[Official] PPT 3
Posted 16 February 2007 - 09:48 AM
Previous topics: PPT 1, PPT 2
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Well Part 2 got locked, and so since I didn't see a Part 3...I thought maybe it was time to reopen the PPT! Let's kick it off with Gforce's Lastest Work (Incase you missed it)
And something from me
It was my first gun I ever made, and probably my last... as you can see it didn't turn out well... I was thinking of contributing to Myriad at the time
Sorry if someone else was planning to open a PPT 3
Posted 16 February 2007 - 11:39 AM
@ blackadder: I doubt that gun will end up in MI. It's a bit...euhm...basic.
Posted 16 February 2007 - 12:48 PM
Posted 16 February 2007 - 12:59 PM
Posted 16 February 2007 - 01:20 PM
here are a few update and WIP screens .........enjoy
Posted 16 February 2007 - 01:22 PM
Posted 16 February 2007 - 01:29 PM
Looking Great though About time I tried to do something... Lol
Posted 18 February 2007 - 01:08 PM
Haha, awesome guys.
Posted 19 February 2007 - 06:25 AM Edited by TRN4L, 19 February 2007 - 06:36 AM.
Posted 19 February 2007 - 11:04 AM
Posted 19 February 2007 - 03:49 PM
nice work indeed
Posted 19 February 2007 - 04:25 PM
The police HQ looks just great. Very nice style... Not to mention the size of it.
MCO looks good too, though you shouldn't have posted it after the police screen
Only thing I'm not really into yet is the city hall. Something's wrong. Maybe change the brick texture or the windows, something like that...
Posted 19 February 2007 - 04:38 PM
Posted 19 February 2007 - 08:57 PM
Tanomi Bank ( name may change its still a concept altough the building isnt anymore)
Image may not show properly but if it does hope you all will like it, and thanx snow for the idea GTI needed something small like this will release it by tommorow afternoon i hope if nothing comes in between.
Goodnight for now all guys.
Posted 20 February 2007 - 12:17 AM
A couple of things about that model:
Overall a nice shape, the sides are well done, but imo the entrance is way too plain to compete with the sides of the building. The entrance should stand out, and I think it could when you pushed a bit of the front back into the model. (I would substract with boolean, but that's me, I only use boolean nowadays )
Also the door texture doesn't fit in well with the rest. It looks like it's an indoor door.
Ow, another idea for the front side of it: you use a sort of blocky pillar in the wings, why not use something like that on the front too, give it a bit more cachet.
One of your finest looking models so far. Go GTI
Posted 20 February 2007 - 08:25 AM
|QUOTE (Snow Racer @ Feb 19 2007, 21:14)|
Very nice. Is this a re-imagining of my Spy Hunter car? I can see some similar lines through it. I'm not a big fan of the back though, too empty. And I really don't like the dent running from front to back, at all...
Posted 20 February 2007 - 11:41 AM
2520 tris atm, coming rather nicely I think
Thats nice one. I think you should add something to the back looking bit empty as said. Maybe some black small bumpers.
Posted 20 February 2007 - 12:34 PM
@snow rear is a bit vague, and that rear window looks really flat.. Need something on the bonnet too, maybe some intakes?
Posted 20 February 2007 - 02:29 PM
@Snow Racer, I'm kinda liking it, but it just looks kinda goofy. Almost like a tree fell on the top middle of it all, the curve it way too defined imo. It's too curvy over all which just makes it look like a wobbly mesh that needs adjustment. I think some sharp edges would help it.. and the other guys suggestions would help too.
Posted 20 February 2007 - 04:05 PM
Posted 20 February 2007 - 08:02 PM
it will get under your skin
@flashg - I don't want to overwhore it at the back but after some bodylines and number plate it will look not so empty but if it will I will think of something
@Cran. - to me it doesn't looks flat... and im not sure about intakes
@Picolini - well... it is a new shape for you or anybody else so it will look weird for some time
Posted 20 February 2007 - 08:08 PM
Anyway here is my update of my Tonami Bank building i know it looks a bit weird but i didnt wanted to show the missing stuff at the other side of GTI show bugs on screens is bad for the publicity.
Hope to release it soon it is done but still needs generic objects lik bushes and some trees. and i still need to add my easter egg back in. keep watching this space
Posted 21 February 2007 - 04:03 AM
Sposed to be like the car in your sig? Looks similar.
Posted 21 February 2007 - 05:45 AM
|QUOTE (Snow Racer @ Feb 21 2007, 06:32)|
| @Cran. - to me it doesn't looks flat... and im not sure about intakes|
Meh, just looks like it's squished or something.
It's up to you about the intakes, the front just looks a bit plain. Still looking pretty good overall.
@STM wheels/arches look way to small, or is that how it's meant to be? Looking good so far.
@flashg some other thoughts.. make the side windows longer so they go down longer below, and maybe a different kind of rear spolier? Maybe more polies in the arches too, I think you can spent some of your budget on it
Posted 21 February 2007 - 08:54 AM
|QUOTE (Cran. @ Feb 21 2007, 07:45)|
|@flashg some other thoughts.. make the side windows longer so they go down longer below, and maybe a different kind of rear spolier? Maybe more polies in the arches too, I think you can spent some of your budget on it|
I could try those things, rear spoiler is going to change anyways. Budget allows few more polies to fenders indeed
That looks cool. Reminds me alot of Peugeot 304 coupe
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