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WrittenFire
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#1

Posted 10 April 2005 - 04:45 AM

Rap battling time. Honestly I don't give a sh*t how long your verse is, just keep in mind the longer it is the more watered down it is. I'll accept any challenge. If you are too pussy to spit first then just say so and I'll drop a verse.

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#2

Posted 10 April 2005 - 07:23 AM

Mic Check 1,2,1,2/
I'll leave all this MC's without a clue, including you/
WrittinFire? Im scared? Show us what you gone do./
Come prepared, bring ya rhymes/
You wan't an open challenge cause you want more time/
I come correct, i rock on the drop of a hat/
Im point blank, like you starting down the barrel of my gat/
But nah, lets keep this inpersonal/
Just spidey(god MC), versus you./
My lines just ruffies, drop like date rape/
And bring hate, that can compensate for challenges at any rate/
Now c'mon, you ain't really want to battle./
Keystyle kid, like the mouse holdin a baby rattle.


Spidey. leaves and see's how long forever and a day will be with this guy.


WrittenFire
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#3

Posted 10 April 2005 - 06:09 PM

Mic check, 3, 4, 3, 4/
I'm gonna blow this open, I need more C-4/
The illest here, I might be, I do this nightly/
and I actually have skills, so don't confuse me with Spidey/
I've witnessed more interesting lines in geometry/
Stop talking about guns, the only time you load clips is when you're looking at Internet pornography/
but we can go there, you can get shot in the chest/
my bullets don't care if you're rockin a vest/
I'll let dope MCs through, but I'm stoppin the rest/
MC God? That sh*t is tired/
This kid is fired/
I'm on the next level, I'm spittin' higher/
He doesn't have the skill to be in the same topic as WrittenFire/

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#4

Posted 10 April 2005 - 06:26 PM

Haha.

They were both good, but some of WrittenFire's lines were iffy..

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#5

Posted 10 April 2005 - 06:45 PM

Sucker, you get eaten' by desire//
You can't do sh*t, you should retire//
If you want someone good, I'm the one to hire//
It's the R, not writtenfire//
You ain't no rapper, you into science//
I'm the real thang', fightin' for the alliance//
When it gets dark, I'll go with you, take a long walk//
I kill you bloody, dump yo' body, in the gutter, I'm the gunner//
My style's greater, I hold the detonator//
I'm a faker hater, at least I ain't no traitor//
Your rhymes are rollin' outta, a translator//
Y'all being owned, by a kid, just because of the way I spit//
I'm into good sh*t, you like to knit//
You're wack, watch me breaking your neck//
You try to look good and act tough//
But your getting the f*ck out, when things get rough//
Enough is enough, you should've kept that in mind when you showed off//
You're name is writtenfire, but I'm ice cold//
Don't forget what I just told//
The last thing you'll see, is my shining colt//

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#6

Posted 10 April 2005 - 09:32 PM

I got two for you, and no I'm not a GANSTER, I'm kind of more like a WANGSTER, but I'm acctually asian though. Also there's many things that rhyme with Zeek so you can diss me really band. For exaple, geek, freak, and etc.

You might think your cool but you ain't/
I got on my computer and drew your om on paint/
Ohhh, Ouch, didn't that hurt/
You know it's true, your mom likes to flirt/
I'm wasting my time with you you know its true/
Why the heck am I talking to you/
Everyone hates you/
Do you know what this really sucks/
Guess who your mom likes to f*ck/
I'm sorry about that I couldn't help it/
It's just your mom made me knelt it/
I'm almost done with this song/
You can cry now/
Cause I hit you with an Asain Kung Pow/

I'm making my rhymes/
I'm making them good/
Everyone hates you in the neighborhood/
They're like, f*ck you says your neighbors/
I say, heck yes/
take out the taser/
So I go to my Escalade/
Then go inside/
This is my, very own, custom ride/
Your know, it's got all that sh*t inside/
Like Rolex Wheels, and Hyper Drive/
So now you know why im alive/
It's to, make you feel like you wanna die/
Because I made my own f*ckin ride/
And all you have is Four-Wheel Drive/

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#7

Posted 10 April 2005 - 10:17 PM Edited by Spidey., 10 April 2005 - 10:20 PM.

QUOTE (WrittenFire @ Apr 10 2005, 14:09)
Mic check, 3, 4, 3, 4/
I'm gonna blow this open, I need more C-4/
The illest here, I might be, I do this nightly/
and I actually have skills, so don't confuse me with Spidey/
I've witnessed more interesting lines in geometry/
Stop talking about guns, the only time you load clips is when you're looking at Internet pornography/
but we can go there, you can get shot in the chest/
my bullets don't care if you're rockin a vest/
I'll let dope MCs through, but I'm stoppin the rest/
MC God? That sh*t is tired/
This kid is fired/
I'm on the next level, I'm spittin' higher/
He doesn't have the skill to be in the same topic as WrittenFire/

Hah, Mic Check 5,6,7,8, 9 and 10/
Your rhymes are sin, face it you can't win/
You the illest with a cold, my lines are ebola/
It came close W, but my sh*t is just a bit bolder/
Go ahead guy, get some closure/
Me, you and the rest know this sh*t has been over/
You know geometry? Well, you got the wrong angle/
Face it, you just pick the wrong MC with to tangle/
I'll end your rhymes, and i don't need a song to do it/
This sh*t is Aquafina, like water it's straight fluid/
God MC? Damn right. But call me spidey/
Accept it, my rhymes are too heavy to be taken lightly/

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#8

Posted 10 April 2005 - 10:32 PM

mic check 5-6-5-6
this is a n00b open challenge 'n your considered a bitch

your sh*ts a michael jackson baby gettin thrown out the window
I am gonna smoke you like snoop smokes the indo

you act all hard but you really are a crier
the only sh*ts that tired is the name written fire

open challengin is tired so back up and lay off
the day you beat me is when the hawks make the playoffs



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#9

Posted 10 April 2005 - 11:37 PM

aye blud let me bring in some uk skill/
i bet as soon as you saw i was in the topic you started writting your will/
pretty boys like you dress to impress but im armed to kill/
but still you want more?/
rudeboy my lyrics will leave you f*cked up like a whore/
f*cked up and bloody like a virgin that got banged on the floor/
im number one at this cuz you couldn't beat number four/
so i suggest you get up out your chair and exit through the door/
sh*t im just raw.

fade13

my first time writtin a lyric but you still got slewed

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#10

Posted 10 April 2005 - 11:50 PM

Man i wish i never did the mic check. Everyone else doing it made it so lame.

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#11

Posted 10 April 2005 - 11:56 PM

You're all full of sh*t, and not a one of you is gangsta
Your pride in what you spit just makes you look like weak ass prankstas
You rap about your money, all your clothes, and wavin gats
But I've seen more personality in starving, gimp house cats
You don't know about the hood, cuz you're just a bunch of nerds
Feelin ballsy cuz some little bitch got owned from just your words
Quit the game and quit the lying, you're a failure, just quit trying
Seeing rhymes this bad reminds me of a kid that won't quit crying
Find a hobby, find a job, and find yourself a damn role model
Be a man, forget this sh*t, and call me if you want to squabble.

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#12

Posted 11 April 2005 - 12:00 AM

QUOTE (40ozFreak @ Apr 10 2005, 18:56)
You're all full of sh*t, and not a one of you is gangsta
Your pride in what you spit just makes you look like weak ass prankstas
You rap about your money, all your clothes, and wavin gats
But I've seen more personality in starving, gimp house cats
You don't know about the hood, cuz you're just a bunch of nerds
Feelin ballsy cuz some little bitch got owned from just your words
Quit the game and quit the lying, you're a failure, just quit trying
Seeing rhymes this bad reminds me of a kid that won't quit crying
Find a hobby, find a job, and find yourself a damn role model
Be a man, forget this sh*t, and call me if you want to squabble.

Word.

This man speaks the truth. I doubt a real gangsta would have a highpost count...

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#13

Posted 11 April 2005 - 12:08 AM

It's all in good rhymes so it isn't all true. Just because someone says someone else is a bitch doesn't mean it's true (in most cases tounge.gif ), right?

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#14

Posted 11 April 2005 - 12:31 AM

I'm takin scabs out with this loaded sh*t that I pack,
representin like a union man that always have yah back.
Yah back unless there's beef, and if there's beef I'll cut yah sack
--so deep I'll cut back and scrape the sh*t up off you're butt
Crack-- yah smoke some, chillin out you think it's fun.
Fun, till yah brain resembles the facade of a honey bun.
Listen hun, I don't wear clips that sh*t 'n' ammo is for fags,
I straight knock their sh*t so deep they fall back right into my body bags.
You like this? You can't touch this, you think yah bad like you wanna fight for the community
But I'm here to tell yah kid you better first try and reach yah puberty.


Yeah... I don't rap. blush.gif

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#15

Posted 11 April 2005 - 01:41 AM

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Hah, Mic Check 5,6,7,8, 9 and 10/
Your rhymes are sin, face it you can't win/
You the illest with a cold, my lines are ebola/
It came close W, but my sh*t is just a bit bolder/
Go ahead guy, get some closure/
Me, you and the rest know this sh*t has been over/
You know geometry? Well, you got the wrong angle/
Face it, you just pick the wrong MC with to tangle/
I'll end your rhymes, and i don't need a song to do it/
This sh*t is Aquafina, like water it's straight fluid/
God MC? Damn right. But call me spidey/
Accept it, my rhymes are too heavy to be taken lightly/


My computer-screen lyricism eats ya eyes/
spidey cheats and lies/
His bitch weeps and cries/
because she just found out he sleeps with guys/
I leave ya defeated by my original styles/
and deleted like digital files/
Your rap style is sh*tty, mine is cleana
Your lines aren't ebola, they're diarrhea/
I get online and get evil for people/
im illegal minus the eagle/
take you to school, the lesson is on/
pick up mics cause wrecks with my arm/
i call you son cuz i had sex with your mom/

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#16

Posted 11 April 2005 - 03:27 AM

QUOTE (40ozFreak @ Apr 10 2005, 19:56)
You're all full of sh*t, and not a one of you is gangsta
Your pride in what you spit just makes you look like weak ass prankstas
You rap about your money, all your clothes, and wavin gats
But I've seen more personality in starving, gimp house cats
You don't know about the hood, cuz you're just a bunch of nerds
Feelin ballsy cuz some little bitch got owned from just your words
Quit the game and quit the lying, you're a failure, just quit trying
Seeing rhymes this bad reminds me of a kid that won't quit crying
Find a hobby, find a job, and find yourself a damn role model
Be a man, forget this sh*t, and call me if you want to squabble.

Get back to work motherf*cker stay out of this/
I can post as quick as you can talk this sh*t/
You know nothing about nothin, don't throw stones at the glass house/
Turn around, back the f*ck out, or i'll close your mouth/
You ain't kickin no dead horse, but you close to f*ckin that moose.
I'll rock you, the forums, the mic, and the booth./
What's funny is that you actually thought you were droppin truth/
Dickhead (get it?), i'll even knock your tooth loose./
To me rappings just a verb, i'll kill you an instant with my words./
Less about me, and do more of the moderation./
Your bullsh*t in here is really testin my patience./
Now go away because you know sh*t about my hood./
Come up to brooklyn 40, i'll show you what's really good./



Don't take it to heart either, ain't no love in a battle.

Anyways,

You're pretty good writtenfire. I might type a return to that later on.

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#17

Posted 11 April 2005 - 03:58 AM

Written killed Spidey twice, haha that sh*t is funny...







QUOTE
Half of yall talkin bout guns have never seen a pistol//
And I got ya girl runnin' around my lap like its name was Bristol//
f*ck a mic check I'll flow even if they sh*t out of order//
Coz I got people flockin to my raps like Mexicans runnin' across the boarder//
And tell me what you know about the hood Spidey?//
You explaining what flippin' a brick is? Not likely//
You've never been in the struggle for one second//
I'll knock you down in a fight and you wont get up just like your disfunctional erection//
You talk about holdin' gats but you've never even blazed sh*t//
Fam I got more pumps than a gas station//


Keystyle is weak as f*ck.

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#18

Posted 11 April 2005 - 04:06 AM

Some nice drops up in here. wink.gif

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#19

Posted 11 April 2005 - 04:22 AM

QUOTE (JuVeNiLe @ Apr 10 2005, 23:58)

Keystyle is weak as f*ck.

Indeed.

Nah, im kiddin that was pretty good. Now go on and flip ya bricks to push ya product, you gangsta. tounge.gif


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#20

Posted 11 April 2005 - 05:08 AM

Yo 40ozFreak, its surprising that i got a hater/
But im not shocked that he's a moderator/
check out his avatar, this guys a dick/
GTA: Mars will be out by the time he finds a chick/
I'ma make you hate this rhyme/
I was f*cking around earlier but i aint this time/
punch you so hard in the chest my knuckles scrape ya spine/
you start a battle, you should stick wit it/
how you gonna insult our rhymes while rhyming, you hypocrite/
this dude is straight up chicken sh*t/

We need to organize. Let's start a new post for some real battles. I don't feel the need to battle 40ozFreak or Spidey since we've already had at it, but I'm challenging anyone else. Rules will be the same, but I'll make a new post for it and we can have it voted on.

Challenging: Anyone.

Accept it and I'll set it up.

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#21

Posted 11 April 2005 - 11:36 AM

I have to say, those were awesome, I don't rhyme, no chance of it but I enjoy reading them, nice one smile.gif

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#22

Posted 11 April 2005 - 03:29 PM

You don't need a new topic just quote the rhyme that you're responding to.

To many battle topics make baby jesus cry.

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#23

Posted 11 April 2005 - 04:12 PM

QUOTE (WrittenFire @ Apr 11 2005, 05:08)
Yo 40ozFreak, its surprising that i got a hater/
But im not shocked that he's a moderator/
check out his avatar, this guys a dick/
GTA: Mars will be out by the time he finds a chick/
I'ma make you hate this rhyme/
I was f*cking around earlier but i aint this time/
punch you so hard in the chest my knuckles scrape ya spine/
you start a battle, you should stick wit it/
how you gonna insult our rhymes while rhyming, you hypocrite/
this dude is straight up chicken sh*t/

We need to organize. Let's start a new post for some real battles. I don't feel the need to battle 40ozFreak or Spidey since we've already had at it, but I'm challenging anyone else. Rules will be the same, but I'll make a new post for it and we can have it voted on.

Challenging: Anyone.

Accept it and I'll set it up.

Just continu in this topic. Here I go again. =]

You're all actin' gangsta, but all you do is masturbate//
You're hangin' out in the crib, with you're little play mate//
Sucking his dick, and still you say you're straight//
While you spit it out on him, you'll realise I'm a heavyweight//
A loc'd out motherf*cker, that you can't take//
Tryin' to take me down means desecrate//
I could already take you when I was eight//
I'm a guy that you can't irritate//
I'm making all the money here, I own a real estate//
People get to know you as a gay, all across the state//
You tried to find out why, but you can't run away from fate//
You're a fake ass wannabe, tried to join a conjugate//
As you see me drivin' away, you check my numberplate//
You say out loud what it says: "to-la-te"//

And that for a white guy, eh? =P

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#24

Posted 11 April 2005 - 04:48 PM

WF is pretty damn good.

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#25

Posted 11 April 2005 - 05:00 PM

bunch of rookies in here, frontin like ya wanna get key'd
couldn't dulpicate flow if your verse went through a copier feed
retardation is a disease from which clearly you're infected
better tell your butt buddy, Spidey, since he likes it unprotected
see I'm wondering why you selected the name WrittenFire
more like the smoke before....and your vocab's a quagmire
a comeback would be useless like good pussy on a dike
get ya wieght up next time you step in the ring to fight

Thought I'd join in.

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#26

Posted 11 April 2005 - 11:45 PM

QUOTE
You're all actin' gangsta, but all you do is masturbate//
You're hangin' out in the crib, with you're little play mate//
Sucking his dick, and still you say you're straight//
While you spit it out on him, you'll realise I'm a heavyweight//
A loc'd out motherf*cker, that you can't take//
Tryin' to take me down means desecrate//
I could already take you when I was eight//
I'm a guy that you can't irritate//
I'm making all the money here, I own a real estate//
People get to know you as a gay, all across the state//
You tried to find out why, but you can't run away from fate//
You're a fake ass wannabe, tried to join a conjugate//
As you see me drivin' away, you check my numberplate//
You say out loud what it says: "to-la-te"//



You remind me of an AOL chatroom;/
start off okay, but you get whack soon/
I'll have forgotten you by tomorrow but you'll remember me/
i gotta do more then beat my enemy/
I gotta murder him/
I gotta make sure im hurtin him/
Once your dead, i'll believe ive battled victoriously/
When im done with you, the only rappers you'll see are Pac and Nuturious B/
this mind of mine is beautiful/
i'll clone you so i can kill you again at your funeral/
regardless of the weather, im the illest and that's what this poem proves/
Put it together, you own estate and I own n00bs/


QUOTE

bunch of rookies in here, frontin like ya wanna get key'd
couldn't dulpicate flow if your verse went through a copier feed
retardation is a disease from which clearly you're infected
better tell your butt buddy, Spidey, since he likes it unprotected
see I'm wondering why you selected the name WrittenFire
more like the smoke before....and your vocab's a quagmire
a comeback would be useless like good pussy on a dike
get ya wieght up next time you step in the ring to fight


You front like your hardcore/
you about as hard as a wet piece of cardboard/
the only thing you ever key'd is a car door/
You was going smoothely but im the red light/
you gonna lose, dead right/
your sorry ass doesn't belong on this web site/
I spit tight/
I'm killin' 'em all this night/
get it right, im as useful as a gun in a fist fight/

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#27

Posted 12 April 2005 - 12:10 AM

QUOTE
WF is pretty damn good.


Yeah thats what I think too. At first when I saw this topic I thought it was another n00b just waiting to be owned by half the forums but he actually wasn't half bad.

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#28

Posted 12 April 2005 - 12:37 AM

Crazy as a motherf*cker is what you are/
I look at you and I can see you ain't up to par/
The only place I'll find you is at the bar/
I'll leave you with a physical and emotional scar/
You're so little in this world I could fit you in a jar/
Pimp bitches like me only smoke cigars/
It's funny how you think you're a star/
But you're really wack just like a broken down car/

I haven't tried rhyming everything in a while.

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#29

Posted 12 April 2005 - 01:03 AM Edited by WrittenFire, 12 April 2005 - 01:07 AM.

QUOTE
Crazy as a motherf*cker is what you are/
I look at you and I can see you ain't up to par/
The only place I'll find you is at the bar/
I'll leave you with a physical and emotional scar/
You're so little in this world I could fit you in a jar/
Pimp bitches like me only smoke cigars/
It's funny how you think you're a star/
But you're really wack just like a broken down car/


My rap is something you can't get passed/
Your not ready to handle what im typing, it'll make your eyes slit fast/
and give your face whiplash/
Straight up you're a bitchass/
I'm smokin now Har/
quite far from a broken down car/
leave you looking like another broken rookie/
all the truly ill lines you've ever written can't fill up a fortune cookie/

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#30

Posted 12 April 2005 - 01:09 AM

QUOTE (WrittenFire @ Apr 11 2005, 18:45)
You front like your hardcore/
you about as hard as a wet piece of cardboard/
the only thing you ever key'd is a car door/
You was going smoothely but im the red light/
you gonna lose, dead right/
your sorry ass doesn't belong on this web site/
I spit tight/
I'm killin' 'em all this night/
get it right, im as useful as a gun in a fist fight/

That was ass.




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