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JuVeNiLe
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#1

Posted 26 April 2005 - 01:45 AM

Feedback please. If you want to purchase then talk to me in a PM.


Critisize, enjoy, whatever...give them a listen.


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Posted 26 April 2005 - 02:27 AM Edited by JIMMY12, 26 April 2005 - 02:44 AM.

(0:00) Good, sounds straight off of the radio.
(1:00) I like the beat, but the last "No" in the sample is too high-pitched.
(1:45) Sounds too much like the Chipmunks. Couldn't picture someone seriously rapping over that. Good instrumentals, though.
(2:20) A little repetitive, but not bad.
(4:00) Hurts my ears sort of, especially the "Oh" part. The piano's nice, though.
(4:50) Too repetitive.
(5:00) Simple but good beat.
(6:20) Good beat.
(7:30) I like it. The "I Shot the Sheriff" sample is interesting.

In conclusion: I like most of it. Lay off the high-pitched samples a little, they sound a little cheesy. Also, PLEASE stop using "I have a dream." 4 words looped constantly for 9 minutes almost made me go crazy. You could just use his whole speech instead of 4 or so words. Also, there is about 2 minutes of silence at the end if you didn't know.

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Posted 26 April 2005 - 02:33 AM

Nice, dude nice. They remind a lot of that "I Get High" song.

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Posted 28 April 2005 - 04:11 AM

QUOTE (JIMMY12 @ Apr 25 2005, 20:27)
(0:00) Good, sounds straight off of the radio.
(1:00) I like the beat, but the last "No" in the sample is too high-pitched.
(1:45) Sounds too much like the Chipmunks. Couldn't picture someone seriously rapping over that. Good instrumentals, though.
(2:20) A little repetitive, but not bad.
(4:00) Hurts my ears sort of, especially the "Oh" part. The piano's nice, though.
(4:50) Too repetitive.
(5:00) Simple but good beat.
(6:20) Good beat.
(7:30) I like it. The "I Shot the Sheriff" sample is interesting.

In conclusion: I like most of it. Lay off the high-pitched samples a little, they sound a little cheesy. Also, PLEASE stop using "I have a dream." 4 words looped constantly for 9 minutes almost made me go crazy. You could just use his whole speech instead of 4 or so words. Also, there is about 2 minutes of silence at the end if you didn't know.

Thanks for the feedback, but the "I Have A Dream" is so nobody can steal the beat.

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Posted 28 April 2005 - 04:35 AM

QUOTE (JuVeNiLe @ Apr 28 2005, 04:11)
Thanks for the feedback, but the "I Have A Dream" is so nobody can steal the beat.

I'm assuming you're trying to honor Martin Luther King by putting his speech in there, so why only 4 words? Couldn't you put a longer clip of it in there?

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Posted 29 April 2005 - 03:50 AM

QUOTE (JIMMY12 @ Apr 27 2005, 22:35)
QUOTE (JuVeNiLe @ Apr 28 2005, 04:11)
Thanks for the feedback, but the "I Have A Dream" is so nobody can steal the beat.

I'm assuming you're trying to honor Martin Luther King by putting his speech in there, so why only 4 words? Couldn't you put a longer clip of it in there?

"I Have A Dream Productions" thats why I use it coz thats the name...




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