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#1

Posted 25 March 2005 - 03:54 PM Edited by Com:Sense, 25 March 2005 - 03:57 PM.

Right, I saw a gap in the battles so I decided to steam on in...



My eyes light up and shine when its rhyme time
I define mine by heavyweight curse bursts that age well like fine wine,
Its kinda plain the reason theres no C in your name
Is cos you dont C sense to Com Sense your nonsense,
This conference Ive called is to pull you from this
Delusion that your rhymes might contest mine
Honestly your lines dont even pass for comedy,
Its like they fell out your ass when there was a break in sodomy,
So honour me now, bow down to the man
with the crown on his head, platinum mic in his hand
demanding your bitch ass get up make a stand
Instead of getting all nervous and getting temp banned on purpose,
Im surfacing with lyrics complicated like physics,
Stating the skills that you got I could count on one digit,
Or maybe Its half Ill come back tell you later,
Spit it at you while laughing at your rhyme on posh paper...

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Posted 25 March 2005 - 04:30 PM

Whats with all the people going at King Kapone...Let the man be you nooBs...KK fried one guy and now youre lookin to be thrashed. Your rhymes were alright? your flow was kinda good but your rhymes were all over the place and some of them didn't even rhyme. Now that all the battles are coming out of the woodwork I think its time for a tourney Let's GO!

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Posted 25 March 2005 - 05:37 PM

Hmm maybe I was a bit hasty I just thought that it was a free for all. I cant really retract it but Kapone can reply when he wants, it being Easter weekend I would imagine people are pretty busy.

Tournament sounds good, have you had any before and if so who won it?

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Let's GO!


Thats the spirit

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Posted 25 March 2005 - 05:43 PM

I may start another tournie, not sure. There's been five before, Mateo has won a couple, Meth, Eviscero.


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Posted 26 March 2005 - 02:34 AM

A'ight, this ain't poetry center. Take that to GameFAQs.

Oh and I skimmed most of it. First bar, the ending.. Fabolous said that. Good going.

And most of it's alright. Posh paper. A peach/white backround is posh paper on graphics, guys. Make a note of that.

No disrespect intended. I imagine I got a bullseye on my back. People wan' see if they can keep up with me. No doubt, just wait for that tourney. Hopefully nothing gets in my way of competing.

I never knew I said "I'll take on anyone who challenges me". I'm pretty sure I said the exact opposite. As much as my PPD can fool ya, I don't spend alotta time here. I can make 13 posts in 15 minutes. Don't mean sh*t.

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Posted 26 March 2005 - 03:41 AM

so are you gonna do this Kapone? i think you should, based on that thing with bizzo, i'd say you could rip him.

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Posted 26 March 2005 - 08:20 PM

@ Com Sense, that was pretty tight. The flow is unique even though it was kinda all over the place.

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 06:00 PM Edited by Com:Sense, 27 March 2005 - 07:05 PM.

First of all, Kapone you said no disrepect intended. Well f*ck you you disrespectful wanker cos you could have actually read it properly first.

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Oh and I skimmed most of it


Yeah, real respect there. You say you drop two mixtapes a month or whatever yet you aint gonna reply. And then you got the nerve to say Im repeating sh*t Fabulous said. Well I dont f*cking listen to Fabulous and I wouldnt embarass my C.D player with it (though he did drop a tight verse on the Clipse album)

Anyway, I got annoyed so I wrote this earlier. You should read it.



Although you`ve dropped nothing Ive already tore it,
With rap poison so deadly theres no antidote ready for it,
Call it what you will, poetry or rap
Fact is Im so ill Doctors offer me pills to relax
So this cats back on track now with verse two for the smackdown,
Your wack now cos ya didnt react to my rap now
Im guessing the reason you chose to ignore em,
is your more GTA Boards than Gta Forums
You little moron, little weak motherf*cker,
I didnt cuss in my first rhyme but this is another
chapter I had to come at ya with raps that enrapture the crowds
show my stature and blast ya,
So after the chat youll admit Im the master, the greatest
Ill chat raps with stat attacks check the graphs for the latest
Youll see im at the top your at the foot with the fakest,
aching to rise up one day but youll suck dick to make it


P.S your posh paper sucks



@striker thanks for that, I know my flows a bit abstract but I try to stay away from the usual end of one line rhyming with the end of the next. Sometimes it works a lot of times It can be a bit messy.

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Posted 27 March 2005 - 07:33 PM

You must be English, that's a real English way to drop. Anyway, chill the f*ck out, this ain't what battlin' is for, and that ain't the way its gonna go in music chat...so chill.


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Posted 27 March 2005 - 07:50 PM

QUOTE (Osirus @ Mar 27 2005, 19:33)
You must be English, that's a real English way to drop. Anyway, chill the f*ck out, this ain't what battlin' is for, and that ain't the way its gonna go in music chat...so chill.


Yeh, I didnt really want to be so nasty about it I just felt he asked for it.

[/QUOTE]Oh and I skimmed most of it. First bar, the ending.. Fabolous said that. Good going[QUOTE]

That annoyed me. Fact is If he had replied with a verse and people had judged his to be better than mine I would say fair play to the lad, no hard feelings and all that, but he acted a cock so he got a response.





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Posted 27 March 2005 - 09:56 PM

I asked fo' it? Homie, you gotta be crazy.

I run a label. Understand? I gotta do sh*t, in my life, 24 hours a day to keep this sh*t runnin' through. Can't let cats lose interest.

I got better sh*t to do then hang on the net answerin' calls from those who envy so much they jus' gotta try and get a piece.

I drop 2 mixtapes every month. I got dedication to my label. Puttin' it's name out.

Battlin' you is gettin' my label what? Fake fame on a forum? What you gon' do? Purchase my sh*t? Oh we can do that.

I see your sh*t, homie. I feel your aggravation.

I gotta do my thing though. My own thing. Make money to live, homie.

I ain't makin' money pussy footin around with you.

See me at the tournament.

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Posted 29 March 2005 - 06:32 PM

QUOTE (King Kapone @ Mar 27 2005, 21:56)
I asked fo' it? Homie, you gotta be crazy.

I run a label. Understand? I gotta do sh*t, in my life, 24 hours a day to keep this sh*t runnin' through. Can't let cats lose interest.

I got better sh*t to do then hang on the net answerin' calls from those who envy so much they jus' gotta try and get a piece.

I drop 2 mixtapes every month. I got dedication to my label. Puttin' it's name out.

Battlin' you is gettin' my label what? Fake fame on a forum? What you gon' do? Purchase my sh*t? Oh we can do that.

I see your sh*t, homie. I feel your aggravation.

I gotta do my thing though. My own thing. Make money to live, homie.

I ain't makin' money pussy footin around with you.

See me at the tournament.

Hmmm, seems like a cop out to me. We all got sh*t to do in our lives, I got problems at the moment that would make your face bleed, but I just get on with it. After saying all that I noticed you then made 45 posts in a day. 45 posts.

And what the f*ck you talking about envy for? I dont know you.Dont wanna be you. I write better rhymes than you. Fact.

Listen, I only went at you cos I thought it was expected after the whole Bizzo thing. I thought you talked the talk so you would walk the walk, but you couldnt even spend a spare hour to write a rhyme.Whatever.

Good luck with the label though, and I mean that earnestly. Its good to see people with dedication, thats something I cant hate on. Ill check you at the tournament.Peace.

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Posted 29 March 2005 - 07:37 PM

QUOTE (Com:Sense @ Mar 29 2005, 13:32)
QUOTE (King Kapone @ Mar 27 2005, 21:56)
I asked fo' it? Homie, you gotta be crazy.

I run a label. Understand? I gotta do sh*t, in my life, 24 hours a day to keep this sh*t runnin' through. Can't let cats lose interest.

I got better sh*t to do then hang on the net answerin' calls from those who envy so much they jus' gotta try and get a piece.

I drop 2 mixtapes every month. I got dedication to my label. Puttin' it's name out.

Battlin' you is gettin' my label what? Fake fame on a forum? What you gon' do? Purchase my sh*t? Oh we can do that.

I see your sh*t, homie. I feel your aggravation.

I gotta do my thing though. My own thing. Make money to live, homie.

I ain't makin' money pussy footin around with you.

See me at the tournament.

Hmmm, seems like a cop out to me. We all got sh*t to do in our lives, I got problems at the moment that would make your face bleed, but I just get on with it. After saying all that I noticed you then made 45 posts in a day. 45 posts.

And what the f*ck you talking about envy for? I dont know you.Dont wanna be you. I write better rhymes than you. Fact.

Listen, I only went at you cos I thought it was expected after the whole Bizzo thing. I thought you talked the talk so you would walk the walk, but you couldnt even spend a spare hour to write a rhyme.Whatever.

Good luck with the label though, and I mean that earnestly. Its good to see people with dedication, thats something I cant hate on. Ill check you at the tournament.Peace.

Man, you think highly of ya'self with no reason to. Your rhymes aren't as good as mine. I'm not trynna be cocky with it but your rhymes are all over the place. Maybe an abstract style is what you want but sh*t, it lacks some rhythm and makes you look like a beginner.

And don't think I'm not facing you 'cause I'm scared. This whole board can challenge me and shiet, man, all I'ma do is repeat that I'm busy. The Bizzo sh*t was personal, I had my rep. ridin' on that one. This one is you just checkin' if you can hang.

Take a minute each day and pray that you get the luck of the draw to face me in the tournament. You'll see what's a cop out and what's not. What's real and what's not. Who's the best and who's not.

Might as well add substance.

"Fact is Im so ill Doctors offer me pills to relax"

You got ADHD? Nothin' wrong with it but I know rappers who'll call you out on that sh*t.

"chapter I had to come at ya with raps that enrapture the crowds
show my stature and blast ya"

^ Where's the rhythm?

"Ill chat raps with stat attacks check the graphs for the latest"

You probably can't even spit that without studderin' or gettin' way off beat.

"Youll see im at the top your at the foot with the fakest,
aching to rise up one day but youll suck dick to make it"

Hmm, you're the one who wants to face me so badly. Who's suckin' dick?

You have to expect the hostility just as well as you said I shoulda expected challenges like I'm supposed to holla at everyone who wants to face me.

Thanks for that earnest wish of good luck. So what, you just rap for the hell of it? Rap with anger, chat with kindness?



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Posted 29 March 2005 - 08:30 PM

I gave this topic a bad rating cause these things are cluttering the music forum when ONE thread should be used for them all. A battle here thread if you will. I am not going to make it because Osirus seems to not like me ( whatsthat.gif ) and I would not be writing but I would be more than happy to judge a battle since I have no particular interest in any one persons rhymes.

I didn't like how your flow was all over the place and you just rhymed the sh*t that rhymed and continued what should have been on the last bar on the next one. But it was some good disses. Re-organize and come back with something better.

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Posted 28 April 2005 - 03:20 AM

QUOTE (Com:Sense @ Mar 27 2005, 18:00)
Although you`ve dropped nothing Ive already tore it,
With rap poison so deadly theres no antidote ready for it,
Call it what you will, poetry or rap
Fact is Im so ill Doctors offer me pills to relax
So this cats back on track now with verse two for the smackdown,
Your wack now cos ya didnt react to my rap now
Im guessing the reason you chose to ignore em,
is your more GTA Boards than Gta Forums
You little moron, little weak motherf*cker,
I didnt cuss in my first rhyme but this is another
chapter I had to come at ya with raps that enrapture the crowds
show my stature and blast ya,
So after the chat youll admit Im the master, the greatest
Ill chat raps with stat attacks check the graphs for the latest
Youll see im at the top your at the foot with the fakest,
aching to rise up one day but youll suck dick to make it

man are you serious/
your rhymes are so wak you must be delerious/
you claimin your the hot sh*t?/
but really your a 10 year old wit no hair on your dick/
look kid, I could really teach you something/
but in this world no sh*t comes for nothing/
see half your lines dont even rhyme/
sh*t, if you made a record I wouldnt pay a F***en dime/
dont even try to compare your self to me/
cos my lyrical talent is deadly/
I can kill you with just one verse/
and just to make sure your dead I'll blow up your herse/
so little kiddie, you better not rap again/
unless you really wanna get lyrically slain/

sly.gif

Im sorry but your rap sucks, half of it dont even rhyme. confused.gif

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Posted 28 April 2005 - 03:36 AM

Heh, your rap gave me a nauseating feeling while I was reading it, thought it was post worthy.

Also, isnt bumping topics this old against the rules?

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Posted 28 April 2005 - 04:10 AM

QUOTE (Vercetti04/05 @ Apr 28 2005, 03:20)
QUOTE (Com:Sense @ Mar 27 2005, 18:00)
Although you`ve dropped nothing Ive already tore it,
With rap poison so deadly theres no antidote ready for it,
Call it what you will, poetry or rap
Fact is Im so ill Doctors offer me pills to relax
So this cats back on track now with verse two for the smackdown,
Your wack now cos ya didnt react to my rap now
Im guessing the reason you chose to ignore em,
is your more GTA Boards than Gta Forums
You little moron, little weak motherf*cker,
I didnt cuss in my first rhyme but this is another
chapter I had to come at ya with raps that enrapture the crowds
show my stature and blast ya,
So after the chat youll admit Im the master, the greatest
Ill chat raps with stat attacks check the graphs for the latest
Youll see im at the top your at the foot with the fakest,
aching to rise up one day but youll  suck dick to make it

man are you serious/
your rhymes are so wak you must be delerious/
you claimin your the hot sh*t?/
but really your a 10 year old wit no hair on your dick/
look kid, I could really teach you something/
but in this world no sh*t comes for nothing/
see half your lines dont even rhyme/
sh*t, if you made a record I wouldnt pay a F***en dime/
dont even try to compare your self to me/
cos my lyrical talent is deadly/
I can kill you with just one verse/
and just to make sure your dead I'll blow up your herse/
so little kiddie, you better not rap again/
unless you really wanna get lyrically slain/

sly.gif

Im sorry but your rap sucks, half of it dont even rhyme. confused.gif

That was...uh...ahem...terrible.

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Posted 28 April 2005 - 03:41 PM

QUOTE (Vercetti04/05 @ Apr 27 2005, 22:20)
blah, blah, sh*t rhymes

sly.gif

Im sorry but your rap sucks, half of it dont even rhyme. confused.gif

Why'd you bump this n00b?

Damn I miss Osi.

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Posted 28 April 2005 - 11:12 PM

QUOTE (BrassKnuckles @ Apr 28 2005, 04:10)
QUOTE (Vercetti04/05 @ Apr 28 2005, 03:20)
QUOTE (Com:Sense @ Mar 27 2005, 18:00)
Although you`ve dropped nothing Ive already tore it,
With rap poison so deadly theres no antidote ready for it,
Call it what you will, poetry or rap
Fact is Im so ill Doctors offer me pills to relax
So this cats back on track now with verse two for the smackdown,
Your wack now cos ya didnt react to my rap now
Im guessing the reason you chose to ignore em,
is your more GTA Boards than Gta Forums
You little moron, little weak motherf*cker,
I didnt cuss in my first rhyme but this is another
chapter I had to come at ya with raps that enrapture the crowds
show my stature and blast ya,
So after the chat youll admit Im the master, the greatest
Ill chat raps with stat attacks check the graphs for the latest
Youll see im at the top your at the foot with the fakest,
aching to rise up one day but youll  suck dick to make it

man are you serious/
your rhymes are so wak you must be delerious/
you claimin your the hot sh*t?/
but really your a 10 year old wit no hair on your dick/
look kid, I could really teach you something/
but in this world no sh*t comes for nothing/
see half your lines dont even rhyme/
sh*t, if you made a record I wouldnt pay a F***en dime/
dont even try to compare your self to me/
cos my lyrical talent is deadly/
I can kill you with just one verse/
and just to make sure your dead I'll blow up your herse/
so little kiddie, you better not rap again/
unless you really wanna get lyrically slain/

sly.gif

Im sorry but your rap sucks, half of it dont even rhyme. confused.gif

That was...uh...ahem...terrible.

care to drop something better then wise guy? that wasnt my best drop, I was just hittin back at the british mc who cant rap for sh**

...waiting for your drop...come on...lets see what you got that_guy2057_evilgrin.gif

PS, sorry about the bump




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