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Posted 17 July 2004 - 01:35 PM Edited by aDeFXuK, 17 July 2004 - 04:01 PM.

I give you....

The YardBitch!

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Special Thanks to STM for all the help he has given me colgate.gif !

Sadistic thought of the name tounge.gif

still open to suggestions on the name

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Posted 17 July 2004 - 01:37 PM

Woot! Cookies cookie.gif cookie.gif cookie.gif <3D

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Posted 17 July 2004 - 01:47 PM

nice... a lawnmower haha.. but may i suggest adding a flat suface behind the grill with an engine texture and to sort out the dreadful front lights? smile.gif apart from that looks good...

this is ur 1st release innit? cookie:

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Posted 17 July 2004 - 02:49 PM

there is no prob with the light, its because of the angle.

instead of the face of the light being flat its more like this:


instead of this:


thats why it looks messed up wink.gif

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Posted 17 July 2004 - 03:42 PM

Good job. cookie.gif I really like the blades on the bottom. The lights do seem a bit too bright for me but that just may be me. Overall its a great job But you should maybe call it the john deer or something .I don't understand where its supposed to go on all the grass lands . Someone should put it on a farm or something rah.gif

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Posted 17 July 2004 - 05:43 PM

From the pics I see a few things that could be improved. It looks similar to the VC baggage but I dont think its the same. Improve the lights, maybe make them round with a edging around and have the round light in the middle, I dont know do something though. Put something behind the grill. Make the wheel arches better maybe put a slight edging on them with more polys instead of them looking like paper. I think maybe try and make it rounder and the front part color looks different to the rest of the vehicle. Also I dont know where this is gonna be used at all, usally cars like this (special vehicles) are made for a certain purpose. Hopefully it will fit in somewhere.

Added it to the vehicle list btw.

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Posted 17 July 2004 - 07:03 PM

The wheel arches are way to sharp, they should be more rounder and not that thin.

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Posted 17 July 2004 - 07:32 PM

You need to round off your sharp corners with more polies and better texturing. Don't just spray dirt over the thing, but use the texture to suggest curves.

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Posted 17 July 2004 - 07:46 PM

Instead of calling it a John Deere, why not call it O-Deere? (Oh dear...) That's what people must think when they see it coming towards them... lol.
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Posted 17 July 2004 - 09:24 PM

ha, ha, now we've got a lawn mower to mow the grass on all those empty lot's lol.gif
on a more serious note, nice work aDeFXuK wink.gif

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Posted 18 July 2004 - 02:19 PM

QUOTE (Gforce @ Jul 17 2004, 21:24)
ha, ha, now we've got a lawn mower to mow the grass on all those empty lot's lol.gif


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Now onto the park!

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Posted 18 July 2004 - 03:13 PM

Another couple of points this looks like a bug not a lawn mower from the back, make it red with black spots on.
Also please if you include a piucture in the zip file give it as a jpeg or it increases the size by quite alot.

Its an intresting drive though. smile.gif Hopefully you can fix up all the points people commented on and it will be great.
Now it just needs to fit in somewhere/somehow.

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Posted 18 July 2004 - 03:21 PM

ok, i will do that when i get time wink.gif great pics btw and thanks for the feedback smile.gif

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