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"2 Cllear It Up" by dertyjerz

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dertyjerzian
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#1

Posted 15 July 2005 - 05:13 AM

QUOTE
I'm a menace to sobriety, tripped out of my brain.
Stay blazed all day, you ain't been as high as me.
That'll be my claim to fame. Another red eyed wise
mouth soldier to feed off of the beast's plate.
I dream of change. While I'm blitzed, I picture stepping.
It's going to be some heavy sh*t when we flip with weapons.
But that's the dream state, and Jersey's a mean state.
How much will we change? I know you relate. Run the replay:
The past ten years in hip-hop, D.J's play the cut
to pop up with the getaway to save a flop.
But what the f*ck is with the greats bowing out?
"These things take time."; but I'm rowdy now.
I can see clearly why they murdered the Gods.
And the very reason he couldn't tell us why he was dying.
Look in my eyes, you can tell if you smell the air.
Weed in enormous amounts, I'm ripped away from my fears.
The time is now, when I move, they've moved.
Ice to Em, Vice, Andreas, Pac to Fifty, Take Two Motherf*cker.

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#2

Posted 11 August 2005 - 02:50 AM

WowI didnt get any feed back from this confused.gif I guess it can be removed or archived guys.

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#3

Posted 11 August 2005 - 02:52 AM

It would help if it made sense.

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#4

Posted 11 August 2005 - 04:25 PM

yea i don't get it

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#5

Posted 23 August 2005 - 12:33 PM

Makes perfect sense if you been where I been, seen what I seen. Live how I live. Be who I be.

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#6

Posted 24 August 2005 - 03:42 AM

that's a uh DMX song I believe

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#7

Posted 25 August 2005 - 03:31 PM

QUOTE (dertyjerzian )
Makes perfect sense if you been where I been, seen what I seen. Live how I live. Be who I be.


well we haven't so would you care to enlighten us?

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#8

Posted 28 August 2005 - 12:39 AM

Into the vast shadows as night falls on the city,
with all of the streetlights off. With no pity,
Watch players step on the set and make you clap.
Ask about the riddle, and get a riddle back.
Drunk and partying, swore they being crunk,
But slugs from the window to the wall, and all of them duck.
These boots are made for marching, and that's just what they'll do.
One of these days these boots will stomp the whole crew.
Not one of these days, rather on that day.
I Aktivate Up in Amerika and Actors Are Amazed.
Posers start to stay... up in their house
because they know the sh*t is going down every city, every town.
These rhymes are made for music and when the music stops.
My mind is heavy in the game, you'll never change, we'll never stop.
The cops are treated sh*tty, done just like Pollaski.
And word, we started the drama, let's see who lasts in it.

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#9

Posted 29 August 2005 - 02:13 AM

If you're aiming to sound hard and intimidating, stay away from mentioning video game characters in your raps.

dertyjerzian
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#10

Posted 01 September 2005 - 10:48 PM

this is not the case at all.

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#11

Posted 02 September 2005 - 07:48 PM

Yo wanksta, your words are random
Ya can't rap in tandem cause you're a prodigy of wigger fandom!

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#12

Posted 03 September 2005 - 05:50 PM

QUOTE (Antinark @ Sep 2 2005, 19:48)
Yo wanksta, your words are random
Ya can't rap in tandem cause you're a prodigy of wigger fandom!

Don't forget to mention that in the memorandum,
the one about uncle tom,
he's the bomb,
like a cd-rom,
much unlike somebody's mom,
who didn't take her nephew to the prom,
ended up in a maelstrom,
so I watched cnn.com,
and filled my mind with wisdom,
about an archdukedom,
who ripped ass like a condom,
sending himself into saintdom,
leaning on stardom,
never on whoredom,
but ever so seldom,
rhymes like an atom bomb.


See guys? I rhymed so bad, I got mad respect from mah homeys down at the boondocks.

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#13

Posted 03 September 2005 - 11:08 PM

Don't even get me started.

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#14

Posted 03 September 2005 - 11:36 PM

you're probably some 12 year old kid who's seen 8-mile too much and you're probably white

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#15

Posted 04 September 2005 - 07:42 AM

Your rhyme is a crime
I hope you f*cking die
i'm mad as a cow
ram paw pow

Serius, don't do anyting you can't do.

dertyjerzian
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#16

Posted 09 September 2005 - 12:43 PM

I never do a thing that I can't handle.
And I'll dismantle all of those opposing my moves. And after
You see the light and stop hating, you're going to want
an explaination. I can't say it plainer.
That's simply not allowed. I'm 21 and I bust
like CJ, I put the blood on the ground.
They lift the bodies and run.
I got niggas on my team that do your body for fun.
And I don't need to prove a thing. We got sh*t locked now.
And I don't need to move a pinky, my young ryders ryde now.
And picture me in 3D, all in your face.
It'll be a diff'rent story, call it a game. Call me a fake.
I rely on the blind eye you were raised to mistake sh*t with.
And if you're in the vicinity when it kicks off, you'll get hit.
16? Bitch, I'll spit these for weeks, they never sinch me.
Wish me DEATH? You're lucky you don't see me.

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#17

Posted 09 September 2005 - 01:44 PM

QUOTE
And I don't need to move a pinky, my young ryders ryde now.

lol biggrin.gif

QUOTE (brassknuckles)
If you're aiming to sound hard and intimidating, stay away from mentioning video game characters in your raps.

QUOTE (dertyjerzian)
like CJ, I put the blood on the ground.


it ammuses me how you don't listen to anything anyone has told you.
seriously, please stop.

dertyjerzian
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#18

Posted 09 September 2005 - 04:09 PM

If you're going to quote me, quote correctly.
All my soulja's hold them weapons. Hope to step in
the club with s grimmace and rip it up like I do the beats.
I rally the troops to move. Keep thinking I'm sweet.

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#19

Posted 10 September 2005 - 07:19 AM

The Writer's Discussion forum's description reads as follows:
"Showcase your writing ability on anything you like here."

Keyword: ability.
The dictionary describes ability as:
" The quality of being able to do something, especially the physical, mental, financial, or legal power to accomplish something."

Keyword: quality.

Now I'm going to put my point in rhyme so even you can understand:
you do not posses the quality,
nor have the right ability,
to rhyme with any civility.
Have the nobility,
this isn't hostility,
it's merely pointing out your senility.

I'm quite sure you're going to need a dictionary or magic wand to understand most of those words. You heed no advice from people who have their so-called "sh*t" together. So as to make it abundantly clear:
you suck.

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#20

Posted 10 September 2005 - 10:15 PM

And that solves it.





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