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Clown.
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#1

Posted 13 May 2005 - 07:36 PM

rate this please.
tryed something new, ususally do quite dark sigs
user posted image
please rate, i can take critiscm as long as its explained...

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Posted 13 May 2005 - 08:00 PM Edited by Luke2004, 13 May 2005 - 08:56 PM.

It's not bad clown, I also noticed you made a tutorial on how to do this in the tutorial section. EDIT: Just been looking at the signature again, try and make the border stand out that it's all the way around.

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Posted 13 May 2005 - 08:11 PM

I like the background.

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#4

Posted 14 May 2005 - 09:45 AM

I think it looks better then all the dark sigs you made lately. What Luke said, add another border and maybe crop a little bit and it looks even better.

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#5

Posted 14 May 2005 - 09:50 AM

Compostition is a bit off. Try moving the girl away from the edge and making 'Paradise' a subtitle of the 'Clown' text.

[EDIT]The one in your tutorial has an excellent compostition. You should have stuck with the postitioning you used in that.

What's with the dark vertical streaks on her chest?

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#6

Posted 14 May 2005 - 10:13 AM Edited by Clown., 14 May 2005 - 10:25 AM.

ill have another go at it in a minute.
the dark streaks are there because the girl was originally on a background, and the streaks are the shadow of a palm tree. watch for an edit...
EDIT:
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is that any better?

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#7

Posted 14 May 2005 - 10:39 AM

I think this looks a lot better. Keep this one.

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#8

Posted 14 May 2005 - 01:09 PM

The sig does need some touching up on the corners but never the less, It's very good ;o

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#9

Posted 14 May 2005 - 01:23 PM

I like the 2nd attempt but maybe you should either choose to keep the corners round or actually cornered. No offense but that looks a little like you didn't know what to do with the corners.

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Posted 14 May 2005 - 06:39 PM

I really like the second attempt, looks great. Can't see anything wrong with the corners.




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