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Tril
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#1

Posted 19 May 2005 - 09:36 PM Edited by Tril, 21 May 2005 - 03:25 PM.

50 States...51 Episodes...51 Chracters...
I will update and add a new story to this topic whenever I feel like writing...
Each story will be about another Character...
Each story will be in another State...
Each story will be related in diffrent ways...
We're traveling the U.S. GTA Style...


Season 1:Episode 1:"Liberty's Last Survivor"(New York City,New York)

Liberty City - October 27th ,2016

Gunfire,Car Engines,People Screaming...
These are the sounds that haunt Liberty City...
The sounds from the street in constant motion from day to night...
Nobody does anything about it not even the Law Enforcement...
Heh...Law Enforcement all they are enforcing is their paychecks...
It's getting to crazy in this city and I'm not gonna be found dead
face down in this town... I decided it was time to get out...
It was time for a clean start far from here...Far,Far away from
here...

I headed for my closet and grabbed my trusty baseball bat...
After grabbing the bat I headed for the door ready for one hell of a
ride... I began to patrol the neighborhood of Red Light District...
I walked down the street and saw a woman getting attacked in a
alleyway... I snuck up to the man and he was turning around...
I swung as hard as I could and heard a loud smashing noise...
I litterally shattered the man's skull and his head popped like a ripe
melon and flew all over the wall... The lady thanked me and I
handed her my baseball bat so she could protect herself in this
city... I picked up the Colt .45 that the assaulter had been
carrying...

I left the alleyway and headed down the sidewalk now packing
heat... There was man parking his car and a Police car rolling by...
I decided if I was gonna get out of here I needed to do it fast...
I ran to the parking car and pulled out the man before he could take
out the keys... I jumped into the car and locked the doors and
began to drive away... I came to a red light but decided I couldn't
stop, I didn't even wanna think about what could happen to me if
I did... I was crossing over the bridge to Stauton Island in no
time... Unfortunately the car ran out of gas halfway across the
Callahan Bridge... I had to get out and make the rest of the way on
foot... I ran down the bridge with my gun in hand ready to pop
some heads...

I came across a group of men standing on the street corners armed
with Ingram Mac10s... I decided it was best to kill them before they
had a chance to kill me... I began to fire rapidly upon them and one
by on they fell... I put the .45 into my pocket and grabbed the
Mac10s off the bodies and put the clips in my pocket and dropped
all but one of the Ingrams... I began to run down the street when
some poor sucker came to a stop at a red light... I ran up to his
car and pulled him out... It was better I jacked him than someone
else, if I were anyone else I would've killed him... I locked the doors
as I entered the car and drove off...

Over the bridge to the airport I went... I drove past the red lights
and in front of Francis International Airport... I stopped the car
quickly and opened the door and ran into the Airport... I quickly
got a ticket at the front desk and headed out to Vice City...
When the flight arrived at Vice it turned out that Liberty wasn't
the only city corrupted by the force of the Zaibatsu Corperations
and money driven pricks...



Season 1:Episode 2:"Welcome To Lake Front"(Chicago,Illinois)

Liberty City - October 27th , 1962 - 17:02 - Red Light District

Joseph called me at 17:02 and told me to get my things packed.
He said ,"The Leones need to expand kid. And since your a loyal
member of The Leones I thought of you." I asked him what he
wanted me to do. "I need you to go to Lake Front City and set up
a connection over there." I asked him when did my flight come in.
"Your flight checks in at 22:15 so get ready. Oh and call me when
you get there." I told him I will and hung up.

Lake Front City - October 28th , 1962 - 01:25 - Wydmai Airport

I arrived in Lake Front 7 hours later at the Wydmai Airport.
It was time I started off with a new slate. Though I'd still be with
The Leone Families I'd be on my own in this city. Friends to make
and men to hate were up to me. Walked over to the conveyor and
grabbed my luggage. I walked toward the exit and grabbed a
Tourist Guide on my way out the automatic doors. I called up
Joseph as soon as I got outside. He said ,"There is a guy I know
that owes me a favor he'll be in first thing in the morning. He is
coming in straight from Vice City. Until check out a room and get
some sleep."

I waved for a cab and quickly one pulled up. I entered the back
with my luggage on my lap. I quickly checked the guide for any
good hotels. In a few seconds I found one and told the driver to
take me to the Noremay Hotel. In less than 30 minutes I was there.
I handed the driver a 50 and told him to keep the change.

Lake Front City - October 28th , 1962 - 01:51- Noremway Hotel

I stepped out of the vehicle and walked toward the hotel. I
opened the heavy wooden door and head toward the front desk.
I told the lady behind the desk I wanted to check out a room.
She told me ,"You're lucky sir,there is one room left. It costs $50
a night." I told her ok,whatever,that's fine I'll take it. I didn't know
how long I'd have to stay in a hotel so I checked out the room for
a week. I handed the lady $350 dollars as she handed me the keys.
I walked up the staircase to the right and checked the tag on the
keys. I began to look for my room it was #113.

I found the room in a few minutes and went in. I quickly closed the
door and applied all the locks right behind me. I set my bag down
next to the bed. I opened up my suitcase and got out my .45. I
loaded in a clip and put it in the drawer next to the bed. I layed
down on the bed and checked my watch. It was 01:56 I layed
down not knowing what to expect in the morning. Or even knowing
what to expect within the week. After thinking for awhile I dozed
off ready for whatever was to come...



Season 1:Episode 3:"Waihai Islands"(Hawaii)
COMING SOON!!!



Season 1:Episode 4:"Lil Boulder"(Little Rock,Arkansas)
COMING SOON!!!



Season 1:Episode 5:"Lado Del Río"(Texas)
COMING SOON!!!



Season 1:Episode 6"Pay The Price To Live In Vice"(Miami,Florida)
COMING SOON!!!



Season 1:Episode 7"Riot of '92"(Los Angeles,California)
COMING SOON!!!



Season 1:Episode 8"Spin in Sin"(Las Vegas,Nevada)
COMING SOON!!!



Season 1:Episode 9:"Lincoln Capitol District"(Washington D.C.)
COMING SOON!!!



Season 1:Episode 10:"New Ordazee"(New Orleans,Lousianna)
COMING SOON!!!

beanmachine43
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Posted 20 May 2005 - 11:29 PM

Great story. I did see a few grammar errors, but they were few and far apart. Quick question... Are these stories going to be related? Because if they're not, I don't see why you'd do it. Other than very few errors, that story was pretty nice. smile.gif

Tril
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Posted 21 May 2005 - 12:14 AM Edited by Tril, 21 May 2005 - 12:21 AM.

Yeah, All the stories will be related in certain ways...
And all the stories will take place in diffrent timezones...
So they will be connected from knowing the same person toliving
in a cetain area to having the same gun...

I'm rewriting "Liberty's Last Survivor" I didn't like the way it turned
out...

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Posted 21 May 2005 - 12:22 AM

Episode Two was great. smile.gif I didn't see any grammar errors, but I didn't pay attention to that due to the nice storytelling. Can't wait for the re-written version of Episode One.

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#5

Posted 21 May 2005 - 12:56 AM Edited by Tril, 21 May 2005 - 01:04 AM.

Episode 1:"Liberty City's Survivor" is back up...
So Enjoy I guess...

@beanmachine:
Thanks for the feedback. biggrin.gif

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Posted 21 May 2005 - 01:39 AM Edited by beanmachine43, 21 May 2005 - 03:47 AM.

Damn! The revised version is much better, great job! Again, maybe four or five grammar errors, but it still kicked extreme ass. biggrin.gif

Just a suggestion; maybe have each episode seperated by a Large heading. Or, I guess you could just have more space between each episode. Once again, great story!


EDIT: Oh, and Tril, try not to do all of the interesting states/cities at first. It would be a pain to go out with Boise, Idaho.

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Posted 03 July 2005 - 01:21 AM Edited by Wingman, 03 July 2005 - 01:28 AM.

Sorry for the DP, but I just have to congradulate Tril on a job well done with updating the topic (that's sarcasm).

I was actually interested, Tril, but you ran off!


This has been over a month. He dropped the story. You don't need to be a sarcastic prick about it. Locked.




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