Faith No More - Digging The Grave
Failure - Stuck On You
Oasis - Song 2
Coolio - Gangsta's Paradise
A - Nothing
Deftones - My Own Summer
Slipknot - Wait & Bleed

Heart2Heart - Hosted by Lazlow "Lazlow's back on the air, in England baby!"

Southside 106.6 - Hosted by Skorpion-K-Kripp "Shoutout to all my boys up in Lib'aty City"
Playlist:
50 Cent - In Da Club
Eminem - Just Lose It
Busta Rhymes - Call The Ambulance
Madd Dogg - Dogs Life
Dr Dre - Still D.R.E
Snoop Dogg - Oh No
Jay-Z - 99 Problems
Kanye West - Jesus Walks

Yellow FM - Hosted by Paulo & Maccer "Taste the dripping, warm yellow. Now love it."
Playlist:
Busted - Year 3000
Girls Aloud - Big Brother
Kylie Minogue - Dance Floor
Blue - Guilty
The Killers - Somebody Told Me
McFly - Room On The Third Floor
Franz Ferdinand - Take Me Out
Britney Spears - Toxic
Snow Patrol - Spitting Games
The Fray - How To Save A Life

Broken Hearts - The Heart City Love Station - Hosted by "Dr. Love" "Bringing The Love & Soul back to Heart City"
Playlist:
Whitney Houston - I Will Always Love You
Celine Dion: My Heart Will Go On
Journey - Open Arms
Lionel Richie - Endless Love
Foreigner - I Want To Know What Love Is
Sarah McLachlan - Angel
The Bangles - Eternal Flame


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STORYLINE

Three years prior to the events that took place in Grand Theft Auto IV: Heart City, you play as Nate Barcalow (Voiced by Robert Kazinsky), a 25 year old man from up north, moving back down south to Green State to take care of his terminally ill grandmother and little sister. His parents were killed in a suicide bombing, resulting in his little sister having to move in with her grandmother, and Nate being forced to move back to the place he called home for eighteen years before being driven out by unknown reasons. Now that he's returned home to take care of his grandmother and little sister, he spirals deeper and deeper into a criminal underworld to try and provide for them both. Starting off in Heart City, spreading out to Downtown and Gadebridge City, Nate will need to befriend everyone he can from the smallest, unknown criminal in Fredwardo Quardro, to the criminal empire masterminds in The Yakuza.

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GANGS

The Sharks - The Sharks are part of a gang from America. They own the majority of the Downtown area, and their leader, Alex, is rumoured to be insane. Constantly at war with The Saints to maintain their cocaine business. After being run out of Vice City circa. 1986 they relocated to The Estrelabrilho Islands, and then to Liberty City circa. 2002. Now, in England, they've taken over the Downtown area, and plan on staying.
LIKES: Nothing
DISLIKES: The Saint's
LEVEL: High


The Saints - The Saints are taking the Downtown area by storm, with their constant arms dealings and cocaine pushing. They are an all black gang. The leader is Theodore "Turf" Porter, born and raised in the Downtown area, and is 38 years old. He always wears a black wifebeater and ripped jeans. Turf was right-hand man to Jimmy "Silver" Saint, the uncle of Ryan Saint. Silver appointed Turf the leader of the gang before dying due to a heart attack in 1997.
LIKES: Everything English, The food, The beer, The football games
DISLIKES: Everything not English
LEVEL: Medium


The Ace of Hearts - The Ace of Heart's are a street gang in Heart City, taking up the west side of the city. They all wear red & white, nothing else. The leader is unknown, but presumed to be the same as GTA IV unless Johnny hasn't taken top position in the gang yet.
LIKES: Killing Black Heart's members
DISLIKES: The Black Hearts
LEVEL: Medium


The Black Hearts - The Black Hearts Gang are a street gang in Heart City, taking up the east side of the city. They all wear red & black, nothing else. The leader is Charlie Cohen. He usually wears a black wool hat with a dark red heart logo on it
LIKES: Killing Ace of Heart's members
DISLIKES: The Ace of Heart's
LEVEL: Medium


The Yakuza - The Yakuza is a well organized gang in Gadebridge City. They wear black suits, and the important members wear white suits. The leader is Cari. He is well trained in Martial Arts, and believes that without honor a man is nothing. He is half Japanese and half English, and it causes alot of controversy with the Yakuza in other parts of the world, who are all full blooded Japanese
LIKES: Street raceing, Modding cars, Collecting cars
DISLIKES: The Sicilian Mafia
LEVEL: High


The Sicilian Mafia - A gang dressed in black suits & black shirts, located in Gadebridge City. The leader is Guiseppe Caracciolo, leader of The Caracciolo Family Mafia. He is a man of around fifty years old. They own the entire South Side of Gadebridge City, and are dominating The Yakuza in the power struggle in the city.
LIKES: Gang war, Organized crime, Drugs, Money laundering
DISLIKES: The Yakuza
LEVEL: Very High


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CHARACTERS

WARNING: THIS SECTION CONTAINS HEAVY SPOILERS

Name: Nate Barcalow [Protagonist]
Introduced In: Intro
Killed In:
Character Information: Nate Barcalow is the Stone Cold Killer from GTA IV: Heart City, who ruthlessly kills Grant Gilmoore to put the club under Sean Wood's control for The Yakuza. Nothing was known about him, other than he was a personal friend to Suni, and The Yakuza. He left Green State in 1997, and is now forced to return to take care of his little sister and terminally ill grandmother. This story will show how he rose to power, and became a feared ally of The Yakuza.
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Name: Rebecca Barcalow
Introduced In: Brother
Killed In:
Character Information: Rebecca Barcalow is the Eight year old sister of Nate Barcalow.
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Name: Randy Strohmeyer
Introduced In: Phone; Brother
Killed In: Genocide Justice
Character Information: Randy Strohmeyer is Nate Barcalow's best friend from when they were kids. They grew up together, and he's excited to hear Nate is back in town and recommends if he needs any money to see a contact he knows in Heart City named Fredwardo. Randy is the older brother of Gary Strohmeyer. He lives in Gadebridge City and can't meet Nate untill later in the game, so he calls alot. He has an obessive cocaine problem. Randy was proven to of faked his death in Genocide, and was revealed to be working with the Sicilian Mafia all along. He betrayed Nate, and was killed in the final mission.
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Name: Fredwardo Quardro
Introduced In: Fredwardo's Bank Robbery
Killed In: Fredwardo's Big Day
Character Information: Fredwardo is from Mexico and is the same age as Nate. They are introduced thanks to Randy Strohmeyer. During "Fredwardo's Big Job", he steals some Lotto tickets, in which he wins the grand prize of £75,000. He plans to move out of Green State with his cousin, also named Fredwardo, and he attempts to bust his cousin out of jail with Nate's help. Unfortunatly, Fredwardo is killed, and Nate steals his Lotto ticket.
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Name: Audrey "Grandma" Barcalow
Introduced In: Love Thy Neighbor
Killed In: A Death In The Family
Character Information: Audrey Barcalow is the terminally ill Grandmother of Nate and Rebecca. She's constantly in bad health, and has a hold over Nate, forcing him to do sickening acts of violence for her, as seen in "Love Thy Neighbor" when she got him to murder a kids parents. She dies off-screen in "A Death In The Family" due to her on-going illness.
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Name: Rick Armstrong
Introduced In: The Slip
Killed In:
Character Information: Rick is one of the smaller Antagonists from the original Heart City, in which he betrays Sean after escaping from Prison. In Heart City Stories, Rick is on the run from the law, and is getting Nate to help him keep escaping & keep his business alive. He still looks exactly the same from Heart City, except he's completly bald. Nate betrays him when Rick is caught by the police, in which he steals Rick's money.
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Name: Vincent "Vince" Apollo
Introduced In: Fredwardo's Big Day
Killed In:
Character Information: Vince was the leader of the Black Hearts in GTA IV: Heart City. In HCS, he's just busted out of jail, and he's just a Black Heart's thug. He pays Nate alot of money to get him from the cop station to his storage garage in Heart City.
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Name: Harley
Introduced In: Stone Cold
Killed In: Buried Alive
Character Information: Harley is the right hand man of Vince's boss, the Black Hearts leader, Charlie Cohen. Harley confronts Nate after Vince sends Nate to do his job, and he warns Nate to stay away from Vince. Harley is around the 6 foot 10 marker, and is well built. In 'Buried Alive', he is seen getting into the car with Charlie, and the car exploding just after Charlie gets out. He was still in the car at the time of the explosion. Harley faked his death and appears in "The Black Heart Redemption."
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Name: Charlie Cohen
Introduced In: The Casket Of Roderick Usher
Killed In: Buried Alive
Character Information: Charlie Cohen is the current leader of the Black Hearts gang in Heart City. In 2007, the leader is Vince, who Charlie strongly dislikes. It was mentioned that Vince's cousin was the former leader of the gang. Charlie also runs the Diamond Flush Casino where he'll give you jobs from. He's always seen holding a deck of cards, or a deck of cards within hands reach of him. He tries many times to sell Nate out, and in the end tries to kill him, but fails. This leads to his death.
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Name: Sabotage
Introduced In: Sabotage
Killed In: Request Denied
Character Information: Sabotage gives Nate his first mission in the Downtown area by payphone. Sabotage believes he is Justice and is trying to eradocate Evil from the world. Although not met face to face early on, he becomes closer to Nate when Nate continues to do good work for him, and starts meeting face to face later on. He is also the founding father of The Saints gang.
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Name: Marc Allen
Introduced In: We're Not Alone...
Killed In:
Character Information: Marc Allen owns The Sandle & Pond Nightclub Downtown, but his business is being torn apart by the on-going gangwar between The Saints and The Sharks. After giving up hope, he turns to Nate Barcalow, his old friend for help.
Character Picture: Click Here

Name: Giovanni Fibbonacci [Antagonist]
Introduced In: Giovanni Fibbonacci
Killed In: Justice
Character Information: Giovanni Fibbonacci is a ghost from Nate Barcalow's haunted past. Although not seen in the mission he's introduced in, Nate is struck by fear for his own life and his sister's when Giovanni sends Sicilian's to ambush them both. Giovanni is head capo to the Sicilian Mafia, and Nate and him both have history, which was explained in 'An Eye For An Eye,' the first mission you see Giovanni face to face. Giovanni Fibbonacci is the main Antagonist of Heart City Stories.
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Name: Carmella Fibbonacci [Girlfriend]
Introduced In: Soul Mates
Killed In: Together Forever
Character Information: Carmella Fibbonacci is the younger sister of Antagonist Giovanni Fibbonacci. She lives in a Mansion in New Stanford, and Nate begins to manipulate and use her to scorn Giovanni Fibbonacci. She's your in-game girlfriend, aswell as missions involving her, so treat her right...for now. In the mission "Together Forever", Nate filmed Carmella performing sex acts to send the tape to her brother, to anger him further more. After it was done, Nate shot her in the head in cold blood.
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Name: Theodore "Turf" Gates
Introduced In: Commando Firehouse
Killed In:
Character Information: Turf is the leader of The Saints gang in Downtown. In 2007, he was in Prison, running his own gang, and killed by Sean Wood. Here, he is currently in control of the Downtown area, and his father is 'Sabotage'. He was betrayed by Miller and Nate, which is why he is in Prison in Heart City.
Character Picture: Click Here

Name: Lieutenant Billy Miller
Introduced In: Project: Cold War
Killed In:
Character Information: Billy Miller is a Lieutenant for the Army Base, 'Fort Arleson' in Gadebridge City. He was in contact with Turf about setting someone up to take the fall of a heavy project, but when Miller heard it was Nate, he backstabbed Turf instead. Miller mentioned that he served in the military with Nate's father, and hinted that the reason he is alive today is because of him. He plays a large role later in the game when Nate reaches Gadebridge City.
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Name: Loki
Introduced In: An Eye For An Eye
Killed In:
Character Information: Loki was virtually unknown in Heart City, but he plays a big role as Nate Barcalow's best friend in Heart City Stories. Loki helps Nate try to become more 'acustom' to the way the Yakuza runs things, and helps him take out the invading Triads. After taking down the Triads, which was Loki's main agenda, he isn't seen too often, but remains a good friend of Nate's.
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Name: Suni Xu
Introduced In: An Eye For An Eye
Killed In:
Character Information: Suni helped defend Nate against the Sicilians after the train crash. He got Loki to help him out. He's currently in a fued with the Sicilians in Gadebridge City, and sending Nate and Loki to take out the invading Triads. The Southern Yakuza are also breathing down on his neck.
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Name: Gary Strohmeyer
Introduced In: Boat Jacked
Killed In:
Character Information: Gary Strohmeyer, in Heart City, was one of Sean Wood's closest friends right to the end. In Heart City Stories, he's younger, calmer, and trying to prove to his older brother, Randy that he's not a useless idiot. He'll help Nate out alot to try and prove to Randy that he can be useful.
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Name: Woozie
Introduced In: White Regime
Killed In: Faked Death In: Sundown In Triad Town
Character Information: The same Woozie from San Andreas in 1992, here in Green State leading his Triads to team up with the Sicilian Mafia to take down the Yakuza. In "Sundown In Triad Town," it was seen that Woozie was killed either by Loki or Nate. After both Loki and Nate escaped the sinking ship, Woozie escaped by helicopter and fled.
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Name: Roberto Sucré
Introduced In: Rumpo-bump off
Killed In:
Character Information: Roberto is only featured briefly in HCS, as Gary's friend in the mission "Rumpo-bump off". He appears a few more times, but nothing major. In Heart City, he was an influential character, and was in the game from almost beginning to end. He mentioned he'd just got a lowrider, and that it was brand new. It was the same lowrider he was so proud of in Heart City.
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Name: Cari Xu
Introduced In: Albatross
Killed In:
Character Information: Cari Xu is the Waka-Gashira of the Yakuza based in Gadebridge City. He's taken aback by the good work Nate has put in for Suni and Loki, taking down the Triads and helping them out. Cari is killed in Heart City by Sean Wood, which leads to Nate taking Sean Wood out. He plays a vital role in the later missions of this game as he fueds with the Southern Yakuza and Sicilians, seeking Nate's help.
Character Picture: Click Here

Name: Grant Gilmoore
Introduced In: Albatross
Killed In:
Character Information: Grant was brutally killed in execution fasion in IV: Heart City, by Nate Barcalow. In Heart City Stories, Nate keeps him in check for Cari; making sure everything is running smoothly at the club, and dealing with his problems to stay on the payroll from Cari Xu.
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Name: Mini McAllester
Introduced In: Problem Child
Killed In:
Character Information: Mini is introduced as being a minor problem for Grant Gilmoore. Grant promised her something in exchange for sex; Mini is a prostitute in Heart City Stories, but in IV: Heart City, she's never introduced face-to-face, because she is a sucessful Radio DJ who is in control of her own Pop Station. Mini is hell bent on exacting revenge on Grant, causing more problems for Nate to fix to stay in the best interest of the Yakuza.
Character Picture: Click Here

Name: Derek Doherty
Introduced In: Inside Job
Killed In:
Character Information: Derek works under the thumb of billionaire former mobster Alexandre Capelo. Seen in Heart City in 2007, he works in the Chop Shop that the protagonist owns.
Character Picture: Click Here

Name: Alexandre Capelo
Introduced In: Inside Job
Killed In:
Character Information: Alexandre Capelo is a former mobster who has a very shady past. He begins giving Nate driving jobs with very high payoffs.
Character Picture: Click Here

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WEAPONS

Pistols
9MM
Magnum
.357

Shotguns
Shotgun
Sawn-off Shotgun
SPAS-12 Shotgun

Automatic
Tec 9
Uzi
MP5

Assault
AK-47
M79 Rifle
M4

Rifles
Laser
PSG1
Dragunov

Other (Find Only OR Buy Outside Of Ammunation)
Knife, Katana Sword, Baseball Bat, Knuckle Dusters, Hatchet, Screwdriver, Steel Chain, Pool Cue, Dustbin Lid, Grenades, Molotiv Cocktails, Rocket Launcher, Minigun, Satchel Charges.


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Posted 18 February 2007 - 04:23 AM

Wa-Hey!

Hai Five!

Gimme Five!

Uhm...Anyway, Can't wait for first mission, Looks great! icon14.gif

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Posted 18 February 2007 - 04:25 AM

Yay finally! Heart City Stories! Can't wait for the first chapter Tony~ You got my support. wink.gif icon14.gif

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Posted 18 February 2007 - 04:38 AM

CUTSCENE

The sun is just rising over Heart City, as a freight-train is speeding down the open-ground train tracks. It slowly starts coming to a halt, and stops next to a warehouse, as the camera cuts to one of the open freights on the freight-train, which is full of chopped wood, and our protagonist, Nate Barcalow is sitting in it, sporting an open black leather jacket, plain black shirt, and dark blue jeans. He has short black hair, and a scar above his left eye, resulting in some of his eyebrow hair not growing, and the scar runs down onto his eye lid. He jumps off the freight container, carrying a black dufflebag, and starts walking along the all too familiar streets of Heart City, as a monologue plays of the protagonist's voice inside of his mind, for the player to hear, as the camera is focused on Nate's legs walking.

Nate (OS): These streets have changed since '97. No familiar faces or landmarks in site

The camera shows Nate walking past a guy mugging an old woman, and Nate just continues to walk by

Nate (OS): One thing hasn't changed, though. Crime. But then again, crime never changes. Crime will always be alive in Green State...

Nate stops outside of a small house in a beat-up neighborhood in Heart City. He drops his dufflebag and takes out a pair of keys and opens the door, then bends down and picks the bag up and walks inside as the screen fades to black

"Brother"

FADE IN: CUTSCENE

Nate walks through into the living room of the house, where a young blonde haired girl of around eight is eating a bowl of cereal. She jumps out of her seat when she sees Nate walk in, and runs over to him and hugs his leg. Nate is around 6 foot 2, and very built.

Rebecca: Brother! I'm so glad you've come back

Nate: (Smiles and pats her head) Hey, Rebecca. Loosen up, it was a long journey

Rebecca: I'm sorry. I've got to go to school soon, so i'll see you at home time big brother.

Nate: Wait, who's taking you to school?

Rebecca: I've got to walk now that grandma can't drive no more

Nate: Are you nuts? Come on, I'll drive you. Where's grandma's Kuruma?

Rebecca: We had to sell it for her medicines

Nate: Hmm... alright, don't worry. Just stay here

Nate walks out of the house as the screen fades to black

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

You're now playable with our new protagonist.. Basic instructions appear on-screen of how to walk, punch, run, jump, and importantly, steal a car. A large green marker appears outside of your grandma's house. If you enter it, a message will appear on screen: "You need a car!" so run through the alley and onto the main streets and jack a car. Drive it back around the block and onto the green marker and the screen fades to black

FADE IN: CUTSCENE

Rebecca comes out of the house and sees Nate sitting in the car

Rebecca: Woooow, where did you get that!?

Nate: It's mine

Rebecca: My friends will think I'm so cool driving to school with my big brother in his car!

Rebecca gets into the car

END OF CUTSCENE

A blip appears on the radar for your sister's school. Drive her to it. Along the way an in-game chat will start up

Rebecca: So where have you been for seven years

Nate: I've been in America. They teach you about America in school?

Rebecca: Of course. Did you see the statue of liberty?

Nate: Not exactly. I was in Liberty City

Rebecca: Oh! We learned about that place a little bit...

Nate: Why so quiet all of a sudden?

Rebecca: No reason. I just wish you would of called more often. Everyone missed you

The in-game chat will end here. Drive her to the green marker outside of the school gates, and a cutscene will roll

CUTSCENE

Rebecca gets out of the car and shuts the door

Rebecca: See you later!

Rebecca runs into the school

END OF CUTSCENE

Mission Passed!

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Posted 18 February 2007 - 04:44 AM

That was a great first mission and intro to HCS. Can't wait for more! cool.gif icon14.gif

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Posted 18 February 2007 - 04:47 AM

I like where this is going mate! So if this is Heart City Stories. Where is the original Heart City? I'd like to read it. Can't wait for another mission. smile.gif

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Posted 18 February 2007 - 08:43 PM

Wow, thanks so much for the positive replies and ratings guys. It's really appreciated even though you have no idea if this is going to turn out good or bad yet tounge.gif . Here's the first "real" mission. I added a back boxart and updated the character's list aswell. Enjoy.

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A message appears on-screen: "Head back home and save your game to continue." A blip appears on the radar for your grandma's house. Drive back to it and drive into the marker for one of the garages next to the apartment to open. Drive into it and get out of the car and go inside the house, and go up to your room, which is very plain, just a dark blue room with a bed, and enter the floating iPod icon by the bed to save your game. Once you've saved the game, six hours will of passed. Once you've saved your game and gone back outside, you will recieve a phonecall. Press triangle to answer it

Nate: Hey?

Voice (OS): Nate-igeee, I heard you were back in town!

Nate: Randy!? Good to hear a familiar voice, this place has really gone to sh*t since I've been gone

Randy (OS): Tell me about it. Where abouts are you, Heart City?

Nate: Yeah

Randy (OS): Crap. I'm in Gadebridge City, and the bridges are shut down

Nate: Because of those suicide bombings?

Randy (OS): Yeah. I'm sorry to hear about your parents

Nate: Thanks

Randy (OS): Well listen; untill that sh*ts sorted out, I've got a friend up in Heart City that could give you some work. I've gotta warn you though...

Nate: Is he dangerous?

Randy (OS): No. Well, kind of. Only to himself. And people around him. His name's Fredwardo, he lives in an apartment on Lyrical Way. You know where that is?

Nate: Yeah

Randy (OS): Alright. Apartment D, Room 3. I'll call you later. And remember, be careful around him

Randy hangs the phone up and Nate puts it away. An "F" appears on the radar for Fredwardo. Save your game and make your way to the outside of his apartment building complex and enter the green marker to begin the mission.

"Fredwardo's Bank Robbery"

CUTSCENE

Nate is walking up the path to the apartment complex, as he sees a car on fire to his right, and a woman run past him, screaming and half naked. Nate walks into the building and walks past two doors and stops at the third door and bangs on it, as the rusted number plate falls onto the floor and makes a clang next to Nate's left foot, as a young Mexican man answers the door

Nate: You Fredwardo?

Fredwardo: Ah! you see Fredwardo's ad in newspaper!

Nate: Ad in the newspaper? What?

Fredwardo reaches over to a desk near his door and hand's Nate a newspaper

Nate: (Reading aloud) "Are you not scared of police? Beating up hookers for the money? Random acts of violence? Robbing cluckin' bells... in broad-daylight? Are you hitman for hire??? If so, come see Fredwardo. Fredwardo look for lackey, to help me with my troubles! Interested? Come see Fredwardo! on Lyrical Way, apartment block D, door three, the green one... outside the building where the cop was shot... and raped. She was on the news, you know the one! Come see Fredwardo!"

Nate throws the paper back at Fredwardo

Nate: Are you kiddin' me? You put that in the f*ckin' paper... Is this a bust!? (Steps back and cautiously looks around)

Fredwardo: Come on, you can drive Fredwardo somewhere!

Fredwardo grabs a black mask off the desk and a 9MM Pistol and walks out of the apartment, as Nate looks a little confused, then follows him as the screen fades to black

FADE IN: CUTSCENE

Fredwardo leads Nate over to a rusty red Manana and Fredwardo gets in the passenger seat as Nate gets into the the drivers seat

Nate: So where you want me to take you?

Fredwardo: We pay a little visit to bank!

END OF CUTSCENE

A blip appears on the radar for the bank. On route, a small in-game chat kicks up

Fredwardo: So what be your name big man?

Nate: Nate

Fredwardo: Girly name! A girly name is Nate!

The in-game chat ends here. Drive your way to it and park in the green marker and a cutscene will roll

CUTSCENE

Fredwardo puts a black ski-mask on, inside out, and the Binco label is sticking out from the side of the mask. Fredwardo points the 9MM at Nate

Fredwardo: Fredwardo be right back. You keep engine running and stay right here! I be two miniutes... two miniutes quarter tops!

Fredwardo runs out of the car and runs into the bank, as the camera cuts inside of the bank as Fredwardo runs in

Fredwardo: (Shouts) This Fredwardo! Every down!

Everyone panics and gets down on the floor, as the bank tellers raise their hands. Fredwardo begins walking further into the bank, and he walks past a yellow 'Wet Floor' sign and shortly there after slips and accidently fires the gun into the air, shooting one of the pillars holding the under-repair ceiling up, and the ceiling collapses, and crushes everyone, including Fredwardo. The camera cuts to Nate in the car, scratching the stubble on his chin, and with his free hand he's changing the radio stations in the Manana, then he hears a thunderous crash, and quickly looks over at the bank to see the windows explode, and nothing but dust begins covering the bank and surrounding area

Nate: What the...

Nate gets out of the car and runs into the bank and is almost blinded by dust and he begins coughing, as he hears the faint screams of Fredwardo. He makes his way further into the bank and sees Fredwardo's lower-half crushed by plaster and mortar

Fredwardo: (Coughing violently) Nate, Nate!? Is you!?... Fredwardo in biiiiig trouble!

Nate grabs Fredwardo's left arm and pulls him out from under the wreckage

Fredwardo: Fredwardo need hospital, Fredwardo need hospital badly!!

Nate throws Fredwardo over his shoulder and runs out of the bank as Sirens are heard in the distance. Nate runs over to the car and dumps Fredwardo's body into the backseat, and Nate gets into the front, when Police speed round the corner

END OF CUTSCENE

A blip appears for the hospital. A message appears on-screen: "Drive Fredwardo to the hospital!" You have one star, with two squad cars right behind you. If you're good at driving, you'll lose 'em quick. If not, get more practice.

As you're driving, at random times in-game chats will kick-up.

Fredwardo: Fredwardo's belly hurts...

Nate: Yeah, great.

Fredwardo: Fredwardo think he taste blood in his mouth.

Fredwardo: Fredwardo cannot feel his legs...

Fredwardo: (Crys in pain) Mamia!? Fredwardo think he see a light... Fredwardo coming, Mamia!

Nate: Those are the cops, you idiot.

After the last in-game chat, the one star will go away. When you get to the hospital, park in the green marker outside as the screen fades to black

FADE IN: CUTSCENE

Nate gets out of the car and opens the back door and drags Fredwardo out and dumps him on the floor, just outside of the double-door entrance to Sacred Heart Hospital

Fredwardo: Fredwardo feel spleen burst. Owieee!

Nate: (Shouts) I need some help out here

Fredwardo: Fredwardo feeling sleepy

Nate bends down to one knee and slaps Fredwardo in the cheek, waking him up

Nate: How much money did you pocket?

Fredwardo: Fredwardo, he did not get the money

Nate shakes his head and then punches Fredwardo in the face, knocking him unconcious as two medics come outside, and Nate walks away and the screen fades to black

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

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Posted 20 February 2007 - 08:55 AM Edited by ya mum, 20 February 2007 - 08:56 AM.

OH MY GOD, OH MY GOD, OH MY GOD!!! I can't believe it has finally been released! Well I just finished Heart City the other day and just read the first two mission's of HCS and it is awesome. Well looking forward to the rest of the story! Keep up the good work icon14.gif

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Posted 21 February 2007 - 09:25 AM

You're standing outside of the hospital. After about 10 seconds, your cellphone will ring. Press Triangle to answer it.

Nate: Who's this?

Fredwardo (OS): Nate! Is Fredwardo!

Nate: How'd you get this number, you idiot

Fredwardo (OS): Randy Strohmeyer, he give Fredwardo number! Says you dependable and can shoot real good! Come back to apartment later, Fredwardo be out of hospital by then!

Fredwardo hangs the phone up. An "F" icon appears at Fredwardo's apartment. Go and save your game, and head back over there to begin the next mission.

"Fredwardo's Prescription"

CUTSCENE

Nate knocks on the door, and after a few moments, Fredwardo opens it, in a wheel chair

Fredwardo: Nate! Fredwardo feeling bad. Doctor say Fredwardo need lots of drugs

Nate: You really took a bad fall, huh?

Fredwardo: Worse! Fredwardo shins...

Nate: ...Shins what?

Fredwardo: Fredwardo pull muscle in shins. Take Fredwardo to drug dealer! Get drugs, get better!

Nate: I think your doctor meant--

Fredwardo: Fredwardo in pain! Get me to drug dealer!

Nate goes behind Fredwardo and wheels him away as the screen fades to black

FADE IN: CUTSCENE

Nate opens Fredwardo's Manana door and helps Fredwardo in and Nate gets into the drivers seat

END OF CUTSCENE

Fredwardo: Find Fredwardo a drug dealer!

A blip appears on the radar. Drive to it, and you will notice there are two Ace of Hearts gang members standing around

CUTSCENE

Fredwardo: Fredwardo know how to bargain with drug dealers!

Nate gets out of the car and unloads Fredwardo and wheels him over to the drug dealers

Fredwardo: Yo holmes doggy dog you got drugs for me.. Fredwardo!

Gang Member: What little man!?

The Ace of Hearts gang member pulls out a 9MM and starts firing at Fredwardo. Fredwardo starts screaming and rapidly wheels himself away

Gang Member: You want some too, mother f*cker!?

END OF CUTSCENE

You have 13 rounds of a 9MM in your weapon inventory. Take both of the gang members out. One has a 9MM, one is just using his fists. Once you've taken them out, a cutscene will roll

CUTSCENE

Fredwardo wheels himself back over

Fredwardo: Snatch his trouser! Fredwardo rip his, and haves one pair only

Nate: What about the drugs?

Fredwardo: Fredwardo already got drugs at home!

Nate: Then what the f*ck did I just--

Fredwardo: Nate! Fredwardo haves business to do must going now

Fredwardo quickly wheels himself away

Nate: Hey! What about some cash for gas and-- f*ckin' idiot...

END OF CUTSCENE

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Posted 22 February 2007 - 08:19 AM

This is a great story homie! I like the game script thing going on. I'll be waiting for more. icon14.gif smile.gif

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Posted 22 February 2007 - 12:47 PM

I would just like to say that i loved GTA - Heart City. I think it would be cool as an actual game smile.gif . I hope this one is as good smile.gif . I think your really creative and should work for roackstar smile.gif . I would be one happy customer and a long with many others. So TonyZimmzy keep the good work up smile.gif . Looking forward to the next mission/chapter.

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Posted 24 February 2007 - 02:27 PM

Ty for the replies, good ratings, and in general interest in the story thus far.

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There is now once again an "F" at Fredwardo's apartment. Go save your game then make your way over there and enter the marker to begin the mission.

"Fredwardo's Last Pizza"

CUTSCENE

Nate walks over to Fredwardo's apartment. The door has been smashed down, and Nate slowly walks inside.

Nate: Fredwardo, you in here?

Fredwardo: (Comes in from the bathroom with a mixture of shaving cream and blood on his cheeks) Fredwardo is poor man my friend, old razor chop Fredwardo's cheek. Fredwardo had idea last night to get some of those big greens

Nate: What do you plan we do?

Fredwardo: You break Fredwardo's stuff! Everything! (Tries to tip over a desk, but can't) Aww you get Fredwardo's point. Get to work!

Fredwardo tosses Nate a bat from next to the desk, and the screen fades to black

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

Blips appear all over his apartment for Fredwardo's items. Desks, tables, windows, pretty much everything inside of it you've gotta smash up. Once you've done so, a cutscene will roll

CUTSCENE

Fredwardo walks over to Nate and puts his hand on Nate's shoulder and laughs

Fredwardo: Fredwardo will now become rich man!

Nate: So, what Insurance company are you with?

Fredwardo: In...sur...ance..... Com....pa..ny...?

Nate: Yeah, you know... (Pulls away from Fredwardo) to pay for the damages

Fredwardo: What? Fredwardo confused

Nate: (Sighs) You don't have any Insurance, do you?

Fredwardo: Fredwardo Uncle, he tell Fredwardo "when in need of moola, break stuff, and Insurance fairy break through window at night and leave big money under pillow!"

Nate: You idiot, that's the tooth fairy

Fredwardo: Fredwardo's sh*t got breaked for nothing?! It's all your fault, Nate! give Fredwardo up the De'rino!! (Starts walking towards Nate)

Nate: Get the f*ck away from me, I ain't paying you anything you idiot

Fredwardo grabs Nate's jacket, and Nate punches him in the face, resulting in one of Fredwardo's teeth flying out, and him falling down to his knees

Fredwardo: (Looking over at the tooth) Fredwardo rich! (Grabs the tooth) I put this under pillow get billions! (Stands up) Punch Fredwardo again! We'll make billions! Me and you! Billions!!

Nate shakes his head and pushes him aside and begins walking away

Nate: (Stops and turns around) And it's De'niro... idiot

Nate continues walking away as the screen fades to black.

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

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Posted 27 February 2007 - 04:04 PM Edited by TonyZimmzy, 27 February 2007 - 04:19 PM.

You should be standing outside of Fredwardo's apartment block on Lyrical Way, with no icons available. After a few seconds your phone will ring. Press Triangle to answer it.

Nate: What?

Fredwardo (OS): Nate! Is Fredwardo!

Nate: What do you want, Fredwardo

Fredwardo (OS): Since you smash Fredwardo stuff, Fredwardo must handle some business out of town! Get some tasty pay! See-you when Fredwardo home!

Fredwardo hangs up the phone and Nate puts his phone away. There is now a "G" icon back at your Grandma's house, so go there, save your game, then enter the marker outside of the house to continue.

"Love Thy Neighbor"

CUTSCENE

Nate walks into the Kitchen, where his sick Grandma is eating a sandwhich at the table. She has taken her I.V. out and is constantly coughing, as Rebecca, with a bruise on her chin comes in aswell

Rebecca: Grandma you know you can't eat when you're meant to be on the medicine

Grandma: I'll eat what I want, when I want damnit!

Grandma gets up and slowly walks away as Rebecca talks to Nate, who is making himself a sandwhich

Rebecca: Grandma hasn't been getting alot of sleep lately

Nate: What happened to your face?

Grandma comes back in, still coughing violently

Grandma: Rebecca, be a dear and go fetch Grandma her reading glasses would you?

Rebecca leaves as Grandma walks closer to Nate

Grandma: I've barely seen eye or ear of you since you've been back

Nate: I've been busy trying to make money for you and Rebecca

Grandma: The neighbors boy has been bullying Rebecca in school. I didn't want to say anything infront of her, as it only upsets her

Nate: What do you expect me to do about it? I can't exactly beat up a ten year old kid

Grandma: No, but you can make the boys parents see some sense...

Nate: ...

Nate looks at the counter and picks up the knife he used to cut the bread and walks away as the screen fades to black

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

You're standing outside of Grandma's house with a knife in your inventory. A blip has appeared on the radar for next door. It's a very short walk, so when you get there, just enter into the marker for a cutscene to roll

CUTSCENE

Nate knocks on the door, knife in hand, as a balding drunk man answers the door

Man: What the hell d'you want, commie bastard!?

END OF CUTSCENE

A message appears on-screen: "Kill the boys parents." His dad will start throwing punches at you, you can either stab him, or if you still have the gun -- shoot him. Once he's dead, there will be another blip on the radar inside of the house for the boys mother. Go inside, find her (kitchen) and waste her aswell. Once that's happened, a cutscene will roll

CUTSCENE

The boy walks through the door to see his father murdered on the floor, as Nate walks in with the boys mother over his shoulder, and he throws her dead body onto the wooden floor, as the boy starts crying in terror

Nate: You the kid that's been bullying my sister?

Nate drops the knife on top of the boys dead mother.

Boy: Aahhh!!!

The boy runs away, screaming and crying in sheer terror

END OF CUTSCENE

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Posted 27 February 2007 - 10:39 PM

Although the last mission was, IMO, a bit too violent, I'm liking it.
Maybe when you finish HCS I'll read the original HC.
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Posted 01 March 2007 - 12:43 PM

You're back outside of the neighbors house. The door is still open, and you can re-enter the house, as there will always be a knife spawn in the living room, and over time the boys' parents bodies will decay, and never move from the spot. After about ten seconds, your phone will ring. Press Triangle to answer it

Nate: Hey

Randy (OS): Hey, hows working with Fredwardo going?

Nate: Terrible

Randy (OS): Haha, sorry. Listen, I know one more guy up that way if you're interested

Nate: Aslong as he is in no way connected to Fredwardo, I'm interested

Randy (OS): His name is Rick, Rick Armstrong. Last I checked, he lived on The Perusial Estates

Nate: I'll check it out

Nate hangs the phone up and puts it away and an "R" has appeared on the map. Go save your game and jack a car or bike and get over to it across town. Once you're there, enter the marker outside of a half finished construction site to begin.

"The Slip"

CUTSCENE

Nate is walking through the Estate, which is mostly filled with homeless people, and he sees a muscely bald man of about 27 sitting in the corner, drinking whisky straight from the bottle

Nate: You Rick?

Rick: (Looks up) Who want's to know?

Nate: Randy Strohmeyer said you might have some work for me. I'm Nate

Rick: Nate f*ckin' Barcalow, haha! (Stands up) Just the man I was looking for! You don't remember me, do you?

Nate: Can't say I do, no

Rick: I'm friends with Marc Allen, you remember him, surely!?

Nate: Sure do. How is he?

Rick: He's good, owns some club Downtown or something. Listen, I've got cops watching my every move. They're out front right now, and expect me to get into my car and then they'll bust me 'n throw me in Saint Jacob's for twenty to life

Nate: What you do?

Rick: Isn't important. I want you to lure 'em outta here, drive around for a while, then dump the car in the river when it's over

Nate: Alright, I wan't the money up-front though

Rick: Alright, alright -- here

Rick slips Nate some cash. Nate walks away as the screen fades to black

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

You're standing outside, infront of a white Kuruma. A message appears on-screen: "Get in the car and lure the cops away from Rick." Get in the car and you'll get a two star wanted level, and a time-limit counting down from 1.29. Drive around avoiding damage from cops, make sure the car doesn't catch fire, and make sure you don't get out of the car. Once the time-limit goes, the stars go, and a message appears: "Dump the car!" There will still be aggressive cop cars behind you, but you'll lose them easily. Drive the car to any river point in Heart City and get out and push it into the river, or, drive the car and hold Triangle to jump out of the car, and let it fly into the river. Once the car hits the water, the mission is complete.

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Posted 02 March 2007 - 12:22 AM

Nice mission, although I didn't really get the picture of how the Estate look like.

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Posted 03 March 2007 - 11:52 AM

You have an "R" icon which is now at the back of the Shopping Mall, in the parking lot underground. So go and save your game then jack a car or bike and make your way over to the back of the Shopping Mall, in the underground parking lot and enter the green marker to begin.

"Maxwell"

CUTSCENE

Rick is standing around in the parking lot, as Nate approaches him

Rick: The cops are still hot on me, and I can't get out of the damn city with these stupid bridges closed!

Nate: Want me to drive your car into the river again?

Rick: No, I don't have a car anymore! I need you to transport some drugs to one of my clients for me. I can't do it myself and he's getting restless, and I need his business. Take the drugs in the Laundry Van, they're in one of the Laundry Sacks. Just park the van and get out, get the cash, and bring it back here

Nate: Alright, where do I meet the guy?

Rick: He works shifts at Sacred Heart. He's a doctor there, name's Maxwell

Nate walks away as the screen fades to black

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

You're standing in the parking lot area, next to you is a Laundry Van. Hop in and drive to Sacred Heart Hospital, and park it in the marker

CUTSCENE

A man in a white coat and green scrubs comes out and opens the back of the van up, as Nate gets out and comes round

Nate: You got Rick's cash?

Maxwell: Yeah, yeah here, take it

Nate goes round and gets back into the van, as cops speed around the corner

Maxwell: No!! It wasn't me, man!! I swear!! Aahhh!!

Maxwell runs away

END OF CUTSCENE

Your wanted level has been boosted to two stars. A blip appears on the map for Rick back at the parking lot. Drive back over there and be careful not to take damage to the van, you can Pay 'n' Spray it anyway. Once you're there, drive into the green marker

CUTSCENE

Nate gets out of the van with a sack of cash and hands it to Rick

Rick: Excellent! Here's your cut

Sirens are heard outside

Rick: Crap! It's not safe here anymore... I'll call you!

Rick runs away as the screen fades to black

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

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Posted 03 March 2007 - 01:48 PM

biggrin.gif werry nice.. i like story maybe sometime later after we will realse our project, we can do this game <Vice City mod>

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Posted 03 March 2007 - 03:49 PM

New mission already! icon14.gif

Still a great story/missions.

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Posted 06 March 2007 - 07:19 PM

You're currently out of icons. After a few seconds, your phone will ring. Press Triangle to answer it

Nate: Yeah?

Fredwardo (OS): Nate! Is Fredwardo!!

Nate: What do you want this time, Fredwardo?

Fredwardo (OS): Fredwardo finish outside of country, back with giant oppertunity for Nate!

Nate: I don't really like the sound of that...

Fredwardo (OS): You be richest big man in whole State of Green! And remember; Fredwardo the man who give you the bread and crackers!

Fredwardo hangs up and Nate puts the phone away. There is now an "F" for Fredwardo back at his apartment on Lyrical Way. So save your game, and make your way over there. Enter the marker to begin.

"Fredwardo's Product"

CUTSCENE

Nate bangs on the door and Fredwardo opens up. Fredwardo is limping slightly as Nate walks into his apartment

Fredwardo: Fredwardo please to see Nate!

Nate: So what's the big idea then?

Fredwardo: You shove Fredwardo's drugs on street! Sell hookers, bums! Make them buy some drugs!

Nate: Drug dealing isn't my speciality. But I'll give it a go... Where are they then?

Fredwardo: Fredwardo, he be back in quarter miniutes...

Fredwardo limps off to the bathroom as Nate leans against the arm of the couch, twiddling his thumbs, as you hear noises coming from the bathroom

Fredwardo (OS): Hurghh!! Is time to meet the light Mr. drugs! Rruuggh!!

Nate: You okay in there?

Fredwardo (OS): Rrguh!! Fredwardo need complete quiet time!! Aarghh!!

After another fifteen seconds, you hear the toilet flush, and Fredwardo comes out with some small plastic bags

Fredwardo: Fredwardo have drugs!

Nate: I sure hope you washed the f*cking bags first

Fredwardo: Err... sure! Yes Fredwardo wash bag of course! Fredwardo no live like some wild boar-man...

Fredwardo hands the bags to Nate

Fredwardo: Make people pay big De'rino!

Nate: De'niro

Fredwardo: Right, Re'dino

Nate: De'niro

Fredwardo: Ya, Ed'irno

Nate shakes his head and walks away as Fredwardo sniffs his hands then quickly runs back to the bathroom as the screen fades to black

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

You're outside of the apartment block. There are three blips on the radar. Jack a car or bike and make your way to whichever one you want to. We're going to go from closest to furthest away, so the first one you'll get to is an Ace of Heart's member on a street corner. Walk up to him and a cutscene will roll

CUTSCENE

Nate walks up to the Ace of Heart's member

Gang Member: You sellin' product?

Nate: Sure, how much you need?

Gang Member: Let's take a looky see, man!

Nate flashes a bag at him, and he slowly takes it and looks it over

Gang Member: (Sniffs) You mother f*cker! You're tryin'a push that fa**ot Fredwardo's ass-drugs on me, aren't you!?

END OF CUTSCENE

The Ace of Heart's member is pissed, and he's gonna attack you with his fists. Waste him any way you wish to, and move onto the next blip. This time, it's a Hooker on a street corner. Approach her for a cutscene to roll

CUTSCENE

Hooker: What'chu got for me, big daddy?

Nate: Take your pick

Pimp: (Runs over) 'Ay boy, get yo' nasty ass product away from one of ma' girls

END OF CUTSCENE

The pimp is pissed. He has a 9MM, and is gonna shoot you. Waste him any way you wish to, and move onto the next blip. This time, it's a Biker inside of a bar. Walk in and approach him for a cutscene to roll.

CUTSCENE

Biker: What the f*ck do you want?

The Biker stands up, as two of his Biker friends come over with Pool Cue's

Nate: You wanna buy some drugs?...

Biker: Do I? (Looks at his friends) Do I want to buy some drugs?

Nate: ...Yeah, you stupid aswell as deaf?

Biker: The f*ck you say to me!?

Nate: Guess that proves it.

Biker: Get this clown outta here, boys (Snatches one of the bags and opens it up and sniffs inside then starts coughing violently) What the f*ck!? This ain't coke!

Biker #2: What is it!? (Let's go of Nate's Jacket and grabs the bag and sniffs inside then starts coughing violently aswell) You mother f*cker!

Biker: It smells like that sh*t you put inside your shoes, mixed with sherbet and anthrax!

END OF CUTSCENE

You guessed it, they're all pissed. Two of 'em have Pool Cue's, and the main one has a Steel Chain. If you grabbed the 9MM from the Pimp, this will be very useful right now. Waste 'em any way you wish to, and a blip appears back at Fredwardo's place. Head back over there and enter the green marker.

CUTSCENE

Nate boots Fredwardo's apartment door down, and sees Fredwardo in the living room with his pants around his ankles in his underwear, whilst pornography is playing on the television

Nate: (Shoves Fredwardo to the floor) What's in this stuff? (Throws the bags on top of Fredwardo)

Fredwardo: Haha! Fredwardo save money make himself own drugs!

Nate: I'm through with you. And all your bogus sh*t. You contact me again, I break your legs, got it?

Fredwardo: Fredwardo get what? Do Fredwardo need to drive to store to get it -- Fredwardo got serious job soon!

Nate: No, no more jobs. It's over

Fredwardo: We won't need no upfront pay! You see!

Nate shakes his head and walks away as the screen fades to black

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

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Posted 06 March 2007 - 08:24 PM Edited by Sinful, 06 March 2007 - 08:34 PM.

Fredwardo: Make people pay big De'rino!

Nate: De'niro

Fredwardo: Right, Re'dino

Nate: De'niro

Fredwardo: Ya, Ed'irno

LMAO. Although I dunno what you mean by De'niro (Robert?), those were some f*ckin funny lines.

What does (OS) mean? And where's Fredwardo from?

Nice mission, dude, lovin it.

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Posted 09 March 2007 - 01:03 PM

You're back outside of Fredwardo's apartment. You currently have a "G" for Grandma icon back at home, and an "R" for Rick at the Car Crusher. Go and save your game, and we're going to do Grandma's task first, as it's closest.

"Living Conditions"

CUTSCENE

Nate walks into the Lounge, where his Grandma is watching TV with an Oxygen mask on to help her breathe. When she sees Nate coming, she takes it off to speak

Grandma: The bastards at Homestead are evicting us because we can't pay rent. You haven't been making any money for us!! (Starts coughing)

Nate: I've been trying, but I've had to deal with this idiot that never makes me any money

Grandma: Wah, wah, wah. Stop whining like a baby and go make them change their minds about evicting us. Or are you a chicken sh*t, boy!?

Nate's Grandma lifts up a pillow, taking out a 9MM pistol from under it, and she hands it to him. Nate looks at her for a moment, then she waves him away and Nate walks away as the screen fades to black

FADE IN: CUTSCENE

Nate walks out of his Grandma's house and sees a man in a suit walking his way

Man: We have an eviction notice for one Audrey Barcalow

Nate: Not today you don't

Nate shoots the man in the chest and he falls on the floor, as guards get out of their security vans and start running over to Nate

END OF CUTSCENE

Four guards have appeared, and begin running at you. They all have bats, and leave you little to no time to even shoot one. The best option is to run around avoiding them, get into their security van, and run them over until they die. But anyway you want to do it is fine, aslong as they're dead. Once this happens, a cutscene rolls

CUTSCENE

Nate is standing over the men with gun in hand as his Grandma comes out the front door laughing and coughing at the same time

Grandma: That'll show those neo nazi sh*tholes (Looks at Nate who looks back at her) What are you waiting for! Go get us some god damn money kid!

Nate walks away as the screen fades to black

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

Mission Passed!
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Posted 09 March 2007 - 01:51 PM

This is actually where I started reading. XD Crazy. You've got a great Mission-based GTA "concept"(?) here, and I can't wait to get into it more.

As much as it seems like a shameless plug though, I was wondering if you could poke on over to my rather unspectacularly titled fic though. Sorta a mutual benefit sort of thing.

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Posted 09 March 2007 - 05:05 PM

Nice chap-- mission, dude.

Nate's granny sounds like Toni's momma on LCS, lol.

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Posted 10 March 2007 - 02:00 AM

Yo Tony, the story is doing really well.

Serafim votes Nate for the new Cipriani biggrin.gif

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Posted 12 March 2007 - 08:49 AM

This is really good Tony. Keep it up! icon14.gif cookie.gif

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Posted 12 March 2007 - 03:15 PM

Go and save your game inside of Grandma's house, and once you do, your cellphone will ring. Press Triangle to answer it

Nate: What do you want?

Fredwardo (OS): Fredwardo he roll round in lots of money! Can Nate hear all the big green Fredwardo bathing inside of? Put ears to phone Nate! (Rubs some money into the phone, causing static)

Nate: Where'd you get the money?

Fredwardo (OS): Fredwardo don't! But this is you when you do big job with Fredwardo he tell about other day. Nate puts foot in?

Nate: (Sighs) Alright, I'm in.

Nate hangs the phone up and now there are two icons available. An "F" for Fredwardo, and an "R" for Rick. We're going to go and do Rick's mission at the Car Crusher first. So jack a car/bike and make your way across town to the Car Crusher and enter the green marker at the front gate to begin.

"Crushed Fruit"

CUTSCENE

Nate is looking through the yard when Rick jumps out of the shadows

Rick: Boo!

Nate: (Steps back) What are we doing here?

Rick: Police found me. But these officers need to learn how to carry hand guns with them, because any maniac could be carrying a knife and some rope with him along the streets

Rick steps aside, revealing a dozen cops laying dead on the floor, as sirens are heard outside and Rick runs over to the gate and looks out

Rick: sh*t, they're coming. You've got about three miniutes tops! So hurry up!

Nate: What the hell do you mean I've got three miniutes? To do what?

Rick: Get rid of the bodies!

Rick points to the Magnetic Car Crane

Rick: I've already strapped them up, so go on!

END OF CUTSCENE

You're right where the cutscene left you off at, and Rick is standing by the door ducking in and out. There is a timer counting down from 2.45 in the corner of how long until the cops arrive. Run over to the Crane and get inside by pressing Triangle, and guide the Crane. Holding the L button and pressing Up + Down will move it fowards and backwards. Pressing Left + Right will guide it left and right. Holding the R button and pressing Up + Down will higher and lower it. There are eight dead cops laying in a pile. Pick each one up and dump him in the Crusher until none are left for a cutscene to roll

CUTSCENE

Cops arrive and get out of their cars as Rick starts shooting at them with a 9MM, but they soon wrestle him to the ground, as Nate gets out of the Crane

Cop: (Points his gun at Nate) Freeze!

Nate dives behind a small car pile and gets up and climbs up the large rusted yellow fence of the car lot and jumps over the other side of the street and runs away as the screen fades to black

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

Mission Passed!

The next time you get into a car, a radio report will kick off, the reporter saying that they caught the "most violent criminal to ever walk the streets of Heart City, Rick Armstrong." There are now two icons left standing. One is an "F" for Fredwardo, and one is an "R" for Rick at Heart City Pen. You won't need to save your game for Rick's, as it's not a mission. So make your way over to the Local Prison, and enter the marker to roll a cutscene

"Cash Settlement"

CUTSCENE

Nate is sitting in a two-way plastic booth with Rick on the other side, and they both pick up the phones

Rick: I've left a thousand quid under the matress of my bed at my apartment, along with a Shotgun. I want you to go get the Shotgun, and the money, and bust me outta here. You can keep quarter of it

Nate: (Stands up) I don't think so... thanks for the money, though

Rick: (Stands up and slams his fists into the plastic, unbreakable window) You son of a bitch! I'll make sure you're dead by the time I'm outta here!

Nate laughs as he walks out of the prison and the screen fades to black

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

You're standing outside of the Prison with +£1000 in your cash bar at the top right hand corner of the screen, and you have five rounds of a Shotgun in your weapon inventory.

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Posted 14 March 2007 - 08:55 PM

Drive back to Grandma's house and save your game. You now have one icon left available, and that's for your old buddy Fredwardo. Make your way to his apartment building and enter the green marker outside of his door to begin his "big job."

"Fredwardo's Big Job"

CUTSCENE

Nate knocks on Fredwardo's door and Fredwardo opens it quickly, wearing a Ski-mask

Fredwardo: Fredwardo prepared for action! Nate where is mask from you!?

Nate: (Grabs his mask and rips it off) You didn't tell me to bring a mask

Fredwardo: Fredwardo implied

Nate: No you didn't!

Fredwardo: Give mask to Fredwardo, we go do job now

Nate: (Tosses the mask down the hall) Come on, we don't need masks. And what's the job? I need the money

Fredwardo: (Puts his arm around Nate and pulls him close) Fredwardo and Nate (Grins and looks around, checking for people) we lift over Grocery Store!

Nate: (Pulls away) Rob a Grocery Store? That's the big job?

Fredwardo: Come! You drive there when drive back I will so you count money Fredwardo no know how to count

Nate: What a shocker.

Fredwardo and Nate walk down the hall as the screen fades to black.

FADE IN: CUTSCENE

Nate and Fredwardo get into his Manana

END OF CUTSCENE

A blip has appeared for the Grocery Store. Once you start driving, an in-game chat starts up.

Fredwardo: Nate have dreams?

Nate: What?

Fredwardo: Fredwardo have dreams. Fredwardo miss family

Nate: They die?

Fredwardo: No! They drop Fredwardo in box when Fredwardo a little baby. Leave Fredwardo in rain

Nate: Right.

Fredwardo: But Fredwardo cousin, Fredwardo, always were there for me. Now Fredwardo put in jail for sex

Nate: (Laughs) Your cousin is called Fredwardo?!

Fredwardo: Fredwardo sweared to Fredwardo cat want sex act, dick in mouth

Nate: Another word and I break your nose, got it?

Fredwardo: Fredwardo just say truths...

The in-game chat ends here. Make your way to the Grocery Store and drive into the green marker for a cutscene to roll. The player will notice it's the same one from Heart City, which Sean Wood owned as an asset.

CUTSCENE

Fredwardo and Nate are loading up their 9MM's and Fredwardo looks at Nate

Fredwardo: Fredwardo know store like back of palm... Been here many times...criminal acts on Shop Worker and food...

Nate: Good, then you can guide me

Fredwardo: Ok... GO!

Fredwardo and Nate get out of the car and run into the store. Once they're in, Fredwardo turns around and aims his gun

Fredwardo: Stop give up now! Money in bag!

Nate: (Looks at Fredwardo, who just aimed the gun at the Fridge holding cans of Soda) You said you knew this place!

Fredwardo: ...Fredwardo lie

Shop Worker: (Holding a Shotgun behind the counter) I'ma give you to the count of three to get the f*ck outta here before the cops show

Nate: (Slowly walks over to the Shop Worker) You really wanna do life for murder?...

The Shop Worker starts shaking and Nate grabs the Shotgun and rams the end of it into the Shop Worker's nose, and he falls over, unconcious. Nate and Fredwardo run over behind the till and start loading cash into their pockets

Nate: sh*t, there's only like eighty quid here

Fredwardo: Fredwardo eating tonight!

Sirens are heard coming closer outside and Nate and Fredwardo start running through the store, and Fredwardo stops for a moment

Nate: (Looks round at Fredwardo) What the hell are you doing!? Come on!

Fredwardo: (Runs back over and grabs some lottery scratch cards and runs back over to Nate as Cops burst into the store and he drops most of the scratch cards) Aahh!!

Nate and Fredwardo run out the back door and run around to the front, where two cops lay in wait for them.

END OF CUTSCENE

Two blips appear for the cops. Shoot them and get into the Manana with Fredwardo, and your wanted level has been boosted to two stars, and an icon has appeared for the nearest Pay 'n' Spray. Along the way, an in-game chat will start up

Nate: Why'd you risk getting caught for some stupid lotto tickets?

Fredwardo: Fredwardo already say Fredwardo have dream!

A few moments pass, then Fredwardo starts cheering, and his voice turns high pitched

Fredwardo: Fredwardo big winner! Fredwardo get three cherries! Win money!!

Nate: What? Get outta here, gimme that... What the hell are the odds!? You just won seventy five thousand quid... un-f*ckin'-believable

Fredwardo: Fredwardo rich! Fredwardo buy big house out this sh*t! Nate we go free Fredwardo's cousin, Fredwardo, and make escape city with him! Fredwardo rich! Seventy five thousand pes-- err, pound. Fredwardo keep golden luck ticket in car make deal for house in quiet town with Fredwardo cousin by side!

The in-game chat will end here. Go to the Pay 'n' Spray and lose the heat, and a blip appears for Fredwardo's apartment building. Drive him back to it and stop in the marker

CUTSCENE

Nate and Fredwardo get out of the car.

Fredwardo: We break Fredwardo from pig station at black sky! 12 o'clock! Fredwardo go lay in bed, dream about big numbers!

Fredwardo runs into his apartment.

END OF CUTSCENE

Mission Passed!
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Posted 14 March 2007 - 11:51 PM

Lmao, he earns so much and give you only $100 for ALL your jobs xD

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Posted 16 March 2007 - 05:06 PM

Yep. That's the only mission of Fredwardo's that he gives you any money tounge.gif . This will be Fredwardo's final mission now, enjoy.

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There are now no icons available. So go back to your Grandma's house and save the game. Once you're back, your cellphone will ring. Press Triangle to answer it

Nate: Yeah?

Fredwardo (OS): Fredwardo dream big green monster made of money eat Fredwardo, and Fredwardo land in belly where big house lives! And Fredwardo cousin there!

Nate hangs the phone up. There is now an "F" icon back at Fredwardo's apartment building. When you enter into it, it'll say "Come back between 00.00-05.00". So unless you're in those timezones, you won't be able to do it. Once the time hits 00.00 we can begin. So enter the green marker outside of his door.

"Fredwardo's Big Day"

CUTSCENE

Nate knocks on Fredwardo's apartment door, and Fredwardo opens it with a grin on his face

Nate: You ready?

Fredwardo: Fredwardo born out the womb ready for freeing Fredwardo

Nate: You just remember who helped you out when you cash that lotto ticket in, got it?

Fredwardo: Fredwardo bringing the heatwave baby!

Fredwardo pulls out two 9MM's from his waist and holds them high in the air as Nate leads him down the hall and the screen fades to black

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

You're standing outside with Fredwardo, with an arrow over his Manana. Get inside of it and a blip will appear for the Heart City pen. Make your way to it and drive into the green marker outside of the police station for a cutscene to roll

CUTSCENE

Fredwardo takes a deep breath then puts his hand on Nate's shoulder and leans in

Fredwardo: Fredwardo counting on Nate for big getaway. (Leans in further) If Fredwardo not make it... avenge me, Fredwardo!

Fredwardo cocks both guns and gets out of the car and starts running towards the steps leading up to the prison, as the camera cuts to inside the prison, where a man with short brown hair is holding a cop by the throat, aiming a 9MM at other cops, slowly walking backwards. The player will recognize this man as Vince Apollo, the leader of the Black Heart's gang from GTA IV.

Vince: Drop the f*ckin' guns, or your buddy gets it (Puts the gun to the officer's head)

Frank: We're giving you to the count of three to let him go!

Vince: Drop your f*ckin' guns!

Officer: (Trying to wriggle free from Vince's grip) Don't do it Frank! I've got a family!

Vince begins dragging the cop further towards the doors, and just then, Fredwardo kicks the doors open, with both guns held high into the air. And he walks into the prison as the doors slam behind him. Vince turns around and looks at him, and sees his opportunity.

Fredwardo: (Screams) Fredwardo here to save cousin, Fredwardo! Give him now!

Vince throws the officer to the ground and runs past Fredwardo and grabs the door handle, and the cops start opening fire. Fredwardo gets hit in the chest

Fredwardo: (Throws guns into the air) BLRGUH

Fredwardo continues to get shot at as Vince runs out the door and runs over to Nate inside of the Manana and jumps in.

Vince: Go go go!!

Nate: You Fredwardo's cousin?

Vince: Yeah whatever! Just drive!

END OF CUTSCENE

Your wanted level has been boosted to three stars, and a blip has appeared on the radar. Along the way, an in-game chat will start up

Nate: What happened to Fredwardo?

Vince: Who? Oh, I don't know

Nate: You're not Fredwardo's cousin, are you?

Vince: I'll tell you what; you get me home and I'll pay you. Fredwardo's cousin or cold hard cash, your choice

Nate: Don't gotta tell me twice.

The in-game chat will end here. Get Vince to the blip on the map, which is a big garage storage building for cars and car parts. Drive into the marker to continue

CUTSCENE

Vince: You really saved my ass. What's your name?

Nate: Nate

Vince: Alright, Nate. Stop by here later if you want some more of this

Vince gets out of the car and runs into the storage garage. The camera cuts to Nate in the car, and he notices the Lotto ticket on the dashboard. He picks it up and puts it in his leather jacket pocket and gets out of the car and walks away as the screen fades to black

FADE IN: GAME PLAY

Mission Passed!
£1500 + Respect +!




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