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#2971

Posted 04 September 2012 - 12:31 AM

Looking better.

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#2972

Posted 04 September 2012 - 04:40 AM

Wow, that's beautiful, Whiskey. Really hits home for me.. that day marked a huge motivational role for me to enlist.

I would suggest adding some more characters in there, possibly more rescue workers? Just brainstorming here. Overall great work.


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#2973

Posted 05 September 2012 - 02:14 AM

Hey guys, i'd like to get feedback for a logo that the boosterclub for my school needs, its a contest! and i wanted to get feedback before turning it in.
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The logo is for the Windom Booster Club. This club sponsors a lot of our activities such as sports, musicals, concerts, etc. They also help pay the activities fees for students that cannot afford it. They are starting a new program of "adopting a student". It costs a lot of money to sponsor all of the students that don't have the money to pay for their student activities fees, depending on all the sports and such that they are involved in. The Booster Club is also promoting the Three A's . . .. Arts, Academics, and Athletics. The logo should probably have something to do with that. Could include an eagle or whatever.


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#2974

Posted 05 September 2012 - 02:46 AM

The stroke on everything looks really messy. I can understand why on the eagle and the 'drawn' text, because of the rough edges, but I can't understand why it would be like that on the middle font as well. Try cleaning it up and making it smoother. And the 'Club' part looks very lopsided, as well as the 'Windom' part to a lesser degree. I'm guessing it's because of the font you chose, in which case I would suggest using a straighter and cleaner font.

But other than that, I think it looks really good. Good luck in the contest.

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#2975

Posted 05 September 2012 - 08:42 PM

Whiskey mate.

Hue the lense flares to more of an appropriate colour, orangey red. See if that improves it. Looks sick!

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#2976

Posted 05 September 2012 - 09:32 PM

QUOTE (Dystopia @ Wednesday, Sep 5 2012, 20:42)
Whiskey mate.

Hue the lense flares to more of an appropriate colour, orangey red. See if that improves it. Looks sick!

Yeah, I'll give it a try. I'm not really sure what colour torches and floodlights give off.
Thanks for all the input lads!

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Posted 05 September 2012 - 11:15 PM Edited by ElMafias, 05 September 2012 - 11:25 PM.

Alright, Thanks UNRATED69 for feedback, and i showed to some of my schoolmates and they didnt like it at all, so i changed the whole look to it and here is the outcome, feedback please. By the way here is the information on the logo just in case.
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The logo is for the Windom Booster Club. This club sponsors a lot of our activities such as sports, musicals, concerts, etc. They also help pay the activities fees for students that cannot afford it. They are starting a new program of "adopting a student". It costs a lot of money to sponsor all of the students that don't have the money to pay for their student activities fees, depending on all the sports and such that they are involved in. The Booster Club is also promoting the Three A's . . .. Arts, Academics, and Athletics. The logo should probably have something to do with that. Could include an eagle or whatever.

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#2978

Posted 05 September 2012 - 11:20 PM Edited by GunWrath, 06 September 2012 - 01:32 AM.

QUOTE (Whiskey @ Wednesday, Sep 5 2012, 16:32)
QUOTE (Dystopia @ Wednesday, Sep 5 2012, 20:42)
Whiskey mate.

Hue the lense flares to more of an appropriate colour, orangey red. See if that improves it. Looks sick!

Yeah, I'll give it a try. I'm not really sure what colour torches and floodlights give off.
Thanks for all the input lads!

Most floodlights give a blueish tone, so you're pretty accurate what you have so far, I would recommend lowering the blue abit so that more white bleeds through. Some others just use powerful halogens which can be an orange'ish tone.. But most photos of 9/11 and rescue squadrons usually have the brighter lights such as the blue and what not. So it's really up to you wink.gif

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#2979

Posted 06 September 2012 - 08:40 PM

Simle wallpaper work ! sigh.gif I think "veloce" means "speed" in Italian by the way i don't know Italian language. smile.gif
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1440x900 : http://i.imgur.com/dFc5H.jpg

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Posted 08 September 2012 - 03:09 PM Edited by Benjimino234, 08 September 2012 - 03:12 PM.

Hey guys just made a photoshop render of a car for college, might as well post it here.

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Actual Photograph Reference. (HQ)

I did get kinda cheap using the clone stamp tool on some really complex parts like the headlights but everything else was rendered by hand. Just doing the technique of burning and dodging not 'digital painting techniques' as that wasn't the task. Just the use of gradients and custom textures made such as a grill one and carbon fibre one and a lot of work paths. I know there are parts where it should be a little more darker/lighter/accurate, I might get to tweaking those as it's supposed to photorealistic - but it's still really convincing and that's copying the photo to a tee.

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Also made a fun edit, I like doing the edit more than creating the car because it was hella boring and tedious. If we were allowed sketches of our own of cars or rough concept sketches I would of had much more fun with a stylistic style rather than photo-realsim but still good to render it.

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Posted 10 September 2012 - 09:26 PM

Looks good, but the tones of the car don't really match the road and there's no reflection of the sunset on the right on the car. But as you said, you'll get around to it. Perspective is spot on and your choice of stocks and renders are perfect. Good work man!


Finally finished my 9/11 tribute piece. Fecked up the rescue workers. Just couldn't get the lighting right.
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Posted 10 September 2012 - 09:32 PM

QUOTE (Whiskey @ Monday, Sep 10 2012, 16:26)
Finally finished my 9/11 tribute piece. Fecked up the rescue workers. Just couldn't get the lighting right.
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/xVyHj.jpg[IMG]

Wowaweewow nice work!

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#2983

Posted 10 September 2012 - 10:04 PM

Nice work, Benj and Whiskey.

@Whiskey; I like how you added more rescue workers. icon14.gif

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#2984

Posted 10 September 2012 - 10:34 PM

Beautiful work man!

Can you make that into a wallpaper? 1366 x 768?

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#2985

Posted 11 September 2012 - 04:38 PM

I'm working on a tommy gun, but the original weapon has rings around it's barrel and I want to keep it low poly (the main model has about 950 vertices and the barrel 1200+) does anyone know how to make it 3d and keep the poly count low? Opinions?

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Posted 11 September 2012 - 09:57 PM

QUOTE (Bad.boy! @ Tuesday, Sep 11 2012, 16:38)
I'm working on a tommy gun, but the original weapon has rings around it's barrel and I want to keep it low poly (the main model has about 950 vertices and the barrel 1200+) does anyone know how to make it 3d and keep the poly count low? Opinions?

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Looks amazing so far,

How can you make something like this? What program?

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#2987

Posted 12 September 2012 - 10:14 AM

You waste a lot of unused poly.
My suggestion is that you watch a lot of tutorial more, plus check other's people work, learn their topology.

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#2988

Posted 12 September 2012 - 01:09 PM

QUOTE (Bad.boy! @ Tuesday, Sep 11 2012, 13:38)
I'm working on a tommy gun, but the original weapon has rings around it's barrel and I want to keep it low poly (the main model has about 950 vertices and the barrel 1200+) does anyone know how to make it 3d and keep the poly count low? Opinions?

http://img207.images...423/tommyyp.jpg

The topology is a mess, specially in the red area. Try to make the edges more fluid, following the direction of the shape.

And as 69 said, you're wasting a lot of polys. With some tutorials and practice, you can go further.

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Posted 12 September 2012 - 07:53 PM

QUOTE (Sgt. Foley @ Tuesday, Sep 11 2012, 23:57)
How can you make something like this? What program?

Thanks, I used 3ds max but there are lot's of other programs you can use to.

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And as 69 said, you're wasting a lot of polys. With some tutorials and practice, you can go further.

Yeah I know, but before it had to few poly (I think) so I started adding a lot which I have overdone. And I might make the middle of the wooden areas more round.

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It's my first serious attempt to model something (from a picture), so I still need to learn a lot.

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#2990

Posted 13 September 2012 - 06:47 PM

I've been working on a Blues Brothers poster for my portfolio and I was wondering if anyone had any tips or critiques with it before I consider it finished:

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#2991

Posted 19 September 2012 - 10:35 PM

QUOTE (Whiskey @ Friday, Aug 31 2012, 13:11)
Thanks guys!

Small design for a good friends clothing company twitter page!

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Do you still have the .Psd for that?! I'd like to make my own, but i dont know the dimensions, or where to put the letters and stuff! icon14.gif

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Posted 22 September 2012 - 02:25 PM

Inky : That's amazing. Good work. icon14.gif cookie.gif

And my simple work. It's looks like bad i know but i want to add. notify.gif

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#2993

Posted 25 September 2012 - 08:32 PM

Sorry for that locked topic there,forget it...i made this logo a long time before and i just found it at my PC,so could you rate it. I wanna know how you will rate it.

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#2994

Posted 25 September 2012 - 09:27 PM

It certainly looks great! good job mate!! icon14.gif

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Posted 25 September 2012 - 10:05 PM

you over did it on the sparkles a bit mate but apart from that good job smile.gif

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#2996

Posted 25 September 2012 - 11:58 PM

Hey guys, what do you think of my "remake" of the VCPR station in Vice city!

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Posted 26 September 2012 - 12:02 AM

QUOTE (ElMafias @ Tuesday, Sep 25 2012, 23:58)
Hey guys, what do you think of my "remake" of the VCPR station in Vice city!

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Beautiful work man! I like the neon colors and the glow !

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Posted 26 September 2012 - 02:03 AM

nice work elmafias you have really improved smile.gif

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Posted 26 September 2012 - 02:11 AM

Thanks guys! and nic_23, i've been practicing lately!! icon14.gif

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Posted 26 September 2012 - 12:30 PM

Nic & Elmafias: Thank you for comment! icon14.gif And nice remake,the style is really good!





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