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WrittenFire
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#31

Posted 12 April 2005 - 01:30 AM

I'm not the kind to judge my own battles, but seriously...

QUOTE
You front like your hardcore/
you about as hard as a wet piece of cardboard/
the only thing you ever key'd is a car door/


Those three lines killed you.

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#32

Posted 12 April 2005 - 05:29 AM

Look at this guy that proclaims he's Written Fire-
He's only posted in Music- rapping his only desire?
You're at a G T A site beggin for lyrical praise
Fire thinks he's so good that his sh*t has miracle ways.
The savior of hip hop has arrived- He brings the better days!
For the record man, who uses a gun in a fist fight?
Why bust the 9 out, that sh*t just isn't right.
Who's the biggest gangsta?
Who's the baddest thug?
Ha, You're soft dog,
your killin lines are simply smudged.
Look at this kid, he's a little internet thug-
He's an outcast- a middle kindergarden slug
I guess I too don't belong in rap topic with Fire
He's just a habitual liar- useful like a blown out tire
He's no better than us, I'm just not a buyer.

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#33

Posted 12 April 2005 - 07:21 PM

QUOTE (WrittenFire @ Apr 11 2005, 23:45)
QUOTE
You're all actin' gangsta, but all you do is masturbate//
You're hangin' out in the crib, with you're little play mate//
Sucking his dick, and still you say you're straight//
While you spit it out on him, you'll realise I'm a heavyweight//
A loc'd out motherf*cker, that you can't take//
Tryin' to take me down means desecrate//
I could already take you when I was eight//
I'm a guy that you can't irritate//
I'm making all the money here, I own a real estate//
People get to know you as a gay, all across the state//
You tried to find out why, but you can't run away from fate//
You're a fake ass wannabe, tried to join a conjugate//
As you see me drivin' away, you check my numberplate//
You say out loud what it says: "to-la-te"//



You remind me of an AOL chatroom;/
start off okay, but you get whack soon/
I'll have forgotten you by tomorrow but you'll remember me/
i gotta do more then beat my enemy/
I gotta murder him/
I gotta make sure im hurtin him/
Once your dead, i'll believe ive battled victoriously/
When im done with you, the only rappers you'll see are Pac and Nuturious B/
this mind of mine is beautiful/
i'll clone you so i can kill you again at your funeral/
regardless of the weather, im the illest and that's what this poem proves/
Put it together, you own estate and I own n00bs/

Every hiphop mothaf*cker, would just cut out your tong//
It's bacause of a sin, spellin' Notorious wrong?//
Killing me at my ownt funeral, that's the most pathetic I ever heard//
Is that supposed to hurt?//
It's bullsh*t, meant to make your rhymes look longer//
Word for word//
My rhymes just áre stronger//
The rhymes you kick are categorized as "crap"//
You're trying to look tough, and you're using rap//
If you're really that gangster, why acting tough here?//
I didn't see you walking trough Harlem, you weren't even near//
I didn't see you fighting with the cops, you're the one that stops, when the top pops//
Now, what was your name again?//
I'm literally insane, contain the complain and explain, the blood stain, you're having pain, but you're trying to maintain//
187, calling out one again to hell or heaven//
Wherever you're going to, I think I stept 'em//

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#34

Posted 12 April 2005 - 08:29 PM

QUOTE (WrittenFire @ Apr 11 2005, 20:30)
I'm not the kind to judge my own battles, but seriously...

QUOTE
You front like your hardcore/
you about as hard as a wet piece of cardboard/
the only thing you ever key'd is a car door/


Those three lines killed you.

No not really. You mistook my meaning of key'd.

Besides that my line about your flow killed you because you responded with some chump sh*t that didn't flow right. Those 3 lines were tight but thats about it. But yeah whatever....from what I've seen you're good but one of the regs around here would slay you quick in a tourney.

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#35

Posted 13 April 2005 - 02:18 AM

QUOTE
Look at this guy that proclaims he's Written Fire-
He's only posted in Music- rapping his only desire?
You're at a G T A site beggin for lyrical praise
Fire thinks he's so good that his sh*t has miracle ways.
The savior of hip hop has arrived- He brings the better days!
For the record man, who uses a gun in a fist fight?
Why bust the 9 out, that sh*t just isn't right.
Who's the biggest gangsta?
Who's the baddest thug?
Ha, You're soft dog,
your killin lines are simply smudged.
Look at this kid, he's a little internet thug-
He's an outcast- a middle kindergarden slug
I guess I too don't belong in rap topic with Fire
He's just a habitual liar- useful like a blown out tire
He's no better than us, I'm just not a buyer.


I kill a few men, now i gotta battle this chick next?/
for real, you need to drag your arrow to the top right corner and click X/
this is a prime example of the kind of bitch my sh*t wrecks/
You'v gotten slayed, I've gotten heated/
I've lost as many times as you've gotten laid, that makes me undefeated/
You think you ill, but you aint win it yet/
your rhymes belong in your head, not on the internet/
you all look the same to me/
and that's a pain to see/
f*ck WrittenFire, Im such an MC I should square myself and change my name to E/
Check for the illness, I'm droppin it G/
you said it yourself, you don't belong in a topic with me

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#36

Posted 13 April 2005 - 02:23 AM

QUOTE (WrittenFire @ Apr 12 2005, 20:18)
QUOTE
Look at this guy that proclaims he's Written Fire-
He's only posted in Music- rapping his only desire?
You're at a G T A site beggin for lyrical praise
Fire thinks he's so good that his sh*t has miracle ways.
The savior of hip hop has arrived- He brings the better days!
For the record man, who uses a gun in a fist fight?
Why bust the 9 out, that sh*t just isn't right.
Who's the biggest gangsta?
Who's the baddest thug?
Ha, You're soft dog,
your killin lines are simply smudged.
Look at this kid, he's a little internet thug-
He's an outcast- a middle kindergarden slug
I guess I too don't belong in rap topic with Fire
He's just a habitual liar- useful like a blown out tire
He's no better than us, I'm just not a buyer.


I kill a few men, now i gotta battle this chick next?/
for real, you need to drag your arrow to the top right corner and click X/
this is a prime example of the kind of bitch my sh*t wrecks/
You'v gotten slayed, I've gotten heated/
I've lost as many times as you've gotten laid, that makes me undefeated/
You think you ill, but you aint win it yet/
your rhymes belong in your head, not on the internet/
you all look the same to me/
and that's a pain to see/
f*ck WrittenFire, Im such an MC I should square myself and change my name to E/
Check for the illness, I'm droppin it G/
you said it yourself, you don't belong in a topic with me

He's killin' yall! meth he's better than you think.

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#37

Posted 13 April 2005 - 03:09 AM

Man we need to set something up. Like another lyricist lounge or something.

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#38

Posted 13 April 2005 - 03:46 AM

Here comes da S to the C to the A to the R/
You better leave now cause you ain't gon' get far/
The F to the A to the C to the E/
Get out this battle now cause you can't beat me/
Can't beat me in a fist fight or lyrically/
Throwin' lyrical punches, I knock you out like Mike T./
You rap like wack ass Vanilla Ice/
But when I get on the mic I ain't gon' be nice/
I'll be goin' up sayin', "Say hello to ma little friend!" cause it's time/
For you to die from this death causin' rhyme/
Because when I spit it's like loadin' up a gat/
Cause the last thing you hear is rat tat tat tat/

I know I ain't good at rhymin', but I havn't done it in a long time.

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#39

Posted 13 April 2005 - 09:24 AM Edited by 9jkearse3, 13 April 2005 - 01:52 PM.

QUOTE
bunch of rookies in here, frontin like ya wanna get key'd
couldn't dulpicate flow if your verse went through a copier feed
retardation is a disease from which clearly you're infected
better tell your butt buddy, Spidey, since he likes it unprotected
see I'm wondering why you selected the name WrittenFire
more like the smoke before....and your vocab's a quagmire
a comeback would be useless like good pussy on a dike
get ya wieght up next time you step in the ring to fight


I got nothing but respect for you meth but you got to understand/
this here is rapping not your higschool band/
no one would want you rollin with them not even uncle sam/
I look at your verses and i consider it spam/
I expected better your a bigger jackass then bam/
It really is ashame that your rap game is lame/
unlike yours my ryhmes aint tame/
ever since i got here the forums aint been the same/
some say im a first place balot for the hall of fame/

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#40

Posted 13 April 2005 - 02:51 PM

QUOTE (WrittenFire @ Apr 13 2005, 02:18)
QUOTE
Look at this guy that proclaims he's Written Fire-
He's only posted in Music- rapping his only desire?
You're at a G T A site beggin for lyrical praise
Fire thinks he's so good that his sh*t has miracle ways.
The savior of hip hop has arrived- He brings the better days!
For the record man, who uses a gun in a fist fight?
Why bust the 9 out, that sh*t just isn't right.
Who's the biggest gangsta?
Who's the baddest thug?
Ha, You're soft dog,
your killin lines are simply smudged.
Look at this kid, he's a little internet thug-
He's an outcast- a middle kindergarden slug
I guess I too don't belong in rap topic with Fire
He's just a habitual liar- useful like a blown out tire
He's no better than us, I'm just not a buyer.


I kill a few men, now i gotta battle this chick next?/
for real, you need to drag your arrow to the top right corner and click X/
this is a prime example of the kind of bitch my sh*t wrecks/
You'v gotten slayed, I've gotten heated/
I've lost as many times as you've gotten laid, that makes me undefeated/
You think you ill, but you aint win it yet/
your rhymes belong in your head, not on the internet/
you all look the same to me/
and that's a pain to see/
f*ck WrittenFire, Im such an MC I should square myself and change my name to E/
Check for the illness, I'm droppin it G/
you said it yourself, you don't belong in a topic with me

You proved once again, to be a coward//
Not replying to me, you're just overpowered//
Talking bout big guns, you only own small ones//
You're just another rich guy//
Enough money, enough to go out and just buy//
You ain't tight, you ain't up to the fight//
I'm replying to see you trying//
You better start praying, you're one of these fools that won't be staying//
You ain't no thug, you're writing love songs//
You live in the nice and clean London, not in the Bronx//
If you're so tough, I dare ya', at night in the parking lot//
We'll see who'll get caught, you're the one who'll get shot//
You're getting owned, you don't live by the code//
I'll kill you and dump you're body on the side of the road//

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#41

Posted 13 April 2005 - 08:54 PM

Hey these are great but why dont create a song with those dope rhymes you know like in the Your Recordings Topic where you put a song so why dont you try that. It would be pretty good.

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#42

Posted 14 April 2005 - 01:30 AM

QUOTE (JuVeNiLe @ Apr 12 2005, 21:23)
He's killin' yall! meth he's better than you think.

No doubt...I gave him props. But his response to me was garbage. Its all good though...I'm just not feelin text much anymore.

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#43

Posted 14 April 2005 - 04:24 AM

QUOTE (WrittenFire @ Apr 12 2005, 22:18)
QUOTE
Look at this guy that proclaims he's Written Fire-
He's only posted in Music- rapping his only desire?
You're at a G T A site beggin for lyrical praise
Fire thinks he's so good that his sh*t has miracle ways.
The savior of hip hop has arrived- He brings the better days!
For the record man, who uses a gun in a fist fight?
Why bust the 9 out, that sh*t just isn't right.
Who's the biggest gangsta?
Who's the baddest thug?
Ha, You're soft dog,
your killin lines are simply smudged.
Look at this kid, he's a little internet thug-
He's an outcast- a middle kindergarden slug
I guess I too don't belong in rap topic with Fire
He's just a habitual liar- useful like a blown out tire
He's no better than us, I'm just not a buyer.


I kill a few men, now i gotta battle this chick next?/
for real, you need to drag your arrow to the top right corner and click X/
this is a prime example of the kind of bitch my sh*t wrecks/
You'v gotten slayed, I've gotten heated/
I've lost as many times as you've gotten laid, that makes me undefeated/
You think you ill, but you aint win it yet/
your rhymes belong in your head, not on the internet/
you all look the same to me/
and that's a pain to see/
f*ck WrittenFire, Im such an MC I should square myself and change my name to E/
Check for the illness, I'm droppin it G/
you said it yourself, you don't belong in a topic with me

Not sure who you think you are by callin us all out.
You have only one thing to do and that's to just fall out
Your claim to murder makes you seem sadistic.
I think and see its ridiculously unrealistic.
How many men have there been that have croaked because your actions?
I'll place a bet and let you slice me if I'm wrong with my reaction-
Fire's an internet gangsta' that wants to win an election.
He'll sign on a forum with music as a minor section
and try to throw his words around to cause a forum erection.
When his dreams and hopes suddenly begin to collapse
He has an epiphany and realizes the facts that he truly lacks.
He doesn't know ANYONE and no one knows him back-
His lack of personality leaves him rolling on a toy car track
There's a limit to success when your tires are popped with a tac
Whatchu' doin makin up sh*t, you liar?
Pussy's iminent when you have TOYO on the tire
What's your purpose here, no one will admire you Fire!



out of character:
regardless of what I say ^, you're good. Just thought I should tell you. Keep it up, bud.

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#44

Posted 14 April 2005 - 02:34 PM

QUOTE (LocoD @ Apr 13 2005, 20:54)
Hey these are great but why dont create a song with those dope rhymes you know like in the Your Recordings Topic where you put a song so why dont you try that. It would be pretty good.

Who are you talking to exactly?


I'm thinking of record, but I'm white, and just like the average white, I have a crappy voice. =P
Gonna' wait for Writtefire before I post some rhymes again.

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#45

Posted 15 April 2005 - 12:34 AM

QUOTE
You proved once again, to be a coward//
Not replying to me, you're just overpowered//
Talking bout big guns, you only own small ones//
You're just another rich guy//
Enough money, enough to go out and just buy//
You ain't tight, you ain't up to the fight//
I'm replying to see you trying//
You better start praying, you're one of these fools that won't be staying//
You ain't no thug, you're writing love songs//
You live in the nice and clean London, not in the Bronx//
If you're so tough, I dare ya', at night in the parking lot//
We'll see who'll get caught, you're the one who'll get shot//
You're getting owned, you don't live by the code//
I'll kill you and dump you're body on the side of the road//


The kid on this site with the most skill, is he who wrote this/
Once again, I've proved to be the dopest/
You need to open your eyes, look at the screen and focus/
you could make a triple album, and it'd have no hits/
This sh*t is done, this fool is late/
You caught feelings because i threw the hate/
I never considered losing, I always knew my fate/
The only time you've seen a .357 is when you're counting odd numbers between 2 and 8/

QUOTE
Not sure who you think you are by callin us all out.
You have only one thing to do and that's to just fall out
Your claim to murder makes you seem sadistic.
I think and see its ridiculously unrealistic.
How many men have there been that have croaked because your actions?
I'll place a bet and let you slice me if I'm wrong with my reaction-
Fire's an internet gangsta' that wants to win an election.
He'll sign on a forum with music as a minor section
and try to throw his words around to cause a forum erection.
When his dreams and hopes suddenly begin to collapse
He has an epiphany and realizes the facts that he truly lacks.
He doesn't know ANYONE and no one knows him back-
His lack of personality leaves him rolling on a toy car track
There's a limit to success when your tires are popped with a tac
Whatchu' doin makin up sh*t, you liar?
Pussy's iminent when you have TOYO on the tire
What's your purpose here, no one will admire you Fire!


Let's be for real, not optimistic/
chances are someones gonna die when i drop the sickness/
I got Whack MCs on top my hitlist/
I can say that sh*t because I approach anyone who's talkin this sh*t/
In the past few bars, I got realistic/
but im not sadistic!/
the text you show is wrong/
i'll be here untill all the people you know is gone/
you'll never travel to the top, the road is long/
and you duisplay as much emotion as an ASCII emoticon/


Props to anyone who has complimented me, validly criticized me, or battle med. I appreciate the battling and spectating. I probably won't drop any more verses until some new MCs come in.

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#46

Posted 15 April 2005 - 12:38 AM Edited by Tril, 15 April 2005 - 12:55 AM.

Ya'll Just talk sh*t,
Keep it up and ya gonna get hit,
One shot and you out of it,
Ya'll talk alot of sh*t,
Not no more cuz ya'll catchin' spit,
Wanna talk some more 'n you gonna get lit,
Cuz ya'll should know I dont take sh*t,
Betta back down cuz I ain't yo bitch,
So take that and if ya don't wantz it,
Ya can come again to getz hit,
Even if ya don't you still on ma hitlist...

NOTE:
This is my first drop/dis/verse so thats why it is kinda crappy...

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#47

Posted 15 April 2005 - 02:19 AM Edited by Vercetti04/05, 15 April 2005 - 02:28 AM.

I havn't been writin rhymes for that long so pleaze dont laugh confused.gif , let me know what y'all think

ok, so here we go
I am now gonna drop a phat flow
my lyrics contain ill verbs and vowels
that will literally tear up your bowels
and rip your rhymes to pieces,
and f*** yo sh*t up like sexually transmitted diseases
and when I grab the mic
I knock all these fake mc's outta site
I gotta say, people in here got some real skill
but I serve this sh*t up like a 3 course meal
to all these fake wannabe rappers,
who are more like wak lyrical crappers
that wouldnt know real skill if it hit them in the face
fa**ots, your nuthin but a discrace!
now that my lyrics have been imbedded in your brain
this sh*t will never be the same
so f*** it, Im off to get pissed
lyricist class is now dismissed


Feedback would be much appreciated. I usually just muck around battling with friends when we are pissed, but lately I have been taking writing lyrics pretty seriously and absolutely kill my friends. However, the lyrical skill in this thread is insane, keep it flowin people, peace out
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#48

Posted 15 April 2005 - 12:41 PM

QUOTE (WrittenFire @ Apr 15 2005, 00:34)
you could make a triple album, and it'd have no hits/

Dude, that line is straight from former D12 member Bugz, in "Bugz '97". (God rest his soul)

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#49

Posted 15 April 2005 - 05:38 PM

Aight....Listen here...
I don't do this slang sh*t or bang sh*t
I tell it straight up
Like MC Eiht
Tha Straight up menace
I be in the hood when y'all playin court tennis in Venice
So why you talkin sh*t?
f*ck this, lets take it to the pit.


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#50

Posted 15 April 2005 - 09:11 PM

writtenfire, it's time to write you out
don't let another expected insult cross your mouth
rhymes saying your rhymes are better than mine..
are not better than mine
so don't even try..
i've got better things to do with my time

Your rap is all about your rap
what's with that?
your superiority complex is out of line.
and unjustified

i wish just once
someone saying they're original
would just for fun
maybe really be original


meh... I'm a bored indie kid.. the rhythm or beat or whatnot in my head switches around a lot so that probably doesn't make a lot of sense to read..

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#51

Posted 15 April 2005 - 10:58 PM

QUOTE (Roald @ Apr 15 2005, 08:41)
QUOTE (WrittenFire @ Apr 15 2005, 00:34)
you could make a triple album, and it'd have no hits/

Dude, that line is straight from former D12 member Bugz, in "Bugz '97". (God rest his soul)

Ouch. Caught red handed. Nice pickup Roald.


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#52

Posted 15 April 2005 - 11:02 PM

I've never listened to one Bugz song, but that is a very general punchline and it wouldn't surprise me if it's been used before. I'll do a Google search on it....

"I hate your damn sound, don't like it one bit
You can make a double album, won't have one hit "

I found that line. That's the one from Bugz 97. Meh. The point of my punch was to exaggerate the idea of a multiple album, but they are undoubtedly similar. I had no itnentions of biting and never heard that track before, though. Nice catch nonetheless.

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Posted 15 April 2005 - 11:15 PM

QUOTE
ok, so here we go
I am now gonna drop a phat flow
my lyrics contain ill verbs and vowels
that will literally tear up your bowels
and rip your rhymes to pieces,
and f*** yo sh*t up like sexually transmitted diseases
and when I grab the mic
I knock all these fake mc's outta site
I gotta say, people in here got some real skill
but I serve this sh*t up like a 3 course meal
to all these fake wannabe rappers,
who are more like wak lyrical crappers
that wouldnt know real skill if it hit them in the face
fa**ots, your nuthin but a discrace!
now that my lyrics have been imbedded in your brain
this sh*t will never be the same
so f*** it, Im off to get pissed
lyricist class is now dismissed


After this you'll be able to explain to others how my force feels/
You need to get your weight up, add some meat to those three course meals/
And add another syllable to each of those rhymes/
I'm unkillable, I'm eatin' those lines/
this bitch needs to catch-up like he knows Heinz/
After one verse I'll leave you fearin this/
you don't have the skill to call yourself a lyricist/
My diss is this the stuff that hell brings/
but you're diss missed like a class when the bell rings!/




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#54

Posted 15 April 2005 - 11:19 PM

To written fire.

Hey written fire, you think you're on fire?/
Naw man, you just a trippin lier/
Act like you're a man, all you do is spam/
Tell it to you straight/
Bust your mic open before you get paid/
sh*t you haven't been laid since 5th grade/
Come on let's see something from you/
Oh wait, you practicin' in the loo?/
Tellin' you this boy, you just a toy/
Needs to be controlled/
And you gotta be parolled (What does parolled mean? tounge.gif )/


Yeah i can't rap. Turned out better than i expected though. tounge.gif

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#55

Posted 16 April 2005 - 12:04 AM

QUOTE
Hey written fire, you think you're on fire?/
Naw man, you just a trippin lier/
Act like you're a man, all you do is spam/
Tell it to you straight/
Bust your mic open before you get paid/
sh*t you haven't been laid since 5th grade/
Come on let's see something from you/
Oh wait, you practicin' in the loo?/
Tellin' you this boy, you just a toy/
Needs to be controlled/
And you gotta be parolled (What does parolled mean?  )/


One bar for you:

He said I hadn't gotten f*cked in a while, that sh*t's played/
His mommy was my teacher in fifth grade!/

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#56

Posted 17 April 2005 - 07:12 AM

This fool been gettin his G on/
Thinkin he gangsta by smackin around bitches, rookies, and peons/
C'mon fire, you barely have a challenge/
Im well calculated, but you can barely find even the balance/
I'll get a bucket of water and put your fire out/
You're lucky this is keystyle, if not, i'd close your mouth/
Give it a break, i told you're not the realest MC/
First spit i told you, all the kids wannabe me/
After that, you said the story was unlikely/
Had to bar me from the topic, too scared to fight me/
Put the mic down and go run off/
f*ck a .357, with the .380 we'll pop off.
You see im back in my groove, people like you were born to lose/
I drop better rhymes, you'd think my nikes were cement shoes/
But i'll give you your props, you got people get excited when the rhyme drops/
But sh*t, even hypemen get a little bit of the pops/
You're the subject of this spit, the punchline is the predicate/
You're almost on the top kid, you just ain't get better yet/
Have fun WF, slap around all the chumps and the bitches/
Come holla at me, and i'll leave your eyes with stiches/
Go ahead and dismiss a little cannon fodder/
When you want a real challenge, come holla at a monster/
I'll tear you apart, and you know this is for serious/
Don't let all the props drive your mind delerious/
Look me up W, im up in the yellow rhyme book/
You're a joke, you'll end up as my next hook/


You wanna holla, come at someone for real, drop me a PM. We'll set up a topic, and let all the kids vote on who's better down the line. Straight and serious.

ADJ
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#57

Posted 22 April 2005 - 08:26 PM

I didn't write this - It's graffitied onto a wall in Edinburgh (UK) and I thought it was pretty good:

We rock the show from Leith to Portabello/
Through Polworth, get mellow/
Even in the old town/
This is how it goes down/
My town/
Edinburgh/





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